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Detailed description of crimes on newspaper and TV can have bad consequences on society, so this kind of information should be restricted in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Televisions and newspapers are two of the most significant sources of information for modern people, which may both contain some detailed information concerning crimes. Some people claim that the detailed account of committing crimes presented on these social media could bring about negative effects on society and thus should be limited. This, however, from my perspective, is an exaggeration. I am convinced that one should adopt different policies according to the situations.
【開頭段的展開】背景句+題目改寫+個人觀點陳述
「詞匯指導」
1.detailed information concerning crimes/ detailed account of committing crimes/ details about crimes 關于犯罪的細節(jié)信息
2. bring about negative effects on/ adversely affect/ have adverse impacts on 對……產生不利影響
3. I am convinced 我相信
4.from one's perspective 在某人看來
For one thing, when it comes to newspapers or television programmes intended for adults, information related to crimes can be allowed. Adults are capable of making judgments on what is right or wrong. Being exposed to the details of crimes enables adults to know more about the ways in which crimes are committed, which will help them to distinguish and avoid the potential traps. Seldom will they choose to mimic what the wrongdoers do.
That being said, the detailed description of crimes should be strictly regulated in the shows and columns specifically designed for children, who are more likely to imitate the deeds and do something negative to society. Kids, curious in nature, once presented with much information with regard to crimes, may be induced to do the same. This, undeniably, pose risks to other kids or other members of the society.
【主體段的展開】主體句（Topic sentence）+支撐句（Supporting sentences）
【支撐句的展開方式】因果项滑，舉例，對比涯贞，類比枪狂，讓步危喉，假設
「詞匯指導」
1.When it comes to 當提到……時
2.television programmes intended for adults /children 專門面向成年人/兒童的電視節(jié)目
3.information related to crimes 與犯罪有關的信息
4.be capable of doing sth. 有能力做某事
5.make judgements on what is right or wrong 能判斷對錯
6.enable sb. to know more about the ways in which crimes are committed 讓某人更多地了解犯罪手段
7.distinguish and avoid the potential traps 識別和規(guī)避潛在陷阱
8.mimic what the wrongdoers do 模仿錯誤行為
9.shows and columns specifically designed for children 專門面向兒童的節(jié)目和欄目
10.be curious in nature 天性好奇
11.once presented with much information with regard to crimes 一旦過多接觸犯罪信息
12.be induced to do the same被引誘做相同的事情
To sum up, whether strict rules restricting the description of what criminals have done should be established or not depends on the situations and the target audience.
【總結段】總結立場，不出現(xiàn)新信息摘完，注意表達方式的多樣化
whether...or not depends on the situations and the target audience 是否……取決于場景和目標受眾
strict rules restricting the description of what criminals have done 嚴格限制犯罪細節(jié)描述的規(guī)則
