作文：
Harmful Plagiarism In academic field in China
As is known to all， Plagiarism is becoming more and more popular in academic field in our country普舆， Which brings serious hurt to the creative and technology.
Firstly， Plagiarism don't respect the author's effort which will hurt the creative thinking. Secondly, plagiarism destroy the academic atmosphere and environment. Peculiarism is a Dishonest behavior and set a bad example to the society. Thirdly, plagiarism is harmful to the 國際形象 Of China颜阐。
In conclusion, plagiarism is a dishonest behaviour which will influence in long time. This phenomenon must be stopped in order to make the academic environment become more and more healthy."
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@華吉俊133????2??1? 給您批改了下作文：總體來說，結(jié)構(gòu)完整有條理吓肋，但是文章還是有很大的進步空間，第一：出現(xiàn)了部分語法錯誤：例如：Which brings serious hurt to the creative and technology瑰艘，and前后連接了形容詞和名詞是鬼，可以將前面的creative改為creation或者creative thinking。第二：論點展開的比較簡單紫新，大部分都是個人觀點均蜜，沒有實例或者事實，不夠有說服力芒率《诙總體得分為10分
