Dear teachers,
Good morning, everyone!
Every good family needs a good family style. In every happy( and:兩個(gè)形容詞之間要用and連接 )big family, it will be warm because of the company of mom and dad, but(but it will) also (be)( But連接兩個(gè)句子,前后都要求是完整的結(jié)構(gòu))accompanied by the harmonious atmosphere of (a)family style.(style用的是單數(shù)形式私杜,前面要加a)
A good family style can make a child grow up well, and I live in such a good family style. At home, parents will inevitably quarrel because of some bumps and bruits, but they never accuse each other, scold, more show in front of me is their rational sides. At ordinary times at home my mother will often nagging in the school should be how to respect the teachers and students, (表達(dá)太過(guò)于復(fù)雜繁瑣屯阀,演講者自己念起來(lái)很繞口,聽者聽起來(lái)更加難理解磷杏,建議換成: My mother always? talks me about how to respect my teachers and students at school )more will talk about the truth of a step back, for a long time in my mind will also appear from time to time these words, not so much she was born to me and raise my mother, as she is the first mentor in my life.(建議換成更簡(jiǎn)單的表達(dá)方式:and? I always? remember? my mother's words and she is my friend? as well as? my teacher . )
I always feel that this time of the day is the summary of the day. Of course, the etiquette at the dinner table must be followed. My mother always warned (warms)me about the following points:
1, eat don't Wolf down, mouth can't make a squawking sound.( Don't eat too quickly )
2. It is strictly prohibited to speak loudly while eating.
3. Don't raise your legs.
Although there are many rules, but it is because of these shackles let me grow up better.
(? Although 和but 不能同時(shí)使用在一個(gè)句子中,像shackles 這類詞匯太復(fù)雜捏卓,盡量不要用极祸。 Although there? are? many rules, they make me grow up better? )Therefore, we should construct a harmonious family style. Parents should learn (how)to set a good example at home and(they? should) also( learn how to ) maintain a close relationship with their children. In front of the children, they should learn (how)to restrain their bad feelings. Children should also learn(how)to put themselves in their parents' shoes to understand,( 建議換成簡(jiǎn)單的表達(dá):Children should understand their parents from their place), And they should try to do their best, show in front of their parents.
( and they should:兩個(gè)并列句中的主語(yǔ)不能省略
( That's all 怠晴,一般結(jié)束時(shí)都會(huì)運(yùn)用上這樣一句話遥金,用中文來(lái)表達(dá)就是以上就是我想跟大家分享的內(nèi)容)Thank you!