詞匯
1.variety/v??ra??t?/CET4 TEM4
several different sorts of the same thing同一事物的不同種類,在文中指的是作家寫出廢話的多樣性
2.summon/?s?m?n/CET6 TEM4 (summoning,summoned,summons)V-TIf you?summon?someone, you order them to come to you. 召喚——表達(dá)需要把某人叫來的時(shí)候族檬,可以同意替換call
3.identify/a??d?nt??fa?/CET4 TEM4 (identifying,identified,identifies)
V-TIf you canidentifysomeone or something, you are able to recognize them or distinguish them from others. 識(shí)別——我對(duì)這個(gè)意思不熟悉渡处,誤以為能用understand替換,查字典之后發(fā)現(xiàn)完全不可以腰素,體現(xiàn)出我用此不準(zhǔn)確的原因之一
4.blunt/bl?nt/CET6 TEM4 (blunting,blunted,blunter,blunts,bluntest)V-TIf something?blunts?an emotion, a feeling or a need, it weakens it. 使減弱——有時(shí)候妒茬,大詞束倍,難詞的不恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用會(huì)減弱表達(dá)效果妻率,不能有效地?fù)糁腥诵模?/p>
5camouflage/?k?m??flɑ??/TEM8 (camouflaging,camouflaged,camouflages)
N-UNCOUNTCamouflageconsists of things such as leaves, branches, or brown and green paint, which are used to make it difficult for an enemy to see military forces and equipment. (軍事) 偽裝——廢話也是對(duì)真相的偽裝乱顾,掩飾,阻礙了我們傳遞和理解真實(shí)
句子
1.Examine every word you put on paper. You’ll find a surprising number that don’t serve any purpose.之前確實(shí)會(huì)檢查宫静,但是不是每個(gè)單詞走净,沒想到動(dòng)詞短語中的介詞都可以刪減。
2.Physicians are physicians, friends are friends. The rest is clutter.廢話就是同樣的意思來回說孤里,重復(fù)表達(dá)伏伯。
3.Clutter is the ponderous euphemism that turns a slum into a depressed socioeconomic area, garbage collectors into waste-disposal personnel and the town dump into the volume reduction unit.——廢話減弱了表達(dá)效果,增加理解困難
4.Clutter is the official language used by corporations to hide their mistakes.——提醒我注意閱讀到的問題捌袜,把廢話轉(zhuǎn)換成真正發(fā)生的事情说搅,去理解背后的真相。
感悟:
廢話是因?yàn)槲覀儜杏谏羁趟伎悸驳龋缓笳f出來隨意敷衍真實(shí)的表達(dá)弄唧。堅(jiān)持每一個(gè)字是高度要求,學(xué)會(huì)刪除廢話博其,學(xué)會(huì)看出廢話套才,有助于我們看到生活中各種表達(dá)背后的真正意思迂猴,我們?cè)谄綍r(shí)的說話就要開始刪去廢話慕淡,提高表達(dá)效率。