【學(xué)號(hào)】I15煎雞蛋
【前言】
? ★?常言道：“溫故而知新”。那么趁寫作計(jì)劃進(jìn)行到一半時(shí)候票罐，開始對(duì)之前寫的東西進(jìn)行“翻新”吧！
★ 明日關(guān)于范文分析部分中的重點(diǎn)表達(dá)方法添加例句和小練習(xí)~
【文章】
? ?Spring transportation, conventionally occurring during the Spring Festival in China, is one of the most marked phenomena with tens of thousands of people involved, can be ranked as the largest scale of annual human migration.During this time, with transportation jammed, numbers of people soared, car bus station fullfilled crammed, the whole country is undergoing making a?earthshaking homecoming journey to homecoming.
???The essential key causes to drive up numbers to moving are down to three factors.Firstly, peasant workers swarm to urban areas in a bid to chase after better-of living conditions for their beloved relatives left behind in rural field.Secondly, a fourty-day period spanning holiday enable the middle class relieve themselves from pressing work time, while increasing afluent income salary permits them tour around.And thirdly, migrants afloat?drift far away from their hometown, are gragvitate towards their missing family members especially during the Spring Festival.
???Despite of buzzing?cacophonous crowds and exhaustive?exhauted transportation, burning nostalgia for long-departed homes never fades. Considering the vast expense of China, it at least take more than thirty days from for an individual came back home from northren part to sorthern rural area, if not stuck amidst an avalanche of crowds?congested area, considering the vast expense of China. At no time will chinese stay? far afield from their home, for the Spring Festival has been consistently inherited for thousand years and has deep roots in every single Chinese people.This impressive phenomenon in China signifying the most fundamental merit--filial piety. As the old Chinese saying goes, "whenever you go, your mother will always be missing you." A urgent call for family reunion brings migrants and their family together regardless of far distance between them.
【范文】
? ? The definition?unique?occurrence?in China,?chunyun, or the Spring festival Travel Rush, can be ranked as the largest scale of annual human migration.?Despite rapid urbanization the allure?of returning to the hometown for the Spring Festival, the tradition that has been cherished since?ancient times, is stronger than anything else.
? ? The peasant?workers contribute most to chunyun?as they work in economically vibrant cities while leaving their families behind. Moreover,?journey is made by holiday tourists are increasing. However,?the relocation?of some industries from coastal cities to inland provinces helps ease the flow. Furthermore, the elderly travel from the countryside to the cities to reunite with their children.?This reverse route?also helps slow down the frantic training.
? ? In my opinion, fruit of urbanization?through?chunyun appears to be, it embodies the familial?values we have been cherishing?for centuries. In spite of the higher travel costs, the expected extravagant spending on gifts, and other?festival items and bumpy?road back home in terms of several?pratfalls?in securing?in a train ticket, most?Chinese people choose to drop any business at hand just too desperately go back home in the hope of celebrating the most solemn festival with their families.?The hubbub?on the crowded and often suffocate coaches and trains can never quench?their burning nostalgia?for long-departed homes. Their pampering spending on their families mirrors a champion of love even though the money they well be earned painstakingly through travail over many?furiously?sleepless?nights?in sweatshops.
? ? In China whose social welfare epitomize?its fair coverage of every citizen,?some systems such as hukou?and the soaring housing prices in cities have successfully prevented migrant workers from settling in their work places, thus resulting?in this gushing?rush.?So a?generously defined social welfare system must be a panacea?for this swelling in travel,?or chunyun?is doomed a chronic fight-or-flight issue.
【范文精析】
① ?The definitely unique?occurrence?in China,?chunyun, or the Spring festival Travel Rush, can be ranked as the largest scale of annual human migration.?Despite rapid urbanization the allure?of returning to the hometown for the Spring Festival, the tradition that has been cherished since?ancient times, is stronger than anything else.
【行文分析】
"第一段首先指出了春運(yùn)是中國(guó)的獨(dú)特現(xiàn)象，對(duì)春運(yùn)進(jìn)行了定義。"
【表達(dá)】
★ be ranked as
★ the largest scale of
★?the allure?of
② ?The peasant?workers contribute most to?chunyun?as they work in economically vibrant cities while leaving their families behind. Moreover,?journey made by holiday tourists are increasing. However,?the relocation?of some industries from coastal cities to inland provinces helps ease the flow. Furthermore, the elderly travel from the countryside to the cities to reunite with their children.?This reverse route?also helps slow down the frantic training.
【行文分析】
“第二段中匣掸，作者分析了春運(yùn)現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因，介紹了從城市向農(nóng)村流動(dòng)和從農(nóng)村向城市流動(dòng)兩條春運(yùn)路線的情況氮双∨鲈停”
【表達(dá)】
★?contribute most to?
★?economically vibrant cities?
★?journey made (by)
★?helps ease
★?reunite with
③? ?In my opinion, fruit of urbanization?through?chunyun?appears to be, it embodies the familial?values we have been cherishing?for centuries. In spite of the higher travel costs, the expected extravagant spending on gifts, and other?festival items and bumpy?road back home in terms of several?pratfalls?in securing?in a train ticket, most?Chinese people choose to drop any business at hand just too desperately go back home in the hope of celebrating the most solemn festival with their families.?The hubbub?on the crowded and often suffocate coaches and trains can never quench?their burning nostalgia?for long-departed homes. Their pampering spending on their families mirrors a champion of love even though the money they well be earned painstakingly through travail over many?furiously?sleepless?nights?in sweatshops.
【行文分析】
“第三段中，作者說(shuō)明了自己的觀點(diǎn)戴差，肯定的送爸，春運(yùn)體現(xiàn)的是中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化中重視家庭親情的價(jià)值觀∨停”
【表達(dá)】
★?embodies
★?familial?values?we have been?cherishing?
★?In spite of
★?in terms of?
★?in the hope of?
★?bumpy
★?hubbub?on
★?quench?their burning nostalgia?for
★?mirrors a champion of
★?earned painstakingly through travail over?
★?furiously
★?sweatshops
④ ?In China whose social welfare epitomize?its fair coverage of every citizen,?some systems such as?hukou?and the soaring housing prices in cities have successfully prevented migrant workers from settling in their work places, thus resulting?in this gushing?rush.?So a?generously defined social welfare system must be a panacea?for this swelling in travel,?or chunyun?is doomed a chronic fight-or-flight issue.
【行文分析】
“第四段中袭厂，作者提升了主題，從宏觀的角度提出解決春運(yùn)問(wèn)題的方法球匕，即中國(guó)的福利系統(tǒng)應(yīng)該支持民工在他們的工作城市定居纹磺。”
【表達(dá)】
★?thus resulting?in
★?be a panacea?for
★?swelling in travel
★?a chronic fight-or-flight issue
