雅思大作文的開頭的目的主要有兩個(gè)：一是引入話題；二是回答歧匈、簡要論述問題并為主體段落的展開做鋪墊轴或。
以下我結(jié)合2020年1月4日中國大陸雅思首考的大作文的話題開頭的寫作為例做一個(gè)說明拼余。這個(gè)寫作題目如下：
In some countries, the criminal trials are shown on the TV and the general public can watch them. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? (2020/1/4)
從題目中我們可以看出這是一道有關(guān)犯罪和媒體混合題材的利弊雙邊討論的問題帕棉，同時(shí)也是一道分別在2016年和2018年考過的舊題褐桌。下面是我從國內(nèi)即時(shí)社交媒體三個(gè)有關(guān)雅思寫作的微信公眾號(hào)找到的三個(gè)比較好的開頭給大家做一個(gè)解析衰抑。
第一個(gè)是廣外的Icy老師在她2020年1月7日她的微信公眾號(hào)《Icy的框架寫作小樂園》的開頭。她在開頭中這樣寫到：Some nations allow trials of criminal cases to be televised in order for the public to watch how they are processed. In my opinion, both viewers and these countries could benefit enormously from this practice.
在這里Icy老師首先嫻熟地使用了同義詞替換和句子結(jié)構(gòu)轉(zhuǎn)換的方法用自己的話對(duì)作文的前一部分話題做了一個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)述荧嵌。接下來她又開門見山明確地提出了自己對(duì)這個(gè)問題的支持性的立場(chǎng)呛踊，為下文的展開指明了方向。
第二個(gè)開頭是一位自稱有7年雅思寫作教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)的叫坡姐 Lydia的微信用戶開設(shè)的微信公眾號(hào)《雅思寫作怎么破》在2020年1月7日發(fā)表的同話題開頭：
There is no doubt that these days the criminal trials have been accessible to (易接近的啦撮，能達(dá)到的)the public via mass media, like television. While this may bring about some problems, I still believe that this progressive policy will definitely benefit more not only individuals but also the society.
這個(gè)開頭里面我覺得第二個(gè)句子中的副詞"more"放在句子最后讀起來更通順一些谭网。這段開頭其他地方?jīng)]有什么問題。對(duì)比Icy老師的范文的開頭赃春，這個(gè)開頭的思路跟Icy老師基本一致愉择，不同之處在于這個(gè)開頭在第二句主旨句里面做了一個(gè)讓步，先抑后揚(yáng)织中，使得這個(gè)句子結(jié)構(gòu)更加精細(xì)锥涕，語感上也更有張力。
第三個(gè)開頭是國內(nèi)雅思寫作大咖廣外資深的英美文學(xué)教授唐偉勝老師在他今年1月5日他發(fā)表在自己的微信公眾號(hào)《唐老雅英語寫作工作室》的同話題的開頭：Whether criminal trials should be shown on TV or not has always been a controversial（有爭議的）issue. After discussing the advantages of this practice and its disadvantages, I come to believe televising criminal trials is a good thing as long as its negative effects are brought well under control.
唐老師在這個(gè)經(jīng)典的開頭先是使用一個(gè)whether or not引導(dǎo)的主語從句導(dǎo)入話題狭吼，之后用了一個(gè)用表示時(shí)間先后次序的連接代詞after引導(dǎo)的復(fù)雜的動(dòng)名詞形式做狀語和一個(gè)以I come to believe為主謂語的復(fù)合賓語從句提出了自己對(duì)話題的有條件的贊同层坠，即只要嚴(yán)格控制負(fù)面影響，電視審判是一件好事刁笙。
好窿春，以上就是我對(duì)三個(gè)同話題的優(yōu)秀雅思大作文開頭的分析供大家參考。
接下來跟大家分享一下我的英文開頭并附上括號(hào)里面的中文說明：
The portrayals of court proceedings on TV has become a familiar scene in a number of countries nowadays.（注：這句話我對(duì)話題做了一個(gè)籠統(tǒng)的轉(zhuǎn)述采盒。）Some people believe that televised criminal trial has more benefits than drawbacks due to its educational and? deterrent value, however in my view, the cons of airing the criminal trials on TV to the general public outweighs the pros by distorting the truth-seeking process of a criminal trial and impairing the authority of the justice system.（注：這是我的主旨句。在這句話里我回應(yīng)了問題并提出了自己的觀點(diǎn)和核心理由蔚润。）
最后如果大家有興趣可以跟我一起來動(dòng)筆練習(xí)一下另外三個(gè)不同話題的開頭磅氨。開頭完成之后可以與我給大家附上的參考答案做一個(gè)對(duì)比，看看自己的作文開頭有哪些方面做得比較到位嫡纠，哪些方面還可以進(jìn)一步改進(jìn)和完善烦租。
1、The best way to improve health is to do regular exercise. To what extent do you agree.
2除盏、Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
3叉橱、Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?
參考答案
（1）The most effective solution to enhance health is regarded as frequent physical exercise. In my opinion, I agree that exercise is the key to good health, however I also believe that balanced diet and healthy lifestyle are also critical.
（2）How their country's progress should be measured is a heated topic among the government and citizens of country. While I advocate that economic growth is essential. I believe that other forms of progress are just as essential.
（3）In some parts of the world, food is still highly valued. In urban areas, however, particularly in the developed world, food waste is becoming a major concern. This essay will examine the causes of this issue and suggest ways that people can curb the amount that they discard.
