前言
昨天網(wǎng)易云音樂(lè)提示我 Shane 發(fā)了新專輯孕荠,《Love Always》的豪華版(Deluxe),點(diǎn)開(kāi)看看多了幾首新歌蜓肆,其中《Girl in My Heart》最讓我喜歡贷屎。彼時(shí)的評(píng)論才只有十幾條,此刻已經(jīng)是一百開(kāi)外了蹲缠。新歌出來(lái)還沒(méi)有配套的歌詞棺克,我心心念念地想從 Apple Music 上搬運(yùn)過(guò)來(lái)一份,沒(méi)成想國(guó)區(qū)還沒(méi)有上線這張專輯线定,而美區(qū)在試聽(tīng)時(shí)無(wú)法顯示歌詞逆航,所以拿不到官方文本了。
遙想 2011 年我還在上高中的時(shí)候渔肩,西城在解散前的最后一張紀(jì)念專輯《Gretest Hits》里發(fā)布了幾首新歌《Beautiful World》因俐、《Wide Open》和《Poet's Heart》,非常好聽(tīng)周偎。西城中文站(WLCN)和百度貼吧里四處有歌迷求歌詞抹剩、貼歌詞,但許多都是同一版本的復(fù)制粘貼蓉坎,并且有明顯的錯(cuò)誤澳眷。于是我懷著滿腔熱血在壇子里發(fā)了帖子:BW,WO,PH三首新歌Lrc歌詞下載,上傳了我自己聽(tīng)寫的歌詞蛉艾,并添加時(shí)間軸制作成 LRC 文件钳踊。在那個(gè)流媒體還不夠發(fā)達(dá)的年代,千千靜聽(tīng)是很多人聽(tīng)歌的選擇勿侯,本地歌曲+LRC 的方式是完美組合拓瞪,實(shí)在是覺(jué)得自己干了件大好事兒,嘿嘿助琐。話說(shuō)當(dāng)時(shí)【呵呵】還是正常意思的【呵呵】呢祭埂,在【呵呵】的意思變味兒之后的今天,再看這帖子總有怪怪的感覺(jué)兵钮。
無(wú)獨(dú)有偶蛆橡,昨天面對(duì)新發(fā)的歌曲舌界,我又燃起了這股沖動(dòng),見(jiàn)評(píng)論區(qū)有求歌詞的網(wǎng)友就激動(dòng)不已泰演。于是閃電速度聽(tīng)寫呻拌、聽(tīng)譯、意譯了歌詞睦焕,并再次裝上塵封 N 多年的千千靜聽(tīng)(說(shuō)實(shí)話沒(méi)用過(guò)別的歌詞制作軟件柏锄,光用這個(gè)就已經(jīng)很舒服了),為文本添加了時(shí)間軸复亏。幾經(jīng)校正趾娃,上傳到了網(wǎng)易云音樂(lè),等待審核缔御。然后就是糟心的等待過(guò)程了抬闷,每過(guò)幾十分鐘就想刷著看看是否有結(jié)果了,是取用了還是駁回了耕突,心情甚至有點(diǎn)忐忑笤成。
在焦慮等待結(jié)果的同時(shí),將我聽(tīng)寫的歌詞發(fā)布于此眷茁,紀(jì)念新出的這首歌炕泳,以及 Westlife 精神的延續(xù)。當(dāng)然上祈,水平有限培遵,有兩處沒(méi)聽(tīng)清,在縮寫處難免有錯(cuò)誤登刺,歡迎斧正籽腕。另外,中文翻譯有欠缺文采之處纸俭,還需要多讀文學(xué)著作皇耗。
就怕自己聽(tīng)錯(cuò)寫錯(cuò)誤導(dǎo)廣大歌迷,但還是忍不住犯一些小錯(cuò)誤揍很,已經(jīng)在修訂中寫明郎楼。我會(huì)繼續(xù)向網(wǎng)易云音樂(lè)提交新版本更正的歌詞,他們審核給不給更新就不好說(shuō)了窒悔。
修訂歷史
2018.05.17
想不到都要 10 天了呜袁,網(wǎng)易云音樂(lè)的審核還沒(méi)有結(jié)束,并且工作人員還沒(méi)回復(fù)我的私信蛉迹,這是要完了的節(jié)奏啊傅寡。強(qiáng)迫癥放妈,本次修正一下上次存在的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤北救。
將【I wrote a song about you when I turn 13】改為【I wrote a song about you when I turned 13】荐操,這樣符合語(yǔ)法規(guī)范。
補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明:歌詞視頻中【W(wǎng)ho's stronger than you know when you light up the dark】不予采納珍策,保持【Is stronger than you know when you light up the dark】托启,因?yàn)榉磸?fù)聽(tīng)取歌詞,沒(méi)有【W(wǎng)ho】的發(fā)音攘宙,倒是隱約有一個(gè) /?/ 的發(fā)音屯耸,并且從前后連貫性上,【the girl in my heart is stronger】沒(méi)有問(wèn)題蹭劈;吐槽一點(diǎn)疗绣,【than you know when you light up the dark】這兩個(gè)【you】指代的應(yīng)該不是一個(gè)人吧……
2018.05.09
根據(jù)貼吧里的一個(gè)歌詞視頻進(jìn)行修訂:
將【where I'd be】改為【where I'll be】,個(gè)人覺(jué)得這個(gè)不是很關(guān)鍵铺韧,首先幾乎聽(tīng)不出來(lái)確切差異多矮,其次無(wú)論是虛擬語(yǔ)態(tài)還是正常敘述不影響大意。
將【A love who measure up to yours】改為【A love to measure up to yours】哈打,這里是一處我沒(méi)聽(tīng)清的地方塔逃,貼吧視頻中給出的是【A love to major up to yorus】,首先不清楚【major up to yorus】是什么用法料仗,其次歌曲發(fā)音是 /e/湾盗,而【major】的音標(biāo)是 /e?/,存在明顯差異立轧,故不予取用格粪;【to】的發(fā)音比較合理。
將【And wonder what's worth waiting for】改為【The one that was worth waiting for】氛改,【The one】比【And wonder】在上下句銜接中更合理匀借;貼吧視頻中寫著【The one that was what's waiting for】,從用法上比較擰巴平窘,另外可以聽(tīng)清【was worth/what's】組合的第二個(gè)單詞發(fā)音有 /?/ 或者 /r/ 的音標(biāo)吓肋,所以采用【worth】更為合適,從意思上也更抒情瑰艘。
將【W(wǎng)ish it always be】改為【W(wǎng)ish it'll always be】是鬼,此處同樣是聽(tīng)感幾乎無(wú)差異,但是如此修改更符合邏輯和語(yǔ)法紫新,不改變大意均蜜。
將【I wrote the song. I bought you when I turn 13】改為【I wrote a song about you when I turn 13】,第一版歌詞中因?yàn)榇颂帞嗑浔容^長(zhǎng)芒率,聽(tīng)成了【bought】囤耳,總覺(jué)得這里奇怪,后來(lái)根據(jù)貼吧視頻進(jìn)行修訂,覺(jué)得合并為一句使用【about】更妥當(dāng)充择;隨后將前面的定冠詞【the】改為不定冠詞【a】德玫;另外覺(jué)得這里使用【turned】更符合語(yǔ)法,但是明顯不是這個(gè)發(fā)音椎麦。
Girl in My Heart – Shane Filan
心戀的女孩 – 尚恩·菲南
Here's to the girl in my heart
致那個(gè)女孩宰僧,我的心戀
Don't go change and I love you just as you are
愛(ài)你如此,莫要刻意改變
I'm just saying I can't imagine where I'll be
縱然我會(huì)迷失自己的歸宿
Without you always loving me from the start
只有你一如既往的愛(ài)讓我心安
The girl in my heart
我心戀的女孩
When I was young
年輕時(shí)的我
I was always searching for
不停地尋覓
A love to measure up to yours
像你一樣愛(ài)我
And someone who could be
一樣無(wú)可替代的
What you meant to me
一個(gè)姑娘
I never thought
從未想過(guò)
I'd find what I was looking for
苦心呼喚的對(duì)象
The one that was worth waiting for
值得守候的人
Was right in front of me
竟悄然佇立在眼前
Wish it'll always be
多希望生活永遠(yuǎn)如此
And it always feels like home
仿佛幸福而溫馨家
So here's to the girl in my heart
所以观挎,致那個(gè)女孩琴儿,我的心戀
Don't go change and I love you just as you are
愛(ài)你如此,莫要刻意改變
I'm just saying I can't imagine where I'll be
縱然我會(huì)迷失自己的歸宿
Without you always loving me from the start
只有你一如既往的愛(ài)讓我心安
Here's to the girl in my, the girl in my heart
致那個(gè)女孩嘁捷,我心心戀戀的女孩
Is stronger than you know when you light up the dark
點(diǎn)亮光明的你超乎想象得偉岸
I'm saying thank you
感謝你
I can't imagine where I'll be
在我行將茫然無(wú)措的時(shí)候
Without you always loving me from the start
用你從未停息的愛(ài)帶我回到心田
So here's to the girl in my heart
所以造成,致那個(gè)女孩,我的心戀
I wrote a song about you when I turned 13
十三歲時(shí)為你寫過(guò)一支歌
Sang about the way we'd be
唱想著你和我
Standing here together
相濡以沫
Hoping it's forever
廝守終身
I'm so amazed
回顧往昔
Looking at just what we've made
令我如此驚奇
No matter how the world may change
即便世界翻云覆雨
We'll be here together
你我仍風(fēng)雨兼程
Knowing it's forever
同舟共濟(jì)
And it always feels like home
仿佛幸福而溫馨家
So here's to the girl in my heart
所以雄嚣,致那個(gè)女孩谜疤,我的心戀
Don't go change and I love you just as you are
愛(ài)你如此,莫要刻意改變
I'm just saying I can't imagine where I'll be
縱然我會(huì)迷失自己的歸宿
Without you always loving me from the start
只有你一如既往的愛(ài)讓我心安
Here's to the girl in my, the girl in my heart
致那個(gè)女孩现诀,我心心戀戀的女孩
Is stronger than you know when you light up the dark
點(diǎn)亮光明的你超乎想象得偉岸
I'm saying thank you
感謝你
I can't imagine where I'll be
在我行將茫然無(wú)措的時(shí)候
Without you always loving me from the start
用你從未停息的愛(ài)帶我回到心田
So here's to the girl in my heart
所以夷磕,致那個(gè)女孩,我的心戀
And it always feels like home
一切就像家庭一樣溫馨
Yeah you always feel like home
而你就像家人一樣溫暖
When I'm with you
當(dāng)我與你同行
When I'm with you
當(dāng)你與我相伴
Ohh...ohh
哦……哦
Here's to the girl in my heart
致那個(gè)女孩仔沿,我的心戀
Don't go change and I love you just as you are
愛(ài)你如此坐桩,莫要刻意改變
I'm just saying I can't imagine where I'll be
縱然我會(huì)迷失自己的歸宿
Without you always loving me from the start
只有你一如既往的愛(ài)讓我心安
Here's to the girl in my, the girl in my heart
致那個(gè)女孩,我心心戀戀的女孩
Is stronger than you know when you light up the dark
點(diǎn)亮光明的你超乎想象得偉岸
I'm saying thank you
感謝你
I can't imagine where I'll be
在我行將茫然無(wú)措的時(shí)候
Without you always loving me from the start
用你從未停息的愛(ài)帶我回到心田
So here's to the girl in my heart
所以封锉,致那個(gè)女孩绵跷,我的心戀
The girl in my heart
我心戀的女孩