Part One 講解筆記
1. new words:
> gauge
You need to gauge first if she has any kind of positive feeling about you.
to make a judgement about sth, especially people's feelings or attitudes 判定迅皇，判斷（尤指人的感情或態(tài)度）
They interviewed employees to gauge their reaction to the changes.他們與雇員面談以判定他們的應變能力登颓。
He tried to gauge her mood.他試圖揣摩她的心情。
> upfront
I think being upfront about your affection toward a girl is flattering and should be an honor to her, as long as you are a gentleman yourself.
~ (about sth) not trying to hide what you think or do 坦率的框咙；誠實的；直爽的 SYN HONEST , ?FRANK
He's been upfront about his intentions since the beginning. 他從一開始就明白說出了他的意圖暇检。
> touch base
touch 'base (with sb) (informal) ? ?to make contact with sb again 再次聯(lián)系
I am touching base here to see if there has been any update regarding my application.
> contract in tender 招標合同
> cover
[VN] to be or provide enough money for sth 足以支付婉称；夠付
$100 should cover your expenses. 100 元該足夠支付你的費用了。
Your parents will have to cover your tuition fees. 你的父母得支付你的學費悔据。
The show barely covered its costs. 這場演出勉強夠本俗壹。
2. 寫 networking emails 注意點
(1) 第一封信里不要提出人家無法在只看你信就能決定的問題。
(2) 求職類
第一種：想跟人聊聊職業(yè)內(nèi)涵走向头滔，把對方當作前輩請教涎显。
第二種：目的是約見面混臉熟坤检，可以在信中直接說“我要求職”
可引用： If you heard of any vacancy 空缺 in this field, would you mind referring me the information or pointing me in that direction ? That would be much appreciated. (感謝的說法/Much appreciationfor your kind consideration and your time.)
當然這個問題也最好在見面時或之后問期吓，一般人能隨手幫忙都會很愿意。
(3) 求合作類
第一封信我不能直接邀請合作 但是仍然可以禮貌地提出一些可行的建議 求合作等他回復見面可行時再提
3. 句型
請求給出建議：It would be more than nice if you could give me some advice on how to improve···
4. 篤師精批
申請funds
Dear Brigit,
Thank you very much for the offer of a place in the 2017 AIPE summer program and a generous $1500 scholarship. I consider it a hard-earned honor to be accepted into the AIPE program on a scholarship basis. ?
As excited as I am （學習銜接）about the prospect of studying and working with 59 outstanding fellow students and prestigious professors in the coming summer, my financial circumstances remain a concern to me. As a self-supporting college student, I am already working multiple part-time jobs to cover my living expenses and rely on student loans to pay for the tuition. The $2,250 program fees after the $1500 scholarship is still a big burden to me. Hence因此 I wonder if the foundation would consider an additional grant or be so kind to inform me on the best places to apply for funds.
Thank you again for the kind offer and your consideration of my extended request.
Best regards箭跳，
Jinlan Hu
催面試結果
I very much look forward to a favorable outcome as it has been my dream to join MNC as an auditor. ?I also believe that my good command of English combined with years of auditing experience on the back of a solid accounting background puts me in an excellent position to become an asset to your team and your company.
Part Two 修改
1. 修改前反思
(1) 一封信盡量只寫一個請求 這篇的目的是不是太多了
(2) “見附件”如何正確表達
(3) 銜接不夠自然 ? ?
2. 修改
Dear Professor Smith,
Thank you for your detailed instructions on my research proposal last week. I really appreciate the time you took answering my questions and pointing out the orientation of revisions.key elements to revise.
Following your advice, I have modified the research proposal according to your advice and finished the first version of literature review. Attached please find the documents. Attached are my drafts, please have a look. Would you mind checking the logic and structure of my literature review, even better, I wondering if all the previous ideas that I cited closely correlate with my topic. It would be very helpful to think clearly for further writing.
I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you again for your time and consideration. (或用新學的That would be much appreciated.)
Sincerely,
Sophie Allen
