On Writing Well -Day15 (Ch15)


Content:

Part I | Principles

1. The Transaction

2. Simplicity

3. Clutter (Writing clean English Sentence)

4. Style (Preserving your identity)

5. The audience (Who am I writing for)

6. Words (The only tools you’ve got)

7. Usage (What is good usage)

Part II | Methods

8. Unity (Anchor of good writing)

9. The lead and the ending

10. Bits and pieces

Part II | Forms

11. Nonfiction as Literature

12. Writing About People: The Interview

13. Writing About Places: The travel article

14. Writing About Yourself: The Memoir

15. Science and Technology

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Words and Expressions:

1. Scientific and technical material can be made accessible to the layman.

1.N-COUNT 外行;門外漢

A layman is a person who is not trained, qualified, or experienced in a particular subject or activity.

The mere mention of the words 'heart failure', can conjure up, to thelayman, the prospect of imminent death...

一提“心臟衰竭”四字,外行人就聯(lián)想到命不久矣的情景。

There are basically two types called, inlayman's terms, blue and white asbestos.

基本上有兩種,用外行話說就是青石棉和白石棉。

2.N-COUNT (基督教中的)平信徒粤铭,在俗教徒

A layman is a man who is involved with the Christian church but is not a member of the clergy or a monk.

In 1932, one Bostonlaymanwrote to Archbishop William O'Connell in support of Father Coughlin.

1932年,波士頓一名平信徒致函大主教威廉·奧康奈爾,聲援庫格林神父默伍。

2. A tenet of journalism is that “the reader knows nothing.”

N-COUNT (理論、信仰的)基本原則衰琐,根本信條

The tenets of a theory or belief are the main principles on which it is based.

【搭配模式】:with supp

【語域標(biāo)簽】:FORMAL 正式

Non-violence and patience are the centraltenets of their faith...

非暴力和忍耐是他們的信仰的核心原則也糊。

The judge's ruling was based on the simple commonsensetenetthat no man is above the law.

法官的判決基于一個常識性原則,即誰也不能凌駕于法律之上羡宙。

3. There was a chimpanzee in California with a talent for playing ticktacktoe.

N-COUNT 黑猩猩

A chimpanzee is a kind of small African ape.


4. It is part of the large ferment of modern brain research in progress in laboratories.

1.N-UNCOUNT 騷動;動亂;動蕩

Ferment is excitement and trouble caused by change or uncertainty.

The whole country has been in a state of politicalfermentfor some months.

幾個月來狸剃,整個國家一直處于政治動蕩狀態(tài)。

2.V-ERG (使)發(fā)酵

If a food, drink, or other natural substance ferments, or if it is fermented, a chemical change takes place in it so that alcohol is produced. This process forms part of the production of alcoholic drinks such as wine and beer.

【語法信息】:V

【語法信息】:V n

【語法信息】:V-ed

The dried grapes are allowed tofermentuntil there is no sugar left and the wine is dry...

讓干葡萄發(fā)酵辛辨,直到糖分全部脫出捕捂,酒無甜味。

To serve the needs of bakers, manufacturersfermentthe yeast to produce a more concentrated product.

為了滿足面包店主的需要斗搞,制造商讓酵母發(fā)酵指攒,以生產(chǎn)出濃度更高的產(chǎn)品。

...partiallyfermented wine.

部分發(fā)酵的葡萄酒

fermentation

Yeast is essential for thefermentation that produces alcohol.

釀酒要發(fā)酵,而發(fā)酵必須有酵母僻焚。

5.that incredible three-pound package of tissue that can imagine the farthest reaches of the universe and the ultimate core of the atom but cannot fathom its own functioning

1.N-COUNT 英尋(度量單位允悦,等于 1.8 米或 6 英尺,用于指水深)

A fathom is a measurement of 1.8 metres or 6 feet, used when referring to the depth of water.

【搭配模式】:oft num N

We sailed into the bay and dropped anchor in fivefathoms of water.

我們駛進(jìn)海灣,將錨拋進(jìn) 5 英尋深的水里隙弛。

2.VERB 透徹理解;深入了解;弄清…的真相

If you cannot fathom something, you are unable to understand it, although you think carefully about it.

【語法信息】:V wh

【語法信息】:V n

【語法信息】:V P wh

【語法信息】:V P n (not pron)

【語法信息】:Also V n P

【搭配模式】:no cont

I really couldn'tfathomwhat Steiner was talking about...

我真搞不懂斯坦納在說些什么架馋。

Jeremy's passive attitude was hard tofathom.

杰里米的消極態(tài)度令人費解。

Fathom out means the same as fathom.fathom out 同 fathom

We're trying tofathomout what's going on...

我們在盡力搞清楚發(fā)生了什么事情全闷。

I'm having difficulty using my video editing equipment and can'tfathomout the various connections.

我不會使用視頻編輯設(shè)備叉寂,而且搞不清各種各樣的連接。

6.Through evolution the vulture has the most efficient structure one can imagine—a space frame in bone.

1.N-COUNT 兀鷲;禿鷲

A vulture is a large bird which lives in hot countries and eats the flesh of dead animals.

2.N-COUNT 趁火打劫的人;乘人之危的人

If you describe a person as a vulture, you disapprove of them because you think they are trying to gain from another person's troubles.

【語用信息】:disapproval

【FIELD標(biāo)簽】:JOURNALISM 新聞

With no buyer in sight for the company as a whole, thevultures started to circle.

由于公司目前找不到買主总珠,趁火打劫者開始圍攻屏鳍。

7. You can achieve the same rapport, whatever your subject.

N-SING 和睦;友善;親近

If two people or groups have a rapport, they have a good relationship in which they are able to understand each other's ideas or feelings very well.

【搭配模式】:also no det

He said he wanted 'to establish arapportwith the Indian people'...

他說他想“同印度人民建立友好關(guān)系”。

The success depends on goodrapportbetween interviewer and interviewee...

成功取決于采訪者與被采訪者之間的良好溝通局服。

You have an intellectualrapport, a kind of easy companionship that makes me really jealous.

你機(jī)智友善钓瞭、平易近人,真是讓我嫉妒淫奔。

Thoughts:

作為理工科出身山涡,我個人覺得科技類文章是最能體現(xiàn)“隔行如隔山”的,每個字都認(rèn)識唆迁,但連在一起就不知道什么意思的情況經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)鸭丛。而且科技類書籍,從入門級到進(jìn)階到專業(yè)級媒惕,每一級都有一定的門檻系吩,不太容易實現(xiàn)跨級,只有把每一級搞懂了妒蔚,才能上升到下一級穿挨。每一級又有每一級特有的專業(yè)用語。

所以肴盏,科技類寫作更需要考慮audience科盛,你的audience在這個專業(yè)領(lǐng)域的哪一層,決定了你的寫作風(fēng)格菜皂。

Zinser這章講的其實更像是科普類的寫作贞绵,也就是說audience在第一層,專業(yè)知識為零或者很少恍飘。

對于科普類寫作榨崩,當(dāng)然最重要的是深入淺出+語言通俗。

也就是說章母,要想讀者看明白母蛛,作者要想的明白(邏輯思維),說的好玩(語言表達(dá))乳怎。

舉個很簡單的例子彩郊,教爺爺奶奶、爸爸媽媽和同齡人用手機(jī),無論是方法還是內(nèi)容秫逝,是不是都不一樣恕出。

教爺爺奶奶的是不是話最多,但聽起來最簡單违帆?(零基礎(chǔ)浙巫,最難)

教同齡人的是不是話雖少,但內(nèi)容更復(fù)雜刷后?(基礎(chǔ)雄厚狈醉,最簡單)

想想看,你最擅長哪個惠险?

科普類寫作也是如此。讀者呈金字塔型分布抒线,零基礎(chǔ)的占大多數(shù)班巩,最專業(yè)的位于塔尖。這就要求科普類寫作要按倒金字塔結(jié)構(gòu)嘶炭,先從一個簡單的點入手抱慌,由點及面,逐步擴(kuò)展眨猎,最終形成完整的論述抑进。

總之,越簡單的東西覆蓋范圍越廣睡陪。

(zinser推薦的IEEE spectrum寺渗,屬于應(yīng)用科學(xué)領(lǐng)域,因為有應(yīng)用場景兰迫,所以讀起來比理論類要好懂一些)

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