2017.10.31
Part 1 Words
1.smother 使窒息
原文：They are all weeds that will smother what you write.
造句：to be smothered by the heavy smoke
2.insidious 陰險的盘榨，潛伏的
原文：Just as insidious are all the word clusters with which we explain how we propose to go about our explaining:"I might add,""It should be pointed out ,""It is interesting to note ."
解釋：ADJ缘眶， something that is insidious is unpleasant or dangerous and develops gradually without being noticed.
造句：The changes are insidious, and will not produce a noticeable effect for 15 to
20 years.變化是悄然發(fā)生的，15到20年間不會產(chǎn)生明顯效果郊艘。
3.develop the same eye 也有同樣的能力
原文： You can develop the same eye.
原文：My reason for bracketing the students' superfluous words, instead of crossing them out, was to avoid violating their sacred prose.
4.superfluous: not necessory
造句：It is superfluous to add feet to the snake while painting.
5.cross them out :劃掉
造句：Cross out that last sentence and put this in instead.
Cross out this phrase.
Part 2 感悟
好的文章都是一遍遍地斟酌修改，最后才能定稿完成涮坐。正如我們的日常工作，也是需要一遍一遍地核對修改后，保證正確性才能算完成记焊！所謂的一氣呵成，也應(yīng)該是在自己的腦海里演練很多遍后寫下來的栓撞，但是寫下來的東西有些細(xì)節(jié)也還是要再三修改的遍膜。
文章在簡單明了的基礎(chǔ)上，加上適當(dāng)?shù)膫€人風(fēng)格修飾瓤湘。過多的修飾就是畫蛇添足瓢颅，裹腳布一樣又臭又長。
