PART ONE THOUGHTS
前面章節(jié)所說(shuō)的風(fēng)格类咧、結(jié)構(gòu)丐谋、意圖都是大的決定。這篇章節(jié)講小的決定饲握,文章的架構(gòu)私杜。Zinsser提到組織好文章結(jié)構(gòu)的重要性等同于寫清晰、令人愉悅的句子救欧。一篇文章要簡(jiǎn)潔有序衰粹,邏輯清晰還有敘述技巧。
萬(wàn)事開頭難笆怠,寫作亦是如此铝耻。一個(gè)(挑逗)讓人欲罷不能的開頭可以抓住讀者持續(xù)不斷地看下去。開頭可長(zhǎng)可短.Zinsser還提到不要害怕把長(zhǎng)句變?yōu)閮蓚€(gè)或三個(gè)短句骑疆,每個(gè)句子只可以包含一個(gè)想法思想田篇。行文中可以增加耳熟能詳?shù)膫髡f(shuō)故事。
好的文章不會(huì)是平淡無(wú)奇的箍铭,文章中要體現(xiàn)作者的個(gè)性與聲音泊柬。
PART TWO VOCABULARY
1.provocative
intended to make people angry or upset; intended to make people argue about something?
e.g.a provocative remark
這個(gè)在文中說(shuō)開頭得讓讀者有閱讀興趣,得挑逗他們
2.squirm/skw??m/
[intransitive]to move around a lot making small twisting movements, because you are nervous, uncomfortable, etc.坐立不安
3.lore
knowledge and information related to a particular subject, especially when this is not written down; the stories and traditions of a particular group of people傳說(shuō)诈火,典故
e.g.According to local lore,a ghost had haunted the forbidding city.?