《語法俱樂部》| 第二十一章:簡化從句練習(xí)

句子簡化的原則:一纬霞、對等從句中,重復(fù)主語或動詞擇一省略栽连;二险领、從屬從句中侨舆,省略主語與be動詞兩個部分秒紧,留下補語。

例1:

句1:The patient had not responded to the standard treatment.

句2:This fact greatly puzzled the medical team.

這里句2中的this fact就是句1中的內(nèi)容挨下,經(jīng)過這里的聯(lián)系可以把兩句聯(lián)合起來:

The patient had not responded to the standard treatment, which greatly puzzled the medical team.

這里是有which的話熔恢,容易指代不明,可以當做是the fact還可以當做是前一句的the stand treatment臭笆,不妨改成名詞從句:

That the patient had not responded to the standard treatment greatly puzzled the medical team.

這個句子依然不夠精簡叙淌,我們使用簡化通用三原則來看一下:1.有be動詞的省略be動詞;2.有助動詞的改寫成to V愁铺;3.除此以外的動詞一律加上-ing保留鹰霍。

that引導(dǎo)的名詞從句中,動詞是had not responded屬于第三種情況茵乱,所以改寫成:not having responded茂洒,原來的主語改成所有格:

The patient's not having responded to the standard treatment greatly puzzled the medical team.

例2:

句1:The summer tourists are all gone.

句2:The resort town has resumed its air of tranquillity.

這兩句沒有元素間的重復(fù),但是邏輯上是有關(guān)聯(lián)的瓶竭,加入now that以后改成:

Now that the summer tourists are all gone, the resort town has resumed its air of tranquillity.

連接詞now that可以改寫成with:

With the summer tourists all gone, the resort town has resumed its air of tranquillity.

例3:

句1:Confucius must have written on pieces of bamboo.

句2:Confucius lived in the Eastern Zhou Dynasty.

句3:Paper was not available until the Eastern Han Dynasty.

句1和句2經(jīng)由Confucius建立聯(lián)系:

Confucius, who lived in the Eastern Zhou Dynasty, must have written on pieces of bamboo.

簡化:

Confucius, living in the Eastern Zhou Dynasty, must have written on pieces of bamboo.

句3標識原因督勺,我們加入連接詞because后渠羞,形成合句:

Confucius, living in the Eastern Zhou Dynasty, must have written on pieces of bamboo, because paper was not available until the Eastern Han Dynasty.

由于because后面引導(dǎo)的從句主語同主句的主語不同,不能省略智哀,我們只能省略掉be動詞was次询,將動詞變成-ing形式,副詞從句中必須要有分詞配合瓷叫,這里就需要加入being:

Confucius, living in the Eastern Zhou Dynasty, must have written on pieces of bamboo, paper being not available until the Eastern Han Dynasty.

例4:

句1:The movable-type press was invented by Gutenberg.

句2:The movable-type press was introduced to England in 1482.

句3:This event marked the end of the Dark Ages there.

句1和句2中the movable-type press是重復(fù)的內(nèi)容屯吊,建立聯(lián)系:

The movable-type press, which was invented by Gutenberg, was introduced to England in 1482.

簡化后:

The movable-type press, invented by Gutenberg, was introduced to England in 1482.

句3中的this event就是前兩句話的整個內(nèi)容,我們用which作連接詞:

The movable-type press, invented by Gutenberg, was introduced to England in 1482赞辩,an event which marked the end of the Dark Ages there.

進一步簡化為:

The movable-type press, invented by Gutenberg, was introduced to England in 1482雌芽, marking the end of the Dark Ages there.

例5:

句1:Ben Kook was educated in an art college.

句2:Ben Kook acts unusual at times.

句3:Ben Kook deals with economic matters at these times.

句1和句2之間的因果聯(lián)系構(gòu)成一個合句:

Because he was educated in an art college. Ben Kook acts unusual at times.

簡化連接詞主語和be動詞以后:

Educated in an art college, Ben Kook acts unusual at times.

簡化后的句子和句3聯(lián)系的點在于at these times,經(jīng)過這個交叉點我們使用when連接詞:

Educated in an art college, Ben Kook acts unusual (at times) when he deal with economic matters.

程前省卻了at times辨嗽,這時候簡化的時候就要將when保留:

Educated in an art college, Ben Kook acts unusual when dealing with economic matters.

例6:

句1:I'd like something.

句2:You will meet some people.

句3: Then you can leave.

句1中的something就是整個句2的內(nèi)容世落,連接在一起:

I'd like that you will meet some people.

簡化:

I'd like you to meet some people.

句3是表示時間的,加上以后:

I'd like you to meet some people before you can leave.

這個句子在進一步簡化形成:

I'd like you to meet some people before leaving.

例7:

句1:I have not practiced very much.

句2:I should have practiced very much.

句3:I am worried about something.

句4:I might forget something.

句5:What should I say during the speech contest?

句1和句2可以經(jīng)由比較級as……as連接:

I have not practiced as much as I should.?(have practiced)

這正是句3我擔心的原因:

Because I have not practiced as much as I should, I am worried about something.

簡化為:

Not having practiced as much as I should, I am worried about something.

這個句子中擔心的something正是句4中可能忘記的something糟需,由于上句的something放在介詞about后面必須先改寫成about the possibility屉佳,然后在加入that連接詞:

Not having practiced as much as I should, I am worried (about the possibility) that I might forget something.

簡化that從句:

Not having practiced as much as I should, I am worried about forgetting something.

現(xiàn)在這個句子所擔心的something,就是句5中的演講比賽該說些什么洲押,加入到上一句中替代something的位置:

Not having practiced as much as I should, I am worried about forgetting what I should say during the speech contest.

最后簡化what從句:

Not having practiced as much as I should, I am worried about forgetting what to say during the speech contest.

例8:

句1:A. Fries was the leader of the College football team then.

句2:A. Fries is the director of a football club now.

句3:A. Fries saw something.

句4:The college football team lost in the important game.

句5:A. Fries offered something.

句6:He would assume responsibility.

句7:He would tender his resignation.

要逐步完成這7個句子的組合和簡化是一個不小的挑戰(zhàn)武花,我們一步一步的來:

句1和句2對仗工整,分別說明Fries現(xiàn)在和以前的身份杈帐,我們使用對等連接詞連接:

(A)A. Fries was the leader of the College football team then and he is the director of a football now.

and右邊的he is可以省略体箕,因為說的是同一個人。

我們再來看看句3和句4的組合挑童,F(xiàn)ries看到一件事累铅,正是句4的全部內(nèi)容:

(B)A. Fries saw that the College football team lost in the important game.

這里的that引導(dǎo)的從句的主語不同于主句的主語,省略的時候我們使用所有格:

A. Fries saw the College football team's loss in the important game.

然后我們再來看看句5和句6的組合站叼,句5中Fries提出的something就是句6娃兽,他愿意承擔責(zé)任:

A. Fries offered that he would assume responsibility.

簡化后:

A. Fries offered to assume responsibility.

我們現(xiàn)在加入變形后的句A,將A.Fries提出來用作主語:

A. Fries , who was the leader of the College football team then and the director of a football club now, offered to assume responsibility.

這里的主語who和be動詞was可以簡化省略掉尽楔。上一句的Fries要負責(zé)投储,是由于句B的內(nèi)容,我們加入句B:

Because he saw the College football team's loss in the important game, A Fries, the leader of the College football team then and the director of a football club now, offered to assume responsibility.

簡化because從句為:

Seeing the College football team's loss in the important game, A Fries, the leader of the College football team then and the director of a football club now, offered to assume responsibility.

我們還有句7沒有加入進去阔馋,提出辭呈是assume的方式玛荞,最佳的介詞短語是使用by,不過由于by是介詞后面必須跟名詞呕寝,我們的動詞也要作一定的改變:

Seeing the College football team's loss in the important game, A Fries, the leader of the College football team then and the director of a football club now, offered to assume responsibility by tendering his resignation.

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