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The chart compares the difference between male students and female students when choosing their major at university in Australia in 1995.
第一段
Male students prefer to choose Engineering as their main subject,accounting for 19%.（和女性有個鮮明的對比践美，前面需要提到這是最大的差距键畴，the biggest gender difference was observed in Engineering,~.后面需要與女性形成鮮明對比：in marked contrast to 2% of female students.）
The gender gap was also clear in Computing,where 10% of male students chose this subject,while only 4% of female students study computing.(對比女性的可以改成compared with 4% of female students.)
原文范例：只提了男性的最多的兩個專業(yè)倒得，未提女性光戈。
with：with around 14% and 10% of male students pursuing a degree in these two fields.（pursue a degree啃沪；with sb doing）
第二段
Female students' favourite subject was Art and Humanities,accounting for 19% of females.But only 13% of males chose this subject.（前面可以加上岸更，in contrast烙肺。最好不用accounting for,因為主語為subject钦勘。修改：后半句為where they outnumbered men(19% to 13%).where 19% of females chose this subject.）（另一種修改方式示血，將A變成主語棋傍，A and H was the most popular subject among females,accounting for 19%.）
Health was another popular subject among females,accounting for 15%.（要對比男性，書上例句是：more than three times the figure for men(only 4%).）
Women were also more likely to study education than men(10% and 6% respectively).
第三段
兩個性別差異不明顯的
The gender gap was narrow in accounting and Economics.Where 13% of females and 11% of males chose to study.（可以變換句式：which was selected by 13% of men and 11% of their female counterparts.）
同樣在B难审，性別差異也不明顯
Likewise in Business Studies,~（書上例句背誦）
最后一段瘫拣，總結：
Overall,scientific subjects ? male dominated
be popular with women
business related subjects
