寫作|request cooperation

(碎碎念:關(guān)于復(fù)盤 ? ?精讀班和舉起被子相繼結(jié)束,要好好消化下横蜒,不打算整理書面復(fù)盤材料,趁周末仔細(xì)聽精讀落下的博學(xué)獎(jiǎng)音頻仅炊、翻看Letters To A Young Poet?的notes)

Part One ? ?講解筆記

1. in that case ? 假使那樣澎蛛,在那時(shí)候,如果是那樣的話

In that case, let's eat in rather rather than go out for dinner. 那樣子的話谋逻,我們晚餐就在家里吃,不要出去吃了斤贰。

In that case, those scoring high in psychopathy psychopathy had a lesser reaction. 在這種情況下次询,得分高的精神病患反應(yīng)較小。

=by this chance, in that situation, if so??

2. new words:

>doable 可行的 (within one's power and is feasible)the task is doable

>sales-pitch? 推銷口號(hào) ? ? ? ?pitch? 宣傳用語(yǔ)

>what do you think of launching it on April 21st??

推出送巡,發(fā)布(新產(chǎn)品)

If a company launches a new product, it makes it available to the public.

>training objectives, the group of learners it caters to, the syllabus 教學(xué)大綱

3. To make that goal possible, we probably need to put out a detailed course design by next Monday, April 10th? ?學(xué)習(xí)銜接盒卸,“為了達(dá)成某事,···”

4. I am happy to coordinate any assistance you might need to complete the task in three short days. Just let me know. 表達(dá)愿意隨時(shí)協(xié)助對(duì)方的誠(chéng)懇態(tài)度 ? 背下來(lái)

5. ?Just trying to check in with you regarding?where?we are on (where we are蔽介,真的就是很地道的描述“我們做到哪一步了”的地道英語(yǔ)說(shuō)法)?that project Jany left to us last week. Quite a big load to sort out ··· before this Friday, isn’t it?(表示和對(duì)方同一陣線,這工作確實(shí)難做)Had to put aside some client files to get this thing done. Anyway, I have gone through the first half of the cluster and attached it here for your review. Also I am thinking(I am thinking比I think會(huì)更柔和犀呼,更有商量的意味)it will be good to leave two days’ time for revision before turning it over to Jany, just in case the integration of our works calls for some major overhaul.(細(xì)雨無(wú)聲地低調(diào)建議“早完成以防拖延帶來(lái)的各種來(lái)不及”的這樣一個(gè)做事角度)That means, I better start merging the two parts this evening(把對(duì)別人的要求轉(zhuǎn)化成對(duì)自己的要求的角度來(lái)提薇组,同時(shí)也激勵(lì)對(duì)方來(lái)考慮你的情形,幫助你律胀,而不是被你催的不得不交作業(yè)--兩種完全不同的心理狀態(tài)), so do you think you would be able to send me your piece and your comments on mine by 5 pm today? I might just bring the work home(又回到自己的苦上了貌矿,這樣能夠tone down你剛才的強(qiáng)勢(shì)要求罪佳,同時(shí)也讓對(duì)方更愿意出于不拖你后腿的目的而重視這件事).

6. dumb down

降低…的理解難度;減少…的專業(yè)內(nèi)容;(尤指對(duì)教科書加以)簡(jiǎn)化 If you dumb down something, you make it easier for people to understand, especially when this spoils it.

No one favored dumbing down the magazine. 沒有人贊成降低雜志的專業(yè)水準(zhǔn)。

My God, I thought, they're trying to dumb down the curriculum even further! 我的老天啊尽楔,我心里說(shuō)第练,他們還在設(shè)法讓課程變得更簡(jiǎn)單。

7. 安妮的回答

>Q: 師太你一般都從哪些角度來(lái)思考郵件寫什么內(nèi)容的呢娇掏?A:擺在對(duì)方的位置上想我的信件的效果,然后又努力梳理清楚我究竟要達(dá)到什么目的

>挖掘你真心感激之處婴梧。Always dig internally for the specific truth. Truth is the easiest thing to put forward and will achieve the best effect.

>商業(yè)郵件有個(gè)小原則就是不要問(wèn)那些寒暄的問(wèn)題,人家還得回個(gè)郵件專門說(shuō) I am doing good ...thank you

8.“以你的時(shí)間為主”? I am happy to go with any opening in your schedule.

9. 寫給投資人的follow-up emails

Dear Mr.Finn,

Hope this email finds you well.

I am the co-founder of ABC company offering website design and hosting services to SMEs*. We met a few days ago discussing how our team can introduce the service to a larger number of users and I really appreciate your advice and tips on this.

We are ready to put your suggestions into practice and I am wondering if we could meet again in a month or two, at a time that works the best for you or any openings in your schedule checking the progress of our new strategy. 這一段態(tài)度誠(chéng)懇 銜接自然

Thank you again for your time and guidance. We look forward to seeing you next time.

Best regards,

Alex Jiang

*SMEs: Small and Medium Enterprises

10. 催促信句型

> I am pretty sure that you forgot to ···

> We can meet up at any time that works the best for you.

> Also,if you need any help, I am happy to be at your service. 很樂意為您效勞

11. 催促信范文

Dear Janet,

Thanks for your recommendation of reviewing all plants’ total costs, which optimize the audit plan as a whole. Besides, with the data analyst is tool provided by KPMG, reviewing process should be much easier. Here’s the thing, as we’ve reached the agreement of the plan, what do you think April 12th be the day to complete initial evaluation? Then we can come up with writing report, discussion with management and handover draft to Daisy on April 20 th as memo required. However it would be greater if we could sent the draft 3 days earlier, which will leave her sometime for asking and revising. Hence,the earlier initial evaluation can be done , the better. (這里的建議棒塞蹭,不滿足于截止日期前完成任務(wù),“我們交稿時(shí)間越提前岗屏、那么預(yù)留給上級(jí)審閱的時(shí)間約充足”,不僅遞進(jìn)了一層調(diào)動(dòng)收信人積極性这刷,而且把催促的理由說(shuō)明白了)

Should you have any question, please feel free to let me know.

Based on our previous smoothly cooperation, hopefully we can achieve awesome result one more time. (祝愿合作愉快 背下來(lái))

Best,

Annabel


Part Two ? ?Composition

Dear Joseph,

How have you been 娩井?

Just trying to check in with you regarding where we are on that display board Henry left us last week. It is an urgent order that required on April 17th. To make that goal possible, we probably need to deliver the electronic version file to our advertising agency before April 15th. The earlier the board can be printed, the better. Hence, I am wondering if you could send me the proposed photos tomorrow. In that case, I would work out the layout in time.

Also, I am happy to coordinate any assistance you might need.

Yours,

Sophie

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