Content:
Part I | Principles
1. The Transaction
2. Simplicity
3. Clutter (Writing clean English Sentence)
4. Style (Preserving your identity)
5. The audience (Who am I writing for)
6. Words (The only tools you’ve got)
7. Usage (What is good usage)
Part II | Methods
8. Unity (Anchor of good writing)
9. The lead and the ending
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Words and Expressions:
1 Coax the reader a little more; keep him inquisitive..
? coax有三種用法,但使用原則 :When you coax, you have to be nice about it – you can’t threaten or force.
【釋義】
1. If you coax someone into doing something, you gently try to persuade them to do it.
? ? After lunch, she watched, listened and coaxed Bobby into talking about himself.
2. If you coax something such as information out of someone, you gently persuade them to give it to you.
? ? The WPC talked yesterday of her role in trying to coax vital information from the young victim.
3. If you coax a machine or device into doing something, you make it work by operating it very slowly and gently.
? ? He would stride on stage then proceed to coax the sweetest possible sounds out of his violin.
2. it was asked by the poultry industry to relax the conditions under which the ingredients might also include chicken.
? ? Relax 這里指make less formal or restrained, 也可以用于rules, 比如“Rules governing student conduct relaxed somewhat in recent years.”
3. Probably no other museum is so personal a pilgrimage to our past.
pilgrimage指朝圣者的旅程玲销,但也可以指 "fans often visit the places that are — or were — significant to their heroes."坦报,本章描述棒球粉絲的片段應該是后者的含義板辽。
【釋義】
A pilgrimage is a journey that someone makes to a place that is very important to them
4. the end that’s in sight turns out to be a mirage
mirage是海市蜃樓的意思僵刮,但也可表示 “sth not real or true, although it may seem to be.”
Thoughts:
釣魚最重要的步驟之一是什么,讓魚上鉤厘托。
讓魚上鉤的秘訣是什么:魚餌食呻。
那寫作的魚餌靠什么流炕,a good lead澎现。
在這個可以“先嘗后買”,處處是distraction每辟,每個人的attention span只有140字的年代剑辫,魚餌的作用有多重要?
問問自己渠欺,有多少次在試讀章節(jié)以后妹蔽,放棄一整片森林。又有多少次挠将,在看到“熬過前兩章胳岂,后面很精彩”的點評以后,不愿意去嘗試一本書舔稀。
原因可能有很多種曾撤,但歸根結底修己,開頭不夠吸引人,不足以吸引讀者讀下去缀磕。
學著做魚餌洞渤,先從學會講故事開始熊咽。積累素材來講一個好故事拉背,總會有人來聽住闯。
那么,釣魚的另一個重要步驟是什么:收線拂酣。
寫作中的收線靠什么:a good ending。
收線講究的又是什么仲义,timing婶熬。
收早了,魚鉤咬的不夠緊埃撵,魚會跑赵颅;收晚了,魚掙扎的太厲害暂刘,線會斷…
ending也是同理饺谬,該收就收,講完該講的谣拣,完美謝幕募寨。
Use your bait, with the perfect control, you'll hook the fish.