我們在寫作的時候，雖然內(nèi)容和使用習(xí)慣有很大不同凡人，但從出錯的規(guī)律上，可從如下的幾個方面得到些啟發(fā)（本文學(xué)生例句都是從學(xué)生作文樣本里摘出）：
一叹阔、詞匯表達
“有”的概念：
學(xué)生：1挠轴、North part of the town has a river.
2、watching too much TV has a great influence on children’s health.
解析：漢語的“有”延伸意義有很多条获，不像英語have僅僅表達從屬關(guān)系（極少數(shù)非正式的情況也能表示一種存在忠荞，比如the building has a window in the front），因此像這種表示位置的（例1）和其他抽象意義的就不能用have了帅掘。
參考例句：1 In the north part of the town lies a river.
2 watching too much TV would impair children’s health.
根據(jù)
漢語：此外委煤，電腦幫助孩子們根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)驗，調(diào)整自己的進度和選擇他們自己覺得舒服的挑戰(zhàn)級別修档。
學(xué)生：the kids can adjust the grades and the schedule according to their feelings and experience.
解決：一說根據(jù)....就很輕易想到according to,其實這里想要表達的是選擇自己的或者適合的意思：Besides, computers help children to be in control of their experience, to set their own pace, and to select the level of challenge with which they feel comfortable.
時間
漢語：的確碧绞，長時間使用電腦可能會對孩子的身體健康構(gòu)成危害，如輻射吱窝、姿態(tài)和骨骼問題讥邻。
學(xué)生：it is true that using computers for too long would probably impair their health such as spinal health and body posture.
參考例句：it is true that frequent and prolonged computer sessions may pose physical health risks for children, such as harmful effects of radiation, and posture and skeletal problems.
過長等時間不要僅僅是for too long，和時間有關(guān)還可以用frequent 這些詞院峡。
影響
大家作文里經(jīng)常會用到的關(guān)于影響的詞：Influence , effect, affect, impact等兴使，比如：
學(xué)生：books would pose a great good(positive) influence on the imagination and creativeness of children.
解析：但是，我們還可以這樣想：如果是正面的照激，就說明是有效的（valid, effective, efficacious+in&for）发魄；如果是負面的，那就可能是打擾（disturb俩垃， interfere）励幼，甚至是阻礙（hinder, impede）了某人或某事。 ??
參考例句：1 books would be effective for developing children’s imagination and creativeness. 2 being rich, to some extent, would impede people’s willingness to help others.
二句式結(jié)構(gòu)
指代關(guān)系
學(xué)生：His father gave him a dog that he liked very much.
解析：that引導(dǎo)的句子的he指代不明口柳，既可以說是父親喜歡的苹粟，也可以理解為是孩子。
學(xué)生：Firstly, the information young people obtain now are much more than it in the past.
解析：it就是指上文具體說的事物跃闹，除非做形式主語嵌削，否則也不帶事毛好。that往往指代事情，或者比如：the weight of a car is more than that of a bike. 這里用that不是代替的汽車的重量掷贾，而是自行車的重量睛榄。所以that往往代替的是相同類別荣茫，而不是同一事物想帅。
其實我們的用詞習(xí)慣和句式表達習(xí)慣中不合適的地方，都有規(guī)律可循啡莉，只要明白了這些就能避免錯誤或者做的更好港准。
