返修信（response letter）大抵都是長(zhǎng)這樣刁赖。
今天我們總結(jié)了開(kāi)篇那些常見(jiàn)的套話。
1. Thank you very much for reviewing ourmanuscript. We also greatly appreciate the reviewers for their complimentarycomments and suggestions. We have carried out the experiments that thereviewers suggested（沒(méi)補(bǔ)實(shí)驗(yàn)就把這個(gè)去掉）?and revised the manuscript accordingly. Please find attached apoint-by-point response to reviewer’s concerns. We hope that you find ourresponses satisfactory and that the manuscript is now acceptable forpublication.
2. We would like to thank the reviewer forcareful and thorough reading of this manuscript and for the thoughtful commentsand constructive suggestions, which help to improve the quality of this manuscript.Our response follows (the reviewer’s comments are in italics). (審稿意見(jiàn)斜體)
3. Thank you for your letter andconstructive comments concerning our manuscript entitled “XXXX文章題目”. We have studied your commentscarefully and made major correction which we hope meet with your approval. Weanswer your questions or comments in details in the following texts. Detailedanswer to review:
4. It is with excitement that I resubmit toyou a revised version of manuscript?“文章題目”for the “雜志名“. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to revise andresubmit this manuscript. In keeping with my last communication with you, I amresubmitting this revision before the agreed upon deadline, March 16, 2012. Iappreciate the time and detail provided by each reviewer and by you and haveincorporated the suggested changes into the manuscript to the best of myability. The manuscript has certainly benefited from these insightful revisionsuggestions. I look forward to working with you and the reviewers to move thismanuscript closer to publication in the?雜志名.?（這段拍馬屁的寫得真長(zhǎng)哇僚焦，憋不出來(lái)的可以參考下）
5. Thank you for reading our manuscript andreviewing it, which will help us improve it to a better scientific level. Werevised our manuscript, and quite a lot of changes have taken place. So, wehave sent the revised manuscript, and a version containing all the changes tobe visible. At the following, the points mentioned by the reviewers will bediscussed: (其實(shí)我比較喜歡這種簡(jiǎn)單直白的開(kāi)場(chǎng)）
6. Sincerest thanks for your response andreviewers comments on our manuscript. We sincerely apologise for the great timeit has taken us to respond to these comments (due to force majeaure with firstauthor), and hope that a revised version of the manuscript will still beconsidered by?雜志名. We havemodified the paper in response to the extensive and insightful reviewercomments. We have added additional explanations for non-haematologists andadditional table (Table 1) to fully address the reviewer’s comments. Furthermore we haverewritten sections of the manuscript and we hope that this comply with thereferee’s remarks. We will respond to the comments point counter point.?（這段挺長(zhǎng)的，還就返修時(shí)間過(guò)長(zhǎng)進(jìn)行了致歉）
7.Thank you for your email dated xxxxxx enclosing the reviewers’ comments. We have carefully reviewed the comments and have revised the manuscript accordingly. Our responses are given in a point-by-point manner below. Changes to the manuscript are shown in underline/red/bold.
8.（需要潤(rùn)色）We tried our best to improve the manuscript and made some changes in the manuscript. These changes will not influence the content and framework of the paper. And here we did not list the changes but marked in red in revised paper. We appreciate for Editors/Reviewers’ warm work earnestly, and hope that the correction will meet with approval.
或者Thanks for your suggestion. We feel sorry for our poor writings, however, we do invite a friend of us who is a native English speaker from USA help polish our article. And we hope the revised manuscript could be acceptable for you.
或者 Thanks for your suggestion. We have tried our best to polish the language in the revised manuscript.
9.We feel sorry for our carelessness. In our resubmitted manuscript, the typo is revised. Thanks for your correction.
或者We have carefully checked the manuscript and corrected the errors accordingly.
10.（返修讓加文獻(xiàn)）We sincerely appreciate the valuable comments. We have checked the literatures carefully and added more references on ___ and___ into the INTRODUCTION part in the revised manuscript.
參考文獻(xiàn)1
參考文獻(xiàn)2
11.We have investigated the recyclable property for ___ by using ___ that have the best activity. Figure 1 reveals only slight decrease in the ___ after the three-run test, indicating very good stability of ___ in photocatalytic reactions.The manuscript has been revised accordingly to clarify the above concerns.
或者We agree that more study would be useful to understand details of interaction and enhancement. At this point we do not have the necessary tool-set to study the ___. We hope, in the future, to employ ___ techniques to determine ___. This study is beyond the scope of this report which focuses on answering critical questions regarding the ___. We note also that since submission of our manuscript there has been apublication by Alex Bell and Martin Head-Gordon at Berkeley showing that Fe on Au2O3 has enhanced OER activity with DFT calculations (Ref. 79). We have added this citation and reference to the manuscript.
12.If there are any other modifications we could make, we would like very much to modify them and we really appreciate your help. Thank you very much for your help.
13.Thanks for your nice suggestions. We have formatted all the references.
14.It is with excitement that I resubmit to you a revised version of manuscript （稿號(hào)） for the 雜志名. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to revise and resubmit this manuscript. In keeping with my last communication with you, I am resubmitting this revision before the agreed upondeadline. I appreciate the time and detail provided by each reviewer and by you and have incorporated the suggested changes into the manuscript to the best of my ability. The manuscript has certainly benefited from these insightful revision suggestions. I look forward to working with you and the reviewers to move this manuscript closer to publication in the雜志名. （返修有拖延時(shí)用）
15.I have responded specifically to each suggestion below, beginning with your own. To make the changes easier to identify where necessary, I have numbered them.
16.Thank you again for your positive comments on our manuscript. 雜志名 is an influential journal which aims to improve ourunderstanding of cancer prevention/other. From all the papers published in your journal, readers have been learning a lot. Hopefully, we could have our article been considered of publication in your journal. Should there been any other corrections we could make, please feel free to contact us.
17.Thank you for your kind comments on ourmanuscript entitled “文章名”. We have carefully revised the manuscript according to the reviewer’s comments. Based on the suggestions, we have made an extensive modification on the revised manuscript. Detailed revision was shown as follows. The changes to our manuscript within the document were aslo highlighted by using red colored text.
18.We feel great thanks for your professional review work onour article. As you are concerned, there are several problems that need to beaddressed. According to your nice suggestions, we have made extensivecorrections to our previous draft, the detailed corrections are listed below.
19.According to the reviewer’s comments, we have revised the manuscript extensively. If there are any other modifications we could make, we would like very much to modify them and we really appreciate your help. We hope that our manuscript could be considered for publication in your journal. Thank you very much for your help.
20.On behalf of all the contributing authors, I would like to express our sincere appreciations of your letter and reviewers’ constructive comments concerning our article entitled “XXX文章” (Manuscript No.:XXXX). These comments are all valuable and helpful for improving our article. According to the associate editor and reviewers’ comments,we have made extensive modifications to our manuscript and supplemented extra data to make our results convincing. In this revised version, changes to ourmanuscript were all highlighted within the document by using red colored text. Point-by-pointresponses to the nice associate editor and two nice reviewers are listed below this letter.
21.We would like to thank you first for all the positive comments of ourmanuscript (No.: XXXX) entitled “XXXXX”. We really appreciate your help and patience. We also think highly of the comment sof both reviewers who kindly provide professional suggestions on our manuscript.we have seriously thought about them and provided our response to reviewers. Forthe detailed response, please see below.
22.According to the associate editor and reviewers’ comments, we have made extensive modifications to our manuscript and supplemented extra data to make our results convincing.（根據(jù)審稿意見(jiàn)曙痘，我們對(duì)我們的手稿進(jìn)行了大量修改芳悲，并補(bǔ)充了額外的數(shù)據(jù)，以使我們的結(jié)果令人信服边坤。）
23.In this revised version, changes to our manuscript were all highlighted within thedocument by using red colored text.（在這個(gè)修訂版本中名扛，我們的手稿的更改都通過(guò)使用紅色文本在文檔中突出顯示。）
24.Thank you for yournice comments on our article. According to your suggestions, we havesupplemented several data here and corrected several mistakes in our previousdraft. Based on your comments, we also attached a point-by-point letter to youand the other two reviewers. We have made extensive revisions to our previous draft. The detailed point-by-point responses are listed below. （感謝您對(duì)我們文章的評(píng)論茧痒，根據(jù)您的建議肮韧，我們?cè)谶@里補(bǔ)充了幾個(gè)數(shù)據(jù)并糾正了我們之前的一些錯(cuò)誤。根據(jù)您的意見(jiàn)旺订，我們還向您和其他兩位審稿人的評(píng)審意見(jiàn)一一回復(fù)弄企， 我們對(duì)以前的草案進(jìn)行了大量修改，下面列出了詳細(xì)的逐點(diǎn)響應(yīng)区拳。）
25.Thanks for yourhelp. We feel really sorry for our carelessness. （謝謝你的幫助拘领，我們對(duì)粗心大意感到非常抱歉。）
26.Thank you for your reminding. You and theother two reviewers’ comments are all of great importance to our article. Allof these comments have contributed a lot to improve the quality of our article.After this revision, we have written a point-by-point response letter to you asyou can see above. Meanwhile, we also wrote a point-by-point response letter tothe other two nice reviewers to acknowledge their helps and denote where we made revisions.（謝謝您的提醒樱调， 您和其他審稿人的評(píng)論對(duì)我們的文章都非常重要约素。所有這些評(píng)論都為提高我們文章的質(zhì)量做出了很多貢獻(xiàn)。在這次修訂之后，我們已經(jīng)為您寫了一封逐點(diǎn)回復(fù)信，您可以在上面看到待德。與此同時(shí)沪么，我們還向其他兩位審稿人寫了一份回復(fù)信，以表達(dá)他們的幫助，并標(biāo)識(shí)了我們?cè)谀男┑胤竭M(jìn)行了修訂。）
27.We feel greatthanks for your professional review work on our article. As you are concerned,there are several problems that need to be addressed. According to your nicesuggestions, we have made extensive corrections to our previous draft. We haveadded necessary data to supplement our results and edited our articleextensively. The detailed corrections are listed below. （我們對(duì)您的專業(yè)評(píng)審工作感到非常感謝嚣鄙。如您所知放祟，有幾個(gè)問(wèn)題需要解決鳍怨。根據(jù)您的建議，我們對(duì)之前的草案進(jìn)行了大量更正跪妥。我們添加了必要的數(shù)據(jù)來(lái)補(bǔ)充我們的結(jié)果鞋喇，并對(duì)我們的文章進(jìn)行了全面的編輯。詳細(xì)的更正如下眉撵。）
28.We feel sorry that we did not provide enough information about XXXX.（非常抱歉我們沒(méi)有提供足夠的信息…..）
或it is really agiant mistake to the whole quality of our article. We feel sorry for our carelessness. We have corrected it and we also feel great thanks for your pointour. （這確實(shí)影響了本文的整體質(zhì)量侦香，我們對(duì)于自己的失誤非常抱歉，但我們已經(jīng)糾正了它纽疟，我們也非常感謝您的觀點(diǎn)罐韩。）
29.thanks for yoursuggestions. We feel sorry for our poor writings, however, we do invite afriend of us who is a native English speaker from USA help polish our article. Dueto our friend’s help, the article was edited extensively. And we hope therevised manuscript could be acceptable for you. （謝謝你的建議，我們?yōu)槲覀冊(cè)愀獾淖髌犯械竭z憾污朽，但是散吵，我們邀請(qǐng)了來(lái)自美國(guó)的母語(yǔ)為英語(yǔ)的人幫助我們修改我們的文章。在朋友的幫助下文章被廣泛編輯蟆肆。我們希望手稿可以為您接受矾睦。）
30.thanks for your careful checks. We aresorry for our carelessness. Based on your comments, we have made thecorrections to make the unit harmonized within the whole manuscript. （謝謝您的仔細(xì)檢查。我們因粗心大意而煩惱炎功。根據(jù)您的意見(jiàn)枚冗，我們進(jìn)行了修正，使整個(gè)手稿內(nèi)的單位協(xié)調(diào)一致蛇损。）
31. your suggestion really means a lot to us. Yes,it would be more understandable if we XXX. （您的建議對(duì)我們來(lái)說(shuō)真的意味著很多赁温。是的，如果我們XXX州藕，這將更容易理解束世。）
32.According to your suggestion, we havecorrected the “XXX” into “XXX”. （根據(jù)您的建議，我們將“XXX”修改為“XXX”床玻。）
33.thanks for your correction. It was indeeda serious grammatical error. And we have corrected it according to yoursuggestion. （謝謝您的糾正。這確實(shí)是一個(gè)嚴(yán)重的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤沉帮。我們已經(jīng)根據(jù)你的建議糾正了它锈死。）
34. thanks for yoursuggestions. We feel sorry for the improper wording. We have used “XXXX” as yousuggested. （謝謝您的建議。我們?yōu)椴徽_的措辭感到抱歉穆壕。我們已經(jīng)使用了“XXXX”待牵。）
35.According to the reviewer’s comments, wehave revised the manuscript extensively. If there are any other modificationswe could make, we would like very much to modify them and we really appreciateyour help. “xxxx” is a journal of great popularity and prestige. We hope that ourmanuscript could be considered for publication in your journal. Thank you verymuch for your help. （根據(jù)審稿人的意見(jiàn)，我們已經(jīng)廣泛修改了手稿喇勋。如果我們可以做任何其他修改缨该，我們非常希望修改它們，我們非常感謝您的幫助川背》∧茫“xxxx”是一本頗受歡迎和聲望的雜志蛤袒。我們希望我們的稿件可以考慮在您的期刊上發(fā)表。非常感謝您的幫助膨更。）
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