中文版本:
1赋秀、浮世萬(wàn)千,吾愛(ài)有三持际。一為日沃琅,二為月,三為卿【或:日蜘欲、月與卿】益眉。日為朝,月為暮,卿為朝朝暮暮郭脂。
2年碘、天地之間,三事吾之所欣:晝則樂(lè)日展鸡,夜則惜月屿衅,一世則戀君∮ū祝【中國(guó)日?qǐng)?bào)網(wǎng)英語(yǔ)點(diǎn)津】
3涤久、萬(wàn)丈紅塵,唯悅者三忍弛,日月與卿响迂。日出東方,月落西廂细疚,執(zhí)子之手蔗彤,不老天荒。
4疯兼、予獨(dú)愛(ài)世間三事然遏,晝之日,夜之月吧彪,汝之永恒待侵。
5、在這個(gè)世界我只喜歡三件事 太陽(yáng) 月亮 和你 太陽(yáng)是為了白天而存在 月亮是為了夜晚 而你對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)是永恒的来氧。
網(wǎng)傳英文版本:
1诫给、I love three things in this world. Sun, moon and you.?Sun for morning, moon for night , and you forever .【暮光之城香拉,愛(ài)德華所說(shuō)啦扬,但中英文文檔均沒(méi)有找到】
2、I love 3 things! The sun, the moon, and U! The sun for the day, the moon for the night and you forever!【 短信合集書(shū)SMS So Much In Love 凫碌,據(jù)稱(chēng)出版於2006年扑毡,印尼,說(shuō)白了就是一條短信盛险。https://www.bukupedia.com/id/book/id-1112/sms-so-much-in-love.html】
先來(lái)看機(jī)器的翻譯瞄摊,來(lái)自訊飛:
I love three things.One for the day, two for the month, three for the secretary.The sun is morning, the moon is evening, and you are morning and evening.
接著看我們的翻譯:
1、I love three things. One for the sun苦掘,two for the moon换帜,three for you.The sun is morning, the moon is evening, and you are morning and evening.
2、I love three things in the world, the sun,the moon and you. The sun is morning,the moon is night,and you are everything.
3鹤啡、I love three things in the world惯驼,the first is the sun , the second is the moon and the third is you. The sun is for the daytime.The moon is for the night.But you are my everything.
4、There are so many things in the world , I only love three. The sun, the moon and you. The sun for the day, the moon for the night and you for ever .
5、There are many beauties in the world,and my love lays in three of them,the sun,the moon,and you.Sun represents the day, moon represents the night, and you are the loved one in my heart.
6祟牲、Millions of things being in the world, only three can be called my love.First is the sun,second is the moon,and third is you. Sun is the lively morning,moon is the charming night, and you are the combined.
7隙畜、Millions of things being in the world, but only three things can be my love.First is the sun,second is the moon,and third is you.Sun is daytime, moon is night, and you are my day and night.
8、I love three things ,sun,moon and you.sun is dawning,while moon is nighttime .You are dawn and night .
9说贝、There are three kinds of my love. One is for the day, two are for the month, and three are for you. The sun is the morning, the moon is the evening, and you are the morning and evening.
10议惰、All the world, only three things hit my heart.sun ,moon,and you.sun stands morning,moon stands night,you stand all the day.
11、There are three kinds of my love. The first is for the sun, the second are for the moon, and the third are for you. The sun is the morning, the moon is the evening, and you are the morning and evening.
12乡恕、My love is three. One is the day, the other is the moon, and the other is the Qing Dynasty. The sun is the sun, the moon is the twilight, the Qing is the twilight.
最后我們來(lái)做一點(diǎn)分析:
1言询、for應(yīng)該是不需要的,for用在這里應(yīng)該是對(duì)應(yīng)到“為”字傲宜,從中文的角度看倍试,這里的“為”應(yīng)該是“是”的意思,所以蛋哭,即便要用县习,也是is比f(wàn)or更恰當(dāng)。
2谆趾、至于是millions of things還是three things躁愿,這個(gè)并不太重要,“浮世萬(wàn)千”可譯可不譯沪蓬。當(dāng)然彤钟,考試的話(huà),還是需要譯出來(lái)的跷叉。
3逸雹、名詞不裸奔,即名詞前面必須有冠詞云挟、定冠詞等進(jìn)行修飾梆砸。sun, moon作為獨(dú)一無(wú)二的東西,其前應(yīng)加定冠詞the园欣,不能直接稱(chēng)呼sun帖世,moon。同理沸枯,daytime日矫,evening等也不能單獨(dú)使用“罅瘢【這里必定有人要提出不可數(shù)名詞的概念哪轿,到時(shí)候再討論】
4、關(guān)于two are的使用翔怎,在這個(gè)句子中窃诉,一、二、三應(yīng)為第一褐奴、第二按脚、第三。two are敦冬,three are的用法是不合適的辅搬。
小結(jié):
英譯中,中譯英脖旱,都沒(méi)有嚴(yán)格標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的答案堪遂,只要把意思表達(dá)清楚就行。
嚴(yán)復(fù)先生在《天演論》中講到“譯事三難:信萌庆、達(dá)溶褪、雅”,提出了對(duì)翻譯的要求践险。
“信”是指是指翻譯要準(zhǔn)確猿妈,應(yīng)盡可能地表達(dá)原文的意思。
“達(dá)”是指不拘泥于原文巍虫,要使翻譯平滑順暢彭则,并以接近母語(yǔ)的自然方式表達(dá),不生硬占遥。
“雅”是指語(yǔ)句要得體適當(dāng)俯抖。
至于上述的翻譯,是否達(dá)到了信達(dá)雅的境界瓦胎,網(wǎng)上是有很多爭(zhēng)議的芬萍。這里咱們就不過(guò)多討論了,以后我們盡量選擇大師的文字和翻譯來(lái)做練習(xí)吧搔啊,哈哈~~