一. 感想
"The Sound of Your Voice" 這一章呻率,Zinsser講到了以下要點(diǎn):
Don't alter your voice to fit your subject.
The effortless style is achieved by strenuous effort and constant refining.
Finding a voice that your readers will enjoy is largely a matter of taste.
Freshness is crucial.
Never hesitate to imitate another writer.
Find the best writers in the fields that interest you and read their work aloud.
因此禀横,若想帶給讀者輕快而有趣,新鮮而引人入勝的閱讀感受,寫(xiě)作者是要通過(guò)長(zhǎng)期而持續(xù)的修煉和領(lǐng)悟才能做到的背镇。其中,模仿喜歡的作家的作品來(lái)進(jìn)行習(xí)作,不失為是一條捷徑惶凝。大可不必?fù)?dān)心會(huì)因此而失去個(gè)性,因?yàn)橹挥薪?jīng)過(guò)大量的模仿和思考犬钢,我們才能逐步形成自己的風(fēng)格苍鲜。當(dāng)自己的風(fēng)格形成了,無(wú)論你寫(xiě)什么玷犹,都"Be Yourself"就好混滔,無(wú)需為題材而改變自己。
讀到這些理論之前箱舞,我曾在自己的閱讀和寫(xiě)作中有過(guò)一些模糊的體會(huì)遍坟。例如,若是某個(gè)階段我讀的書(shū)很有意思晴股,那一時(shí)期自己寫(xiě)的東西就會(huì)有意無(wú)意地與作者的語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格所接近愿伴。其實(shí)很多時(shí)候都是下意識(shí)地模仿,由于連續(xù)輸入的強(qiáng)烈印象电湘,再加上喜愛(ài)的緣故隔节,便自然而然地受其影響鹅经,寫(xiě)作中就有了它的影子。
前段時(shí)間因?yàn)楣ぷ餍枰踅耄乙獜钠胀ㄓ^眾(愛(ài)好者)的角度瘾晃,寫(xiě)一寫(xiě)看機(jī)器人對(duì)抗賽轉(zhuǎn)播的觀后感。在整個(gè)寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中幻妓,我一直在竭力避免從技術(shù)的角度去分析轉(zhuǎn)播的情況蹦误,而是不斷思考作為一個(gè)機(jī)器人愛(ài)好者(實(shí)際上我不僅不是,就連游戲經(jīng)驗(yàn)也沒(méi)有)會(huì)更關(guān)心哪些問(wèn)題肉津,又如何才能輕快强胰、有趣地表述出來(lái)。
當(dāng)時(shí)倍覺(jué)力不從心妹沙,我發(fā)現(xiàn)即使我寫(xiě)清了所有的要點(diǎn)偶洋,文章也不夠吸引人,因?yàn)樘搅司嗵牵稽c(diǎn)兒也不好玩玄窝。那時(shí)候我便意識(shí)到,想要做到“好玩”悍引,需要更深的功底(包括寫(xiě)作本身和背景知識(shí))恩脂。當(dāng)我們沒(méi)有技術(shù)負(fù)擔(dān)了,才能輕松地玩起來(lái)吗铐,寫(xiě)得更有意思东亦,從而吸引讀者。
二. 字詞
1. breezy
(1) 原文:What they write is the breezy style.
(2) 字典解釋:a breezy person is happy, confident, and relaxed
(3) 造句:When I talk to foreigners, I try to sound breezy, although I'm pretty nervous.
2. ingratiate
(1) 原文:He's not trying to ingratiate himself with the reader.
(2) 解釋:巴結(jié)唬渗,討好
(3) 造句:He always ingratiates himself with anyone who might be useful to him.
3. bummed out
(1) 原文:Frankly, the whole deal kind of bummed me out.
(2) 解釋:失望
(3) 造句:This result bummed me out.
4. shut-eye
(1) 原文:Believe you me, a guy can lose a heckuva lot of shut-eye.
(2) 字典解釋:sleep
(3) 造句:I wanna get some shut-eye after lunch.
5. shorthand
(1) 原文:They are everywhere in the air around us, familiar friends just waiting to be helpful, ready to express complex ideas for us in the shorthand form of metaphor.
(2) 字典解釋:a shorter but less clear way of saying something
(3) 造句:"Relocated" is shorthand for "given a worse job a long way away.
6. intangible
(1) 原文:Saying that isn't much help—taste is a quality so intangible that it can't even be defined.
(2) 解釋:不可捉摸的典阵,難以理解的
(3) 造句:The cathedral has an intangible air of holiness about it.