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【學(xué)號】I15煎雞蛋

【前言】

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【文章】

? ? Recently, complaints about the value of higher education?peals?peals in ears of students. Some strongly claim that graduates among urban students and rural ones treated whole differently in terms of employment, social statures stature and salaries, which renders rural graduates earn much lower than previously not go to college at all. While others, an optimistic attitude appeared, declaims the gap between rural-urban inequalities destined to fade away after the first two years of graduation. From my personal perspectives, higher education exclusively in the 21st century should be guided to broaden students' horizon, develop? establish their own social networks and pick up social skills they once lacked.

According to?Basing on latest estimates, graduates with a bachelor?degree can expect to be far better off after 20 years than those whose intentions failed to get enrolled in universities. It is a long-time process that the silver lighting of higher education shine shines bright .Moreover, highly skilled people are badly in need through labor markets, at the same time putting a damper on labor-intensive industries. Entrepreneurs have a special preference for resources capable of resolving sophisticated problems, which often manipulated by intellect received higher education. The differences between the educated and those who do not educated in college are no other than this: thinking pattern, horizon and problem-solving capability are differ?differing widely all over the map.?We are living in an era where the significance of education achieves its dominance.

?It is recommended that?college students perceive their?youth as the first station of a life long marathon.?Studying is of great importance, which just like?a sort of elixir injected?to your life that generates enormous energy. With knowledge acquired, operations performed, experiences gained,?you will someday realize that education will never let you down.

【范文】

? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?We Cant Do Without a Higher Education?

? ? The gap between the ?rural and urban university gra duates looms in several aspects from the unemployment rate to chances to get a decent job and salary. With hefty tuition fees of college education and a flat salary for graduates, it is justified to question the worth of a higher education. Yet, this gap can be remedied by socialization and a resilient spirit as it will become less obvious after the first two years of graduation. Besides, statistics show that some degrees such as engineering do pay off eventually.

? ? ?As far as I am concerned, a university education is a must for students. To begin with, universities are the places where individuals are offered equal opportunities to maximize their personal value, and accordingly for them to break free from the social strata in which they?are born. This is especially true for the rural students whose parents lack the social networking which may secure their sons and daughters a decent job. Without a college education. it would be harder to climb up the privileged social position. Furthermore, hefty though the tuition seems to be to complete college, in a market-oriented society a college education is the very basic stepping stone for a white-collar job. Last but not least, a college education plays a vital role in cuitivating ones intellectual and interactive qualities. The aim of a higher education is more to mold the ingredients of intelligence such critical thinking, creative power imagination and as intercommunicative abilities than to instill information into students. With these treasures that may apply to almost any field, even though the expertise picked from colleges may not cater to the market demand at once, students will still have a better chance of seeking jobs in other fields.

? ? To summarize, besides the understandably urgent need to harvest what we sow in universities, we should consider the true worth of a higher education at a higher level instead of only pandering to mundaneness.


? ? The gap between the ?rural and urban university gra duates looms in several aspects from the unemployment rate to chances to get a decent job and salary. With hefty tuition fees of college education and a flat salary for graduates, it is justified to question the worth of a higher education. Yet, this gap can be remedied by socialization and a resilient spirit as it will become less obvious after the first two years of graduation. Besides, statistics show that some degrees such as engineering do pay off eventually.

【行文分析】

"首先提出來自城市背景和農(nóng)村背景的大學(xué)畢業(yè)生在諸多方面都存在差異,由此自然引出高等教育是否值得的話題。然后繼續(xù)概括選段中的支持與不支持大學(xué)值得讀的觀點锦亦。"


? ? ?As far as I am concerned, a university education is a must for students. To begin with, universities are the places where individuals are offered equal opportunities to maximize their personal value, and accordingly for them to break free from the social strata in which they?are born. This is especially true for the rural students whose parents lack the social networking which may secure their sons and daughters a decent job. Without a college education. it would be harder to climb up the privileged social position. Furthermore, hefty though the tuition seems to be to complete college, in a market-oriented society a college education is the very basic stepping stone for a white-collar job. Last but not least, a college education plays a vital role in cuitivating ones intellectual and interactive qualities. The aim of a higher education is more to mold the ingredients of intelligence such critical thinking, creative power imagination and as intercommunicative abilities than to instill information into students. With these treasures that may apply to almost any field, even though the expertise picked from colleges may not cater to the market demand at once, students will still have a better chance of seeking jobs in other fields.

【行文分析】

"中間部分首先表明自己的點即a university education is a must for students.接著從三方面論證大學(xué)學(xué)位是學(xué)生必須獲得的文憑茶凳。首先,大學(xué)是打破遺傳下來的社會階層的最佳場所;其次,在當今市場經(jīng)濟主導(dǎo)的社會,大學(xué)學(xué)位是獲得體面的白領(lǐng)工作的敲門磚嫂拴。再次,即使是那些不是很熱門的專業(yè)的畢業(yè)生,因為在大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)過程中培養(yǎng)出的品質(zhì)也能讓他們在社會中獲得一席之地。"


? ? To summarize, besides the understandably urgent need to harvest what we sow in universities, we should consider the true worth of a higher education at a higher level instead of only pandering to mundaneness.

【行文分析】

"提升主題,指出大學(xué)教育的宗旨和本質(zhì),從而使文章上升到一個高度并自然收尾慧妄。"

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