AD結(jié)尾段(30-40)
- conclusion 1
restate position+summarize reasons
In conclusion, I reaffirm my conviction that...in that...and...
不能完全重復(fù)第一段內(nèi)容坏瘩,可適當(dāng)改寫
- conclusion 2
觀點(diǎn)偏、題目中存在選項(xiàng)——表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)+建議結(jié)尾
in conclusion, my view is that...
however, it is recommended that...
特殊題型
- 絕對詞
形容詞副詞的最高級 the most important
概念絕對的形容詞 only never every no
*出現(xiàn)絕對詞的題推薦寫disagree
*第二段作為承認(rèn)最高級別的一般級別
*正面舉例字?jǐn)?shù)不夠的話奋岁,利用假設(shè)或?qū)Ρ冗M(jìn)行反面舉例
例:salary
A: 工資最重要+其他不那么重要
D: 工資一般重要+其他更重要
- 題目分為兩個部分
文章開頭段:兩個部分都要回應(yīng)
while I agree that...I do not agree that...
positive or negative
Is this a positive or negative development?
- the proportion of older people is steadily increasing
開頭:更大的挑戰(zhàn)
body1: 對政府的經(jīng)濟(jì)壓力
body2: 年輕人的責(zé)任壓力
body3: 經(jīng)濟(jì)衰退
conclusion
advantages outweigh disadvantages
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
- it is better for children to begin learning a foreign at primary school rather than secondary school
開頭
body1: 頭腦更加容易接受
body2: flexible timetable
body3: disadvantages 教學(xué)質(zhì)量澳厢,對初中的sequent learning
conclusion
*優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)都要提到环础,哪個多就多加一段
*對比舉例 unlike adolescents
評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
- task response:時間和字?jǐn)?shù),完全回應(yīng)題目的問題
- coherence and cohesion:分段剩拢、連接
- lexical resource:多樣性(同義轉(zhuǎn)換 詞性轉(zhuǎn)換 固定搭配)
- grammar range and accuracy:語法正確(時態(tài)語態(tài)线得、句意完整)、句型多變(簡單復(fù)雜句混合徐伐、多種語法結(jié)構(gòu))
coherence:
(1)結(jié)構(gòu)
遞進(jìn):firstly - in addition/what's more - more importantly
平行:firstly - secondly - finally
重要遞減:primarily - apart from that - at last
(2)
thesis
evidence:原因/結(jié)果贯钩、代詞、which非限定從
example
lexical:
get - obtain, gain, acquire
know - be informed about, have a good understanding of
vocabulary
facilitate
inhibit
self-consciousness
exposure
innate
harness
Argument
- 審題:
(1)抓出題目中討論的話題
(2)兩方說法
(3)根據(jù)兩方說法需要回答什么
(4)自己的看法
- Topic: medical costs
A: free for everyone / B: paid by individuals
Discussion
雙方觀點(diǎn)不是完全矛盾的情況下,選擇兩方觀點(diǎn)的結(jié)和
- 結(jié)構(gòu)
開頭段:引出話題+表達(dá)看法
body1: 討論A
body2: 討論B(兩段都要客觀討論角雷,沒有I, we, you, 而是they)
結(jié)尾段:我的看法
字?jǐn)?shù):40+100+100+50
- 提綱
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healthcare and education: government? citizens?
example
Introduction
- paraphrase the topic
- my opinion
(1)paraphrase
方式1:換句子結(jié)構(gòu)
some people argue for...claiming that...while others show their preference for...
方式2:抓主題 背景化
(主語從句)...draws the attention of the public. Some claim that...while others show their preference for...
(2)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)
in my opinion...
my view is that...
I contend that...
alternative
implement
augment 增加