OWW WEEK2

WORD AND EXPRESSION

1擅这、get around(在英國(guó)也用get round

If you get around a rule or law, you find a way of doing something that the rule or law is intended to prevent, without actually breaking it. 避開(kāi)

2、prime

If you prime someone todo something, you prepare them to do it, for example by giving them information about it beforehand.

V n ?、V n for n、be V-ed to-inf ? 準(zhǔn)備

3扁瓢、buffaloed

a. To intimidate, as by a display of confidence or authority

b. To deceive, hoodwink

c. to confuse, bewilder

4.pop out(of something)

to jump out of something; to burst out of something.

5.pester

to annoy someone, especially by asking them many times to do something. 近義詞: harness

6.?ego

n.Someone'segois their sense of their own worth. For example, if someone has a largeego, they think they are very important and valuable.

ego是自我莹痢,a large/massive ego則是自大。

7. egotism

n.Egotism is the quality of being egotistic.

SUMMARY

Bits&Pieces:

Verbs?push the sentence forward and give it momentum. Use active verbs. Use precise verbs.?

Most adverbs and adjectives are unnecessary.?

Prune out the little qualifiers.?

Punctuation: Short sentence is better than long sentence. Don't use the exclamation point unless you must to achieve a certain effect. Use the semicolon sparingly. The dash can amplify or justify in the second part of the sentence a thought you state in the first part, and two dashes can set apart a parenthetical thought within a longer sentence. The colon can't be taken over in bringing your sentence to a brief halt before you plunge into a long list.

Mood changers: Learn to alert the reader as soon as possible to any change in mood from the previous sentence. "But" is the strongest word at the start that announces total contrast with what has gone before.?

Contractions make your style warmer and truer to your personality.

Always use "that" unless it makes your meaning ambiguous. If your sentence needs a comma to achieve its precise meaning, it probably needs "which".

Don't use concept nouns, they have no people and no working verbs.

Don't string two or three nouns together where one noun or one verb will do.?

Don't overstate.

Don't inflate an incident to make it more outlandish than it actually was. Take care of your credibility.

Dictated sentences tend to be pompous, sloppy and redundant.?

Writing is not a contest. Your only contest is with yourself.

Your subconscious mind does more writing than you think.

The quickest fix for solving a problem in a sentence is removing it.

Keep your paragraphs short.

Avoid the sexism.

rewriting=reshaping+tightening+refining.

Computer is a good tool that can save writer's time and energy.

Trust your material, just tell the truth.

Write the subject you are interested.

Nonfiction as literature:

For most people learning to write, the most comfortable path is nonfiction. Good writing is good writing, whatever form it takes and whatever we call it.

Writing about people

1. Decide what person you want to interview.

2. Be prepared.?

3.Never go into an interview without doing whatever homework you cam.

4. Make a list of likely questions.

5. Don't fear.

6. Get away from the tape recorder, write things down.

7. Tell the ?person you're interviewing to stop when he is talking faster than you write.

8. Distill the essence from the note. Keep the context true.

Write about places

two principles:

1. Style: choose your word with unusual care.

2.Substance: be intensely selective.

Writing about yourself

Of all the subjects available to you as a writer, the one you know ?best is yourself, give yourself permisson to write about yourself. ?Think narrow. Memoir isn't the summary of a life, it's a window into a life. It's the art of inventing the truth, one secret of the art is detail.

THOUGHT

這本書閱讀起來(lái)稍顯吃力方淤,因?yàn)樯~對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)有點(diǎn)多了,有時(shí)候查詞會(huì)打斷我的閱讀連貫性蹄殃,所以我讀完以后還會(huì)再看一下中文版加深理解携茂。Part III 教我們?nèi)绾螌懖煌}材的文章,最棒的是作者拿了很多書的片段來(lái)舉例子诅岩。

在訪談讳苦、游記、回憶錄當(dāng)中吩谦,我最不喜歡看游記鸳谜,因?yàn)榻?jīng)常看得昏昏欲睡式廷,十分無(wú)趣卿堂,現(xiàn)在想來(lái)就是因?yàn)樗麄兊挠斡浝锒际乔宦傻氖拢瑳](méi)有有趣的事懒棉、有趣的人草描。你寫你在海灘曬太陽(yáng)有什么好看的,你和別人在海灘曬太陽(yáng)有哪里不一樣你倒是寫啊策严。我們最喜歡聽(tīng)故事穗慕,而不是干巴巴的描景。訪談和回憶錄都是關(guān)于人的故事妻导,不做作的真實(shí)的故事逛绵』掣鳎看到現(xiàn)在我覺(jué)得寫作有兩點(diǎn)本質(zhì)的東西,一是簡(jiǎn)潔术浪,二是真誠(chéng)瓢对。

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