Do advertisements?play?a positive?or?negative?role?in?oursociety?
正論
1.?Advertisements?provide?the?most direct, comprehensive?and?detailed information.
????????????廣告最根本的作用：提供信息，再細(xì)化垂涯，加adj
2.?Advertising?itself?is?a?business?that?has provided?a?great?number?of?jobs.
? ? ? ? ????商業(yè)化呜呐，廣告存在的作用：提供工作向臀，運(yùn)用that從句
3.With?advertisements,?people?save?a?lot of?time?in?shopping?,?looking?for?jobs, etc.
? ? ? ? ????一種表達(dá)：with+×××钞啸，巴拉巴拉
? ? ? ? ????廣告為人們提供的便利：省時(shí)間
4.?Daily?life?needs?advertisements?because the?main?function?of?advertising?is?to disseminate information?on commodities,services,?culture, employment?,student?enrolment and even?marriage.
? ? ? ????? 廣告在日常方方面面的作用（比較概括性）
????????????詞匯句型更高級(jí)the function of××× is to巴拉巴拉
????????????【disseminate(v.)宣傳遥巴，傳播伍玖；】
????????????【commodity(n.)商品，貨物钞艇；同goods】
????????????【enrolment(n.)注冊(cè)啄寡，入學(xué)；】
5.?A?cheerful,witty advertisement?makes such?a?difference?to?a drab wall?or?a newspaper?full?of?news?of calamities.
? ? ? ? ????運(yùn)用對(duì)比哩照，廣告所增添了什么
? ? ? ? ????make such a difference to巴拉巴拉
????????????【witty(adj.)詼諧的挺物，幽默的】
????????????【drab(adj.)單調(diào)的，乏味的】
????????????【calamity(n.)災(zāi)難葡秒，不幸】
6.?Without?advertisements,?newspapers, commercial?radios?and?television,companies?could?not?survive.
????????????一種表達(dá)：without×××，巴拉巴拉
? ? ? ????? 反面說嵌溢，虛擬表達(dá)眯牧，如果沒有，就會(huì)怎么樣怎么樣
7.?Advertising?is?a?process?of artistic creation
? ? ? ? ????創(chuàng)作廣告產(chǎn)生的利
????????????【 artistic creation 藝術(shù)創(chuàng)作】
8.?Advertising?create?mass?market?without advertisements?manufacturers?may?find?it difficult?to?sell?their?products
? ? ? ????? 商業(yè)化的角度赖草，再次運(yùn)用表達(dá)without×××学少，就會(huì)怎么樣怎么樣
9.?Advertising?helps?stabilize?industry?and employment?,improves?quality?and?by competition?, helps keep?prices?within bounds.
? ? ? ????? 連用三個(gè)動(dòng)詞，闡述廣告的利
????????????【keep prices within bounds把價(jià)格控制在一定范圍內(nèi)】
駁論
1.?Advertisements?are?imposed?upon audience.
????????????人們不需要秧骑，強(qiáng)加于
????????????【 be imposed?upon 強(qiáng)加于】
2.?Advertisements?on?TV?are?a nuisance:?they?interrupt?television programs?at?a?shocking?frequency.
? ? ? ? ? ? ?從日常生活談版确，看電視時(shí)
? ? ? ? ? ? 【 nuisance 討厭的事情或人】
3.?Consumers?have?to?pay?more?for?the goods owing?to the?advertising expenses:High?prices?are?maintained?by such artificial?means.
? ? ? ? ? ? 商業(yè)化扣囊，廣告增加了物品的成本
????????????【artificial means人為方式】
4.?Advertisements?are?simply?misleading and?cheating. They?are?filled?with flowery phrases and empty?promise.
? ? ? ? ? ? 廣告的誤導(dǎo)和欺騙，兩個(gè)有反差的詞并列绒疗，增強(qiáng)表達(dá)
????????????【 ?flowery phrases? 華麗的詞語(yǔ)】
? ? ? ? ? ? 【 empty?promise 假意的承諾】
5.?Fake?advertising?cheats?consumers?and in?some?serious?cases?threatens gullible people’s?lives.
? ? ? ? ? ? 同上侵歇，廣告的欺騙性、誤導(dǎo)性
????????????【 gullible 易騙的】
6.?Advertisers?are?inconsiderate?to?the public. What?they?care?about?is?making money.
? ? ? ? ? ? 廣告的利益化? what they care about is
? ? ? ? ? ? 【 inconsiderate 不考慮的】
7.?Advertisements?are?not?based?on?the quality?of?the?goods,but?on?the?principle that?if?one?keeps?talking?about?the?samething?long?enough?,eventually?people?will pay?attention?to?it.
? ? ? ? ? ? 廣告的誤導(dǎo)性吓蘑，不是品質(zhì)惕虑，而是長(zhǎng)期的潛移默化的結(jié)果
8.?Advertisements?are?an insidious form?of brainwashing,using?the?same?techniques as slogans,catchphrases, etc.
? ? ? ? ? ? 廣告的誤導(dǎo)性，洗腦磨镶，像標(biāo)語(yǔ)一樣洗腦
? ? ? ? ? ? using the same techniques as巴拉巴拉
????????????【insidious陰險(xiǎn)的】
????????????【brainwash洗腦】
????????????【slogan標(biāo)語(yǔ)】
????????????【catchphrase標(biāo)語(yǔ)】
總結(jié)
詞匯+句法+思想
1.可以運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯高級(jí)句法溃蔫，文中有標(biāo)明
2.多考慮并列的短語(yǔ)詞匯句型and連接，增強(qiáng)效果
3.多考慮有反差性的表達(dá)琳猫，but或者用and連接有反差性的詞匯伟叛，增強(qiáng)表達(dá)，更顯高級(jí)
4.運(yùn)用想象脐嫂，with巴拉巴拉//////without巴拉巴拉
? ? 如果有這個(gè)會(huì)怎么樣怎么樣统刮，如果沒有這個(gè)會(huì)怎么樣怎么樣
