今天我們還是以下面2020中國大陸首考雅思大作文話題為例來詳細(xì)說明一下如何給雅思考試寫作模塊命題短文寫結(jié)尾贴谎。
In some countries, the criminal trials are shown on the TV and the general public can watch them. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? (2020/1/4)
結(jié)尾的寫作需要與開頭相呼應(yīng)、重申自己的主要論點(diǎn)并提出未來可能出現(xiàn)的新問題以及應(yīng)對的意見和建議。所以讓我們先把之前寫的開頭拿出來做一個參照些椒。
The portrayals of court proceedings on TV has become a familiar scene in a number of countries nowadays.（注：這句話我對話題做了一個籠統(tǒng)的轉(zhuǎn)述臊泌。）Some people believe that televised criminal trial has more benefits than drawbacks due to its educational and? deterrent value, however，in my view, the cons of airing the criminal trials on TV to the general public outweighs the pros by distorting the truth-seeking process of a criminal trial and impairing the authority of the justice system.（注：這是我的主旨句搁痛。在這句話里我回應(yīng)了問題并提出了自己的觀點(diǎn)和核心理由泞歉。）
下面就是我從主體段的論證得出的最后的結(jié)論：
In a nutshell/In conclusion/In summary, （注：這里使用上面任何一種總結(jié)全文的連接語或者其他類似的銜接手段都可以逼侦，這樣做的目的就是提示讀者全文的結(jié)束) camera presence in the solemn and sacred courtroom serves some transparency, publicity and deterrence purposes yet comes at an unbearable cost of compromising the impartiality of the judicial system and endangering citizen’s multiple civil rights. All the visible and invisible downsides of the live trial show should be well addressed to guarantee that? justice can be done in the era of electronic media monopoly. （這里我用了兩句話結(jié)束全文：第一句重申觀點(diǎn)，第二句提出解決方案和建議腰耙。）
接下來榛丢，讓我們再一起來賞析一下之前我在講壇001當(dāng)中提到的三位雅思寫作老師的高分范文的結(jié)尾的寫作方法。
首先讓我們一起來看一下Lydia老師的結(jié)尾：
In conclusion, this action can help prevent the possible crime and meanwhile delivers a positive message to the public so as to improve their sense of safety in the country. Therefore, I would like to think that the advantages of this enforcement outweigh its disadvantages. (Lydia, 2020/01/11)
在這里L(fēng)ydia老師用了兩個句子先是簡要重申了電視審判直播的兩個好處挺庞，之后再次提出自己的贊同的立場以一種經(jīng)典的雅思大作文結(jié)尾的方式結(jié)束了全文晰赞。
其次，我們再來看一下 Icy老師的結(jié)尾：
In conclusion, I would argue that the benefits of televising criminal trials are more significant than the possible risk of inducing the youth into committing crimes. More countries would be well-advised to air important trials on TV to educate and intimidate citizens.（Icy, 2020/01/07）
從上面的文字中我們可以看出Icy老師首先再次簡要陳述自己的贊同立場选侨，之后呼吁更多國家采用電視庭審直播的方式來教育公眾和震懾罪犯掖鱼。
最后，讓我們再來學(xué)習(xí)一下唐偉勝老師侵俗，即微信公眾號《唐老雅英語寫作工作室》的唐老雅老師的短文結(jié)尾：
However, I personally do like the idea of putting criminal trials on TV. Besides telling us right from wrong in a more vivid way and preventing us from committing crimes, TV trials will let us know how the punishment is meted out（給出）and how justice is done. This, I believe, is what our basic civil right is all about.? (唐老雅锨用，2020/01/05)
唐老師首先以讓步的方式承接前文并提出自己對電視審判直播的支持。接下來具體簡要闡述了電視審判的好處隘谣。最后進(jìn)一步升華電視庭審直播對于我們普通社會公眾的深刻作用和意義增拥。
簡而言之，寫好結(jié)尾非常重要寻歧，因為結(jié)尾是作者留給讀者或考官的最后印象掌栅，也是作者最后拿分的機(jī)會，所以值得認(rèn)真對待码泛。好的結(jié)尾簡要精煉猾封，高度概括全文要點(diǎn)和進(jìn)一步強(qiáng)調(diào)己方的立場。如果時間許可噪珊，作者還可以順便討論一下問題的相關(guān)社會晌缘、倫理齐莲、物質(zhì)或心理的影響，留給讀者更多思考的空間磷箕，啟發(fā)讀者對討論問題做出更加深入的思考选酗。
下面是三道雅思大作文的題目，大家如果有興趣可以動筆練習(xí)一下結(jié)尾的寫作岳枷。寫完之后可以對照一下后面的參考答案芒填，看看自己的結(jié)尾有沒有什么需要改進(jìn)和提高的地方，讓自己的結(jié)尾寫得更好空繁。
一殿衰、With city streets and highways become increasingly overcrowded, many people are calling for municipalities to work harder to promote public transit such as buses, trains, and subways. In many cases, though, the costs are too high or the public interest is too low.What can municipalities do to make public transportation more attractive to residents? What can they do to fund these public transportation systems? Provide detailed reasons and examples to support your answer.
二、Some people think that parents should teach their children to be good members of society. However, others believe school is the best place to learn. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the idea? Share your knowlege and experiences and give your reasons for your answers.?
三盛泡、Nowadays increasing number of people opt for migrating oversees. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
參考答案：
1. In conclusion, a governent has the power to change a city's traffic situation by educating the public and by making driving less attractive. Thus, if driving becomes overly expensive and a train seems more enjoyable, people are more willing to take advantage of this opportunity.
2. In short, I believe parents should teach their kids to behave well in the community because parents can share their life experiences with them. Hence, if school were to teach this, the role of the family would be compromised.
3. To sum up, despite the cultural shock and potential high cost of moving abroad, in my view, the prospect of expanding one's knowledge, intersts and experiences is a positive which outweighs all negatives.
