On Writing Well -Day17 (Ch17)


Content:

Part I | Principles

1. The Transaction

2. Simplicity

3. Clutter (Writing clean English Sentence)

4. Style (Preserving your identity)

5. The audience (Who am I writing for)

6. Words (The only tools you’ve got)

7. Usage (What is good usage)

Part II | Methods

8. Unity (Anchor of good writing)

9. The lead and the ending

10. Bits and pieces

Part II | Forms

11. Nonfiction as Literature

12. Writing About People: The Interview

13. Writing About Places: The travel article

14. Writing About Yourself: The Memoir

15. Science and Technology

16. Business Writing:Writing in Your Job

17. Sports

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Words and Expressions:

1. The cure is worse than the ailment.

N-COUNT 疾病你虹;病痛;(尤指)微恙

An ailment is an illness, especially one that is not very serious.

The pharmacist can assist you with the treatment of common ailments.

藥劑師能幫你治療一般的病痛脑漫。

2. many a baseball fan who flunked simple arithmetic in school can perform prodigies of instant calculation in the ballpark.

VERB 在(考試)中不及格;未通過(guò)(某一課程)

If you flunk an exam or a course, you fail to reach the required standard.

【語(yǔ)法信息】:V n

【語(yǔ)域標(biāo)簽】:mainly AM 主美

【STYLE標(biāo)簽】:INFORMAL 非正式

Your son is upset because he flunked a history exam.

你兒子心煩意亂是因?yàn)闆](méi)有通過(guò)歷史考試囤官。

3. It has a certain mounting hilarity.

N-UNCOUNT 歡鬧;嬉笑

Hilarity is great amusement and laughter.

4.No other player visible to my generation has concentrated within himself so much of the sport’s poignance ...

poignance是poigency的同義詞

N-UNCOUNT 辛酸;慘痛

Poignancy is the quality that something has when it affects you deeply and makes you feel very sad.

The film contains moments of almost unbearable poignancy...

電影中有幾段幾乎讓人辛酸得不忍目睹。

There is a certain poignancy about Eric.

埃里克的身上有一種哀傷。

5. the players are strung as tightly as their high-tech racquets.

下列含義時(shí)呈宇,racquet = racket.

1.N-COUNT (網(wǎng)球、壁球局雄、羽毛球等用的)球拍

A racket is an oval-shaped bat with strings across it. Rackets are used in tennis, squash, and badminton.

【搭配模式】:oft n N

Tennis rackets and balls are provided.

提供網(wǎng)球拍及網(wǎng)球甥啄。

2.N-UNCOUNT 硬球壁球

Rackets is a game which is similar to squash but which is played with a hard ball.

6. In football and basketball the pay is sky-high, and so are the sulks.

VERB 生悶氣;面有慍色;悶悶不樂(lè)

If you sulk, you are silent and bad-tempered for a while because you are annoyed about something.

【語(yǔ)法信息】:V

【搭配模式】:oftin/intoaN

He turned his back and sulked.

他轉(zhuǎn)過(guò)身去,面帶慍色炬搭。

Sulk is also a noun.

He went off in asulk...

他悶悶不樂(lè)地離開(kāi)了蜈漓。

Now she must be tired of my sulks.

現(xiàn)在她肯定受夠了我的壞脾氣穆桂。

Thoughts:

像天書一樣的前半章……

sportswriter,去掉sports首先應(yīng)該是個(gè)writer融虽,也要遵循前幾章對(duì)writer的基本要求享完,不能因?yàn)轭I(lǐng)域不同而拋開(kāi)writer這個(gè)身份。

What keeps most sportswriters from writing good English is the misapprehension that they shouldn't be trying to.

Sportsman有额,去掉sports也首先應(yīng)該是個(gè)man般又,圍繞著TA的前提是把TA當(dāng)“人”看,不能因?yàn)橥庠诘臇|西就舍棄作為man的本質(zhì)巍佑。

what makes them special is their humanity.


好的體育文章或作品茴迁,傳遞價(jià)值觀也好,表達(dá)夢(mèng)想萤衰、堅(jiān)持堕义、熱血也好,首先腻菇,要讓人看懂胳螟。

They only want the clearest picture of what happened.

其次,要有價(jià)值:

Those are the values to look for when you write about sport: people and places, time and transition.


最后但最重要筹吐,要有humanity:

Zinser這段話完全代表了我的心聲Remember that athletes are men and women who become part of our lives during the season, acting out our dreams or filling some other need for us, and we want that bond to be honored. Hold the hype and give us heroes who are believable.

雖然不一定有機(jī)會(huì)寫體育文章糖耸,不過(guò)下次看相關(guān)作品的時(shí)候,可以觀察一下作者是不是做到了以下幾點(diǎn):

Hang around the track and the stable, the stadium and the rink.
Observe closely.
Interview in depth.
Listen to old-timers.
Ponder the changes.
Write well.


拋開(kāi)writer的體育作家如果拋開(kāi)man去寫運(yùn)動(dòng)員丘薛,終將是悲劇一場(chǎng)嘉竟。

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