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? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? 雅思寫作高分：7分或7分以上
第一節(jié)的內(nèi)容：
1． 雅思寫作的整體介紹
2． 高分寫作的要求
3． 解決問題的方案
4． 課程的總覽
一． 雅思寫作的整體介紹General Introduction
聽力贪壳、閱讀考試之后
60分鐘 ?Task 1 and Task 2
A類和G類的區(qū)別：
task 2議論文
task 1 ?A：圖表作文 ?G：書信
評分：以Task 2為主
二：高分寫作的要求
評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：
Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(詞匯與句子結(jié)構(gòu))Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(論證饱亿，論點和論據(jù))
Communicative Quality(交流質(zhì)量)
Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(詞匯與句子結(jié)構(gòu))
[if !supportLists]1.?[endif]避免使用過于低級的單詞
The problem becomes worse?by the poor effects we made.
The problem was compounded due to the ineffective?measures we had taken.
They claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only an incorrect?argument.
They?claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only a lame?argument.
People face?violence and crimes on TV and films every day.
People are bombarded by?violence and crimes on TV and films every day.
The kind of growth may lead to very bad results.
The kind of growth may lead to?dire consequences.
consequence:
far-reaching（深遠(yuǎn)的）, profound（深刻的）, adverse（不利的）, catastrophic（災(zāi)難的）, damaging（破壞性的）, devastating（破壞性的）, dire（可怕的）, disastrous（災(zāi)難的）, fatal（致命的）, tragic（悲慘的）, severe（嚴(yán)重的）, ?
2. 避免過分重復(fù)同一樣的單詞
Mothers?enjoy the same right for?career advancement as fathers do.
Mothers are just as entitled to?career advancement as fathers.
Mothers are empowered to career advancement as fathers.
3. 盡可能展示多變的句型
定語從句：
China is the largest developing country and is enjoying rapid economic growth. As a result, in the streets of major cities in China, there are thousands of vehicles of all kinds.
As the largest developing country, China is enjoying rapid economic growth, the evidence of which can be seen in all major cities whose streets are teeming with?thousands of vehicles of all kinds.
倒裝句：
Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.
Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.
伴隨狀語：
It is common now for kids to spend six and a half days in school?each week because?they have?to sit through one extra class after another.
It is common for kids to spend six and a half days in school?each week, sitting through one extra class after another.
設(shè)問句：
Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between peoples, learning foreign languages still make sense.
Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language?barriers between people, would there be no point in learning foreign languages? By no means.
Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(論證，論點和論據(jù))
Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged?to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but other people maintain that such evaluation and criticism may cause loss of respect for teachers and discipline. What do you think? ????
有人認(rèn)為，為了提高教育質(zhì)量彪笼，我們應(yīng)該鼓勵高中生對自己的老師進(jìn)行評估钻注；別的人卻認(rèn)為這種評估是不尊重教師、違反學(xué)校紀(jì)律的行為配猫。請給出你的看法幅恋？
學(xué)生評價老師的理由：
1. 通過評估，老師可以知道學(xué)生究竟想些什么泵肄、需要什么
If students are not allowed to evaluate or criticize the teachers, it is hard for the teachers?to find out what the students think or what they need.
2. 評價和批評本身也是一種有效的交流方式
Evaluation and criticism are themselves effective forms of communication
3. 聽取學(xué)生的真實意見和想法捆交，教師自己也能夠受益匪淺
Teachers will benefit a lot when their minds are open to the ideas and honest opinions of the youngsters.
高分作文兩個注意事項：
1． 論據(jù)盡可能新穎：論據(jù)新穎，文字才更有可能新穎
2． 新穎應(yīng)該讓位于準(zhǔn)確性：確保文字沒有錯誤
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Communicative Quality(交流質(zhì)量)
1． 高分作文腐巢，在于文字和論據(jù)精彩品追，不在于結(jié)構(gòu)另類
2． 雅思作文類型固定，寫作模式也固定冯丙，高分作文亦然
三：解決問題的方案
1Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(詞匯與句子結(jié)構(gòu))
à總結(jié)大量經(jīng)典搭配诵盼，交替使用2Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(論證，論點和論據(jù))
à范文講解附帶論據(jù)整理
3Communicative Quality(交流質(zhì)量)
à給出固定寫作思路银还，不求變革
四：課程總覽
八節(jié)課程
第一節(jié)：整體介紹
第二至第七節(jié)：各類議論文的高分寫作思路
1.該類議論文的寫作思路點撥
2.范文講解
3.課后作業(yè)及范文
第八節(jié)：
A類：圖表作文高分寫作思路
G類：書信類作文高分寫作思路
