? ? ? ? 安妮老師提醒我要多注意觀察圖片婴梧，我這次特別觀察了5分鐘沮稚，然后抄了一遍修改意見。先放個(gè)筆記版本的扒秸。需要看無痕版本的請(qǐng)直接拉到最下方。
There are four aquilegia on the picture. They are naturally beautiful-lookingand full of mysteries.（安妮老師說冀瓦，beautiful-looking這個(gè)詞非常的假大空伴奥，我思想后可以改成：they represent different meanings of?bloom.）The most attractive one is on the top of?the picture which has（has去掉，此處時(shí)代不對(duì)翼闽，應(yīng)該用過去式）opened fully. The stigma is yellow. (此句改為Its?stamens are yellow.)And the anthers are dense and long, which look likethe legs of a spider.(They?are dense and long,這里意為花蕊又長(zhǎng)又密集拾徙，像蜘蛛的腳一樣。)(主句應(yīng)該分為2個(gè)句子感局，不然不清楚后面從句到底修飾的是花柱還是花蕊)And we can not?see the pollen tube on the picture. Maybe they are curly.（這句話應(yīng)該整體刪掉锣吼，改為The ovary are light purple, and the color?becomes deeper than the part of the petals which near the end.）Five petals, surrounded the anthers and filaments(改為sepals), impress us?with the mixture of purple and white. It has four(輸錯(cuò)了，花瓣是5片蓝厌，改為five) pieces ofdeep purple needle-shaped leaves. However, the color of the leaves is deeperthan that of the petals.(刪掉玄叠，改為主觀陳述，The indigo of the flower body is like a?flowing stream.)
The flower next to the glorious one has not fully opened. The color of the anther?is light yellow and the petals are not open. (直接改為The petals are not open )We can only see apiece of leave on the picture.
I adore the third one with its layers upon layers of delicate petals. But it hasno leaves. The last one we can only see half of the petals.(這句話可以全部刪掉) It?is attractive and makes us to share the wonderful bloom with everyone.（這句話可以改為The wonders of?the flowers are beyond imagination and we want to share the wonderful bloom?with everyone.）
下面是無痕版本的
There are four aquilegia on the picture. They represent different meanings of bloom. The most attractive one is on the top of the picture which opened fully. Its stamens are yellow,and they are dense and long, The ovary are light purple, and the color becomes deeper than the part of the petals which near the end. Five petals, surrounded sepals, impress us with the mixture of purple and white. It has five pieces of deep purple needle-shaped leaves.The indigo of the flowerbody is like a flowing stream.
The flower next to the glorious one has not fully opened.We can only see a piece ofleave on the picture.
I adore the third one with its layers upon layers of delicate petals. But it has no leaves. The wonders of the flowers are beyond imagination and we want to share the wonderful bloom with everyone.
