題目:
假定你是李華腐宋。你班同學(xué)決定為小明舉辦生日聚會。
請你寫信邀請外教Susan參加檀轨,要點包括:
⒈ 時間:周五晚8點至9點
⒉ 地點:學(xué)生俱樂部
⒊ 內(nèi)容:生日歌胸竞、蛋糕、游戲等
⒋ 要求:備小禮物
注意:
⒈ 詞數(shù)100左右参萄,開頭語已為你寫好卫枝;
⒉可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以便行文連貫讹挎;
⒊ 答案必須寫在 答題卡 相應(yīng)的位置上校赤。
Hi, Susan,
We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiao Ming’s birthday.
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Hi, Susan,
We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiao Ming’s birthday. How are you doing? I’m Li Hua. The vice minister of your class. This Friday吆玖,a birthday party will be held for Xiao Ming. So,I马篮,on behalf of my class沾乘,am going to invite you to come
? ?Here are several details about the activity. First and foremost, it will be held in the student club from 8:00 pm. to 9:00 pm. Additionally, not only will we sing a birthday song, but also we are able to share a birthday cake and play some interesting games,Which will be both meaningful and entertaining. Last but not least浑测,each of us is supposed to give Xiao Ming a gift翅阵;As a result,you need to bring one.
We Would feel extremely honored and delighted迁央,if you could make it to our activity掷匠,Please drop me a line or send me a text message to let me know your decision soon. I‘m looking forward to your reply and your presence.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
Hi, Susan,
We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiao Ming’s birthday.
How are you doing? I’m Li Hua. The vice minister of your class.
1 不要寫How are you岖圈,增加你的字?jǐn)?shù) 讓閱卷老師覺得你的作文有規(guī)范有制度
2 Vice minister 副班長讹语、副主席 要給出一個身份,介紹自己是誰蜂科,加上這個能讓閱卷老師知道你在班上有職位募强,字好看等等
This Friday,a birthday party will be held for Xiao Ming
提出時間 為了某人都用For崇摄,把主語放在了前面擎值,后面的動詞用的被動,使你的逼格高逐抑,也可以寫成There will be a birthday party for Xiao Ming
So鸠儿,I,on behalf of my class厕氨,am going to invite you to come
So进每,因此,So連接新的句子用逗號命斧,On behalf of代表…田晚,這個句子是一個插入語,例如第三者国葬。第三者不會影響句子成分贤徒,不會影響成分,直接把她干掉汇四。即I am going to invite you to come接奈。【需慎重】
Here are several details about the activity.
介紹活動內(nèi)容時通孽,要寫一個承上啟下的過渡句序宦,否則會顯得比較生疏。Several建議替換成A great majority of.即許多背苦。
First and foremost, it will be held in the student club from 8:00 pm. to 9:00 pm.
主語用的是物互捌,后面謂語動詞是被潘明,剛剛提到了activity不能重復(fù)了,it指的就是那個活動秕噪。It will be hold將會被舉行.
Additionally, not only will we sing a birthday song, but also we are able to share a birthday cake and play some interesting games钳降,Which will be both meaningful and entertaining.
1 兩個東西并且很長的句子不用寫and,Not only but also.前倒后不倒巢价,情態(tài)動詞提前,后面就正常語序
2 Be able to=can 可以
3 Which will be both meaningful and entertaining.【高逼格】【必背】一個事情很非常棒固阁,就可以加這個這件事情是多么的有意義和開心的
例子:You are supposed to read much more English books, which will be both meaningful and entertaining.
Last but not least壤躲,each of us is supposed to give Xiao Ming a gift;As a result备燃,you need to bring one.
Each of us【這不是復(fù)數(shù)√】我們每一個人 是一個單數(shù)碉克。
One指禮物,這里As a result是所以的意思=so
We Would feel extremely honored and delighted并齐,if you could make it to our activity漏麦,Please drop me a line or send me a text message to let me know your decision soon.
1 你將會感到非常榮耀和高興的
2 if you could make it to our activity
可以替換成簡單的句子:If you could come to our activity.
3 Drop me a line 留個短信
4 let me know your decision soon讓我們盡快知道你的決定
I‘m looking forward to your reply and your presence.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Lihua
我期待你的回復(fù)
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