以下是上周我們學(xué)校高二英語(yǔ)的周測(cè)作文題：
?書(shū)面表達(dá)（共1小題；滿分25分）
?你是周明，你的學(xué)校承辦了一場(chǎng)籃球聯(lián)賽酸舍，會(huì)有外國(guó)球員和工作人員參加，需要招聘兼職英語(yǔ)翻譯里初。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封求職信啃勉，內(nèi)容包括：
?1.自我介紹；
?2.說(shuō)明為什么認(rèn)為自己有能力做好籃球聯(lián)賽的翻譯工作双妨；
?3.表達(dá)希望應(yīng)聘成功的愿望淮阐。
?注意：1.可以適當(dāng)增添內(nèi)容，使行文連貫刁品；
?2.格式泣特、開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)挑随；
?3.詞數(shù)：100左右
下面是作文評(píng)講課
?評(píng)分主要標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：三個(gè)任務(wù)漏掉一個(gè)状您，不能給16分以上；不分段作文，即使完成任務(wù)也不能給16分以上
?2.語(yǔ)言表達(dá)水平竞阐，體現(xiàn)準(zhǔn)確性（單詞拼寫(xiě)‘句型運(yùn)用缴饭、語(yǔ)法）。流暢性（篇章結(jié)構(gòu)’句與句的連貫‘）交際性（達(dá)到求職性的交際目的）
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?這篇作文由三個(gè)任務(wù)組成
?1.自我介紹骆莹；
?2.說(shuō)明為什么認(rèn)為自己有能力做好籃球聯(lián)賽的翻譯工作颗搂；
?3.表達(dá)希望應(yīng)聘成功的愿望。
?Para.1.
.我是李華幕垦，17歲丢氢，湛江二中高二（14）班的學(xué)生。我認(rèn)為我有能勝任這份工作先改。我寫(xiě)信申請(qǐng)這份工作疚察。理由如下.
?Para.2.
?1.非常喜歡籃球，了解相關(guān)的知識(shí),掌握大量籃球方面的詞匯仇奶，知道世界上知名球隊(duì)和球員貌嫡。
?2.非常喜歡英語(yǔ)，喜歡和找外國(guó)人做朋友该溯，找他們練習(xí)英語(yǔ)岛抄，英語(yǔ)掌握得很好/能講一口流暢的口語(yǔ)，
?3有豐富的兼職經(jīng)驗(yàn)和很強(qiáng)的責(zé)任感狈茉，反應(yīng)敏捷夫椭，懂得如何與不同興趣和不同背景的人進(jìn)行溝通，處理現(xiàn)場(chǎng)的突發(fā)事件氯庆。
?Para.3.
我相信以我的能力不會(huì)辜負(fù)你們的期盼蹭秋、如果你能給我這個(gè)寶貴的機(jī)會(huì)/你能夠考慮一下我，我會(huì)不勝感激堤撵。
?Step1
1.好詞集錦
?1.如何表達(dá)“喜歡”“對(duì)仁讨。。粒督。感興趣”
?be interested in/be crazy about/be devoted to
?show?great interest in/be greatly interested in
?2.如何表達(dá)“我很渴望做這份兼職”
?be keen to do/?be eager to do
?3.如何表達(dá)“適合做某事”“擅于做某事”“勝任某事”
?befit for this job/be qualified for this job
?be?good at/be skilled at/be capable of/ have good performance in/have a good
command of/be expert at/have a good knowledge of /have a good mastery/grasp of
?step2.如何整合句子
?Para.1.自我介紹1：我是李華陪竿，17歲，湛江二中高二（14）班的學(xué)生屠橄，熱心族跛，有耐心。
?1.）造好中文句子锐墙，2）怎么表述礁哄，從小詞組到大句子，先把主要內(nèi)容翻出來(lái)
ZhangHua, a 17-year-old student, No.2 Middle SchoolClass Two, Senior Two,warm-hearted and
patient.
3）如何把它們合在一起溪北，先要找到它們之間聯(lián)系桐绒，是因果夺脾，轉(zhuǎn)折，伴隨茉继，條件咧叭，還是修飾？
?找出關(guān)系來(lái)烁竭，就知道該用什么詞組菲茬，或什么句型連起來(lái)了，如果是修飾名詞派撕，就要考慮用形容詞（前置）婉弹、介詞短語(yǔ)、同位語(yǔ)终吼，定語(yǔ)從句（后置）
?My ?name is Zhang Hua, a 17-year-old studentfromClass Two, Senior Twoof No.2 Middle Schoo,who is warm-hearted andpatient.
??Para.1自我介紹2.我認(rèn)為我能勝任這份工作镀赌。我寫(xiě)信申請(qǐng)這份工作。理由如下.
?I believe /I am sure/I am confident I’m qualified for the job,soI amwriting to apply for it. The reasons are listed as below.
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?Para2.（理由之一）非常喜歡籃球际跪，了解相關(guān)的知識(shí),掌握大量籃球方面的詞匯商佛，知道世界上知名球隊(duì)和球員。
?Show ?great interest in basktball, have some related knowledge about it,know all thebasketball terms as well as all the famous teams and players around the world
?
I’m so interested in ?basketball ?that Ihave some ?related knowledge aboutthe basketball,including all the basketball terms aswell as all the famous teams and players around the world
(強(qiáng)調(diào)句)So interested am I inbasketball ..that …
?（理由之二）非常喜歡英語(yǔ)垫卤，經(jīng)常找外國(guó)人練習(xí)英語(yǔ)威彰，能講一口流暢的口語(yǔ)(句與句之間如何連貫？)
?be crazy about English, often practice Englishwith foreigners ,can speak English fluently
?I am so crazy about English that I oftenpractice English with foreigners,whichenables mespeak English fluently
?
?(理由三有豐富的兼職經(jīng)驗(yàn),穴肘，反應(yīng)敏捷，懂得如何與不同興趣和不同背景的人進(jìn)行溝通舔痕，處理現(xiàn)場(chǎng)的突發(fā)事件) (注意句與句的關(guān)聯(lián)）
?haveanexperience of working as a translator, quick-minded and can deal with all kindsof urgent cases on the spot.评抚，know how to?communicate withpeople of different interests and backgrounds
?With an experience of working as a translator, I’m quick-minded andknow how to
communicate withpeople of different interests and backgrounds,making it possibleforme to deal with anykinds of urgent cases on the spot.
?Para.3
?我相信以我的能力不會(huì)辜負(fù)你們的期盼、如果你能給我這個(gè)寶貴的機(jī)會(huì)伯复、你能夠考慮一下我慨代，我會(huì)不勝感激
?結(jié)尾句式一：I am sure I canperfectly live up to your expectations .I will be gratefulif you could give me such a preciousopportunty
?結(jié)尾句式之二：I believemy strong
ability of communicationand myteamwork
spiritcanqualify me for the job。Ican’t wait to …and your consideration of my application will be appreciated
連句成篇
?For one thing,for another,what’s more
?On one hand,on the other hand,furthermore
?To begin with,in addition,last but not least
First of all ,besides啸如，moreover
?Dear
Sir,
?I?learned that you are looking for a part-time translator for a basketball match.
?My name is Zhang Hua, a 17-year-old student ?fromClass Two, Senior Twoof No.2 Middle Schoo,who is warm-hearted and?patient.I believe /I am sure/I am confident I’m qualified for thejob,soI am writing to apply for it. The reasons are listed as below.
?For?one thing,I’msointerested in basketballthat I know all the basketballterms, as well as all the famous teams and players around the world. Foranother, I often practice English with foreigners and can speak Englishfluently. What’s more, with an experience of working as a translator, I’mquick-minded and can deal with all kinds of urgent cases on the spot.
?Ina word, I’m convinced that I can do the job well, so I’m eager to get theopportunity.
?Looking forward to your reply.
課后練習(xí)
由于長(zhǎng)時(shí)間看電視眼睛壞了侍匙，好多同學(xué)帶起了眼睛。
Watch TV for longhours或spend long hourswatching TV
do harm to eyes或bad eyesight ?wear glasses
如何把它們合在一起叮雳，先要找到它們之間聯(lián)系想暗，是因果，轉(zhuǎn)折帘不，伴隨说莫，條件，還是修飾寞焙？
找出關(guān)系來(lái)储狭，就知道改用什么詞組互婿，或什么句型連起來(lái)了。
比如這個(gè)是因果辽狈，那表因果的該用什么詞組或句型呢慈参？dueto, lead to, because of
原因狀語(yǔ)從句或用doing作狀語(yǔ)或with的形式
寫(xiě)出英文句子
Watching
TV for long hours hurts students’ eyes, so they have to wear glasses.(狀從)
Watching TV for long hours, many?students get a bad eyesight and have to wear glasses.(分詞作狀語(yǔ))
With long hours spent on TV, many ?students get a bad eyesight and have to wear glasses. (with形式)
(Watching TV for long hours does?harm to students’ eyes, which makes them wear glasses.（非限制性定從）
所以大家可以看到，無(wú)論怎么結(jié)合刮萌，都可以組成很好的句子
