On Writing Well -Day22 (Ch20)


Content:

Part I | Principles

1. The Transaction

2. Simplicity

3. Clutter (Writing clean English Sentence)

4. Style (Preserving your identity)

5. The audience (Who am I writing for)

6. Words (The only tools you’ve got)

7. Usage (What is good usage)

Part II | Methods

8. Unity (Anchor of good writing)

9. The lead and the ending

10. Bits and pieces

Part II | Forms

11. Nonfiction as Literature

12. Writing About People: The Interview

13. Writing About Places: The travel article

14. Writing About Yourself: The Memoir

15. Science and Technology

16. Business Writing:Writing in Your Job

17. Sports

18. Writing About the Arts Critics and Columnists

19. Humor

Part III | Attitudes

20.?The Sound of Your Voice

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Words and Expressions:

1.?My commodity as a writer, whatever I’m writing about, is me. And your commodity is you.?

Commodity是可數(shù)名詞实蓬,本文中是第二個意思茸俭。

1 (economics)a product or a raw material that can be bought and sold

? ? ?rice, flour and other basic commodities

? ? ?a drop in commodity prices

? ? ?Crude oil is the world's most important commodity.

2 (formal) a thing that is useful or has a useful quality

? ? ?Water is a precious commodity that is often taken for granted in the West.

2.?I spent several days and nights in mid-September with an ailing pig.

ailing本意是sick, 也可以引申表示經(jīng)濟或者組織安皱。

ailing ★☆☆☆☆

1.ADJ 處境困難的;境況不佳的;衰退的

? ?An?ailing?organization or society is in difficulty and is becoming weaker.

【搭配模式】:usu ADJ n

? ?The rise in overseas sales is good news for the ailing American economy.

? ? 海外銷售額的上升對于不景氣的美國經(jīng)濟來說是個好消息调鬓。

2.ADJ 生病的;抱恙的酌伊;體衰的

? ?If someone is?ailing, they are ill and are not getting better.

【STYLE標簽】:OLD-FASHIONED 過時

? He is said to be ailing at his home in Washington.

? 據(jù)說他身體欠佳腾窝,正呆在華盛頓的家中。

3.?The writer sounds confident; he’s not trying to ingratiate himself with the reader.

VERB 使得到…的歡心;討好

If someone tries to?ingratiate themselves with?you, they do things to try and make you like them.

【語法信息】:V pron-refl with n

【語法信息】:Also V pron-refl

【語用信息】:disapproval

Many politicians are trying to ingratiate themselves with her.

許多政客都設(shè)法討她的歡心居砖。

4. One person’s beautiful object is somebody else’s kitsch.

kitsch?/k?t?/

1.N-UNCOUNT 庸俗的藝術(shù)作品虹脯;迎合低級趣味的拙劣作品

? You can refer to a work of art or an object as kitsch if it is showy and thought by some people to be in bad taste.

? ?...a hideous ballgown verging on the kitsch...

? ?近乎俗麗的難看的舞會禮服

? ? Collectors of Fifties kitsch should pop over to Brussels for the flea market.

? ? 50年代庸俗藝術(shù)作品的收藏者應(yīng)該到布魯塞爾的跳蚤市場去看看。

2. Kitsch?is also an adjective.

? ? Blue and green eye shadow has long been considered kitsch.

? ? 藍色和綠色的眼影一直被認為是俗氣的奏候。

? ? ...kitsch pop culture.

? ? 品位不高的通俗文化

5.?Every art form has a core of verities that survive the fickleness of time.

verity:

N-COUNT 真理;事實

The?verities?of something are all the things that are believed to be true about it.

【搭配模式】:usu pl

【語域標簽】:FORMAL 正式

...some verities of human nature.

人性中一些真實的東西

6. a world where people in authority are the top brass...

top?brass

N-SING-COLL 高級軍官;高管;要員

In the army or in other organizations,the top brass?are the people in the highest positions.

【搭配模式】:also no det

【語域標簽】:BRIT 英

【語域標簽】:INFORMAL 非正式

...a reshuffle of the army's top brass.

軍隊高級軍官的調(diào)整

…a press conference attended by top brass from Sony Records.

索尼唱片公司的高管參加的新聞發(fā)布會

7. So I studied Governor Cross’s words to see how they had weathered the passage of time.

weather做動詞有兩個含義循集,這里表示 “經(jīng)受住”。

1. V-ERG (使)風化;(使)褪色;(使)受到侵蝕

If something such as wood or rock?weathers?or?is weathered, it changes colour or shape as a result of the wind, sun, rain, or cold.

【語法信息】:V

【語法信息】:beV-ed

【語法信息】:Also V n

Unpainted wooden furniture weathers to a grey colour...

沒有上漆的木制家具會褪成灰色蔗草。

This rock has been weathered and eroded.

這塊巖石經(jīng)風吹日曬已被侵蝕咒彤。

weathered

The facade of the building was a little weathered...

樓正面有點兒斑駁。

The man had a worn,weathered face.

這個男人有張飽經(jīng)滄桑的臉咒精。

2.VERB 經(jīng)受住镶柱,渡過(難關(guān)等)

If you?weather?a difficult time or a difficult situation, you survive it and are able to continue normally after it has passed or ended. to?weather the storm→see:storm;

【語法信息】:V n

The company has weathered the recession...

這家公司從經(jīng)濟蕭條中挺了過來。

The government has weathered its worst political crisis.

政府平安度過了其最嚴重的政治危機模叙。

Thoughts:

我曾經(jīng)做過一個小實驗歇拆,用同事的郵箱發(fā)了一封郵件給另一個我們都認識的同事,點發(fā)送之前我讓同事先review一下,免得露出馬腳查吊。她說“這一看就不是我的風格...我不會用這樣的詞谐区,也不會用這樣的句型...” 結(jié)果證明,這的確是我的風格逻卖,即使用了別人的郵箱宋列,也會被接收方識破。

事后我問她 "你為什么不用這樣的詞和句型呢评也,很標準的用法啊”, 得到的反饋是“不為什么炼杖,不喜歡”。

你看盗迟,taste on writing 就是這么一件無奈的事情坤邪,我們必須學會面對它,接受它罚缕,改進它艇纺。

Taste is an invisible current that runs through writing, and you should be aware of it.

如何提高taste, zinser給出了非常實用的建議:


寫作是為了傳遞自己的聲音邮弹,而非迎合骏令。


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