一提到寫英語作文镐作,很多同學(xué)都無從下筆编饺,總是“信手寫來”暮顺,沒有規(guī)劃厅篓。這樣做的后果是,作文篇章結(jié)構(gòu)不清晰捶码,內(nèi)容選擇可能會(huì)脫離主題羽氮,從而影響作文的總體得分。
(1)本話題所需要的詞塊惫恼、語塊档押。
(2)本話題的寫作模板結(jié)構(gòu)等。
(3)本話題所涉及到的經(jīng)典名句祈纯、諺語等令宿。
以《How to learn well?》為題,寫一篇作文腕窥,那么我們應(yīng)該如何入手開始寫作呢粒没?來看看以下幾張思維導(dǎo)圖,能夠幫你整理好一篇作文的寫作框架簇爆。
即使知道了寫作框架癞松,但在補(bǔ)充框架時(shí)又會(huì)遇到另一個(gè)困惑:如何選材爽撒?以下是一些關(guān)于寫作選材的建議:
1.選定英語思維導(dǎo)圖各區(qū)域所需的詞塊和語塊。
2.將各區(qū)域的詞塊和語塊按段落寫成連貫的語篇响蓉。
3.對(duì)照思維導(dǎo)圖自我批改硕勿,注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)厕妖、句型結(jié)構(gòu)的正確使用首尼。
困惑3:如何表達(dá)?
很多學(xué)生在寫作時(shí)言秸,使用的句式比較單一软能,因此文章大多雷同,缺乏個(gè)性举畸。?針對(duì)這些問題查排,我們可以從以下幾個(gè)方面改進(jìn):
1.對(duì)相同意思,注意不同句式的表達(dá)法抄沮,選擇更好的句式跋核。
2.短文寫作,表達(dá)力求精悍叛买、生動(dòng)砂代、豐富,避免重復(fù)用一樣的句式率挣。
3.特別注意使用承上啟下的詞語和句子刻伊。
寫作流程:
1. 審題、理清思路:考慮寫什么(挑選關(guān)鍵詞椒功,搭建作文框架)捶箱。
2. 選擇詞語:根據(jù)話題和作文框架選用所需要的語料(詞塊和語塊)。
3. 遣詞造句:根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖中的語料动漾,用合適的句型寫作丁屎。
4. 語篇定稿:根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖修改潤(rùn)色作文——緊扣主題、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確旱眯,關(guān)聯(lián)自然晨川,語篇流暢。
假如你有兩位同學(xué)——芳芳和明明删豺,參加了上星期二學(xué)校組織的英語演講比賽础爬,他們的不同表現(xiàn)使你深有感觸。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列表各中的內(nèi)容提示寫一篇英語短文吼鳞。
參考詞匯:英語演講比賽 English Speech Contest
要求:
1. 詞數(shù):80~100個(gè)
2. 短文開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)
3. 要點(diǎn)齊全叫搁,行文連貫赔桌,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮
Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.
Before the contest, Fangfang thought__________________.
范文1
Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.
Before?the contest, Fangfang thought her English?was the best.?So?shespent lots of time picking?some beautiful clothes for herself?instead of?trying to work hard?at English for the contest.?As a result, she didn't do well in the contest?because?she hadn't got ready for?the contest.
But?Mingming was different from Fangfang. He?worked hard at Englishand?asked others for help.?Especially, his leg?was hurt?two days before the contest,?but?he?never gave up.?In the end, he?won the contest.
No doubt, from Mingming we should learn :?No pains, No gains. From now on, I mush?learn fromMingming.
范文2
Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.
Before the contest, Fangfang thought she?was good at English,?and?that she didn't need to spend more time on?the contest at all. She alwaysconsidered picking?some beautiful clothes for the contest.?But?Mingming was different. He?worked hard at English?and?asked others for help.?Though?he had?hurt his leg?two days before the contest, he?never gave up.
In the end, Fangfang didn't get ready well?enough. At the contest, she was?so?nervous?that?she she failed.?But?Mingming won?because of?his efforts.
In my opinion, we should?learn from Mingming: Work hard and make progress every day.
生活是豐富多彩的供炎,沒有愛好的人生是不完整的人生。親愛的同學(xué)疾党,在生活中音诫,你有什么興趣愛好嗎?這個(gè)興趣愛好是怎樣培養(yǎng)起來的雪位?它給你的生活增添了哪些色彩竭钝?請(qǐng)你以 “My Hobby”為題,結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷寫一篇短文雹洗。(詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右)
要求:
1.語句通順香罐,合乎邏輯,書寫規(guī)范时肿。
2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱庇茫。
范文1
Reading?is my hobby.?When I was seven years old, one day, I read a comic book about how a girl beat a wolf. I was moved deeply by the girl.From then on?I?became interested in?reading books.
Reading can?not only?kill the time,?but also, more importantly, help improve my skills. And books can teach me how to be a good person. Books can also?solve many problems?for me.
In a word, reading books can make my life colorful. I will read more good books to improve myself in the future.
范文2
My favourite hobby is?watching movies in the cinema. Three years ago, while I was watching the adventure 3D film Avatar in the cinema,? I was attracted by the beautiful sights. It was?so?creative?that?it made me?enjoy a lot.?From then on, I?became a movie fan.
Now, when I am tired, I go to the cinema. When I am happy, I go to the cinema, too.?On the one hand, movies can make me relaxed.?On the other hand, I can?learn lots of knowledge?from movies.