范例一
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Attend Your Classes Regularly弹渔。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.
1. 現(xiàn)在大學校園里抗愁,遲到咱揍、早退喉刘、曠課是常見的現(xiàn)象
2. 保證學生的出勤率對大學教育的重要性
3. 作為一個大學生應(yīng)該怎樣做
Attend Your Classes Regularly
Nowadays it is a very common phenomenon that some university students are late for or even absent from classes. And still there are some students who slip out of the classroom before the class is over. Class attendance has become a thorny problem to both the students and teachers.
In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their classes regularly. First, it will ensure you to catch up with the teachers in your learning. That is very helpful to you if you want to do a good job in your study. Second, attending classes regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers ,too. Your teachers will feel bad if the students do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will affect their teaching and be no good for the students. Third, attending classes regularly will help to form a good habit of punctuality, which is of great importance for the students to do a good job in the future.
Therefore, we university students should form the good habit of attending our classes regularly from now on. And some day we’ll benefit from it.
點評:2008年元月三日讼撒,中山大學博士發(fā)帖稱遭導師虐待廊宪;2008年元月四日族奢,中國政法大學爆“楊帆門”事件煎娇;近幾年二庵,中小學老師或打?qū)W生或猥褻學生、體罰學生等各類新聞不斷曝光缓呛,進而引發(fā)了師生關(guān)系的大討論催享。本范例題為四級考試傳統(tǒng)的問題解決型的寫作,與校園生活密切相關(guān)哟绊。
范例二
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Students’ Rating of Their Teachers睡陪。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.
1. 學生給老師打分已經(jīng)普遍
2. 人們對其持不同態(tài)度
3. 我的看法
Students’ Rating of Their Teachers
Nowadays, it has become as common in colleges and universities for students to grade teachers as for teachers to grade students. In some universities students’ rating has even become the only source of information on teaching effectiveness..
This, however, has caused great controversy. Some are in favor of the rating system, They hold that since students attend the teachers’ classes every day, they should have their opinion about their teachers’ effectiveness. Others, on the contrary, are strongly against it. They believe that there is much more to teaching than what is shown on students’ rating forms. Students should not be expected to judge whether the materials they use are up to date or how well the teacher knows about the subject. These judgments require professional knowledge, which is best left for the teachers’ colleagues.
I think students’ rating of their teachers is necessary, but it should be conducted in a way that can really shed meaningful light on teachers’ performance. Instead of rating the teachers’ knowledge on the subject, students should be asked to estimate what they have learned in a course, and to report on such things as a teacher’s ability to communicate with students, his or her relationship with students, and his or her ability to arouse students’ interest in the subject.
點評:越來越多的高校采取讓學生給老師打分的形式來了解教學反饋,并以此作為促進教學質(zhì)量的有效手段匿情。對此做法兰迫,管理部門及教學雙方褒貶不一,看法迥異炬称。本范例題為校園生活熱議話題汁果,值得關(guān)注。
范例三
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On a Harmonious Dormitory Life. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 宿舍生活有時會出現(xiàn)不和諧的情況;
2. 一個和諧宿舍生活的必要性;
3. 如何創(chuàng)造和諧的宿舍生活玲躯。
On a Harmonious Dormitory Life
Dormitory life is an indispensable part of college life. But sometimes the harmony in the dormitory be disturbed in one way or another.
As is known to all, a harmonious dormitory life is important to college students and benefits all the members. On one hand, we can have a good rest and put our heart into study. On the other hand, we will have a good mood and enjoy being together.
There are several ways to create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life. Firstly, you have to evaluate your life-style and try to get rid of your dirty habits, if there are any. Secondly, when an annoying situation arises, you’ll just have to learn to tolerate each other and co-exist. Thirdly, you’ll have to share with each other and make good friends.
In conclusion, we should try our best to build a harmonious dormitory life for the sake of good study and good life.
點評:“和諧”成為我們當今社會詞頻概率最高用詞据德,就社會而言,倡導建立和諧社會跷车;就家庭而言棘利,提倡建設(shè)和諧家庭;就校園來講朽缴,則要建立和諧校園善玫;和諧兩字似乎無所不在,大學生宿舍生活同樣需要和諧密强。本范例題與四級考試熱點密切相關(guān)茅郎,又為典型的校園生活主題蜗元,值得關(guān)注。
范例四
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Brief Introduction to the University. You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines:
假設(shè)你是一名學生志愿者系冗,要給來你們學校參觀的外國朋友介紹學校情況奕扣。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括學校歷史、規(guī)模掌敬、教學現(xiàn)狀以及未來目標等惯豆。
A Brief Introduction to the University
Distinguished guests,
Welcome to our university. Before you start to look around, allow me to give you a brief account of the school.
Founded in 1927, our university is one of this city’s earliest universities of liberal arts. It is staffed with an excellent faculty, and has a total enrollment of over 10,000 students. In the past years, it has turned out numerous well-qualified students and found its graduates active in professions of all walks of life.
Since its establishment, the university has always steered itself toward the objective that its students have an overall healthy development. Not only does it provide the students with basic academic courses, but it manages to expose them to the up-to-date knowledge. Besides, students are free to participate in colorful campus activities and social practice, which are intended for broadening their mind and developing their potential talent.
Currently, both our faculty and students are making every effort to improve the quality of our education in the direction of a first-rate university. Thank you.
點評:近幾年,隨著我國順利加入世貿(mào)組織以及經(jīng)濟全球化步伐的加快奔害,許多國內(nèi)高校紛紛與國外大學合作辦學循帐,教育走向國際化成為人們關(guān)注的熱點,也是大學生門比較關(guān)心的熱點問題舀武。本范例題為熱議校園生活話題拄养,與2004年旅游景點介紹2006年考查的名校校園開放如出一轍。
范例五
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a friend who will come to your city to see you. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
假設(shè)你是李明, 你的一個朋友張偉準備到你所在的城市來旅游银舱,但你有事不能接待瘪匿。寫封信給他,解釋你不能接待的原因寻馏,并說明你所做的安排棋弥。
A Letter to a Friend
Dear Zhang Wei,
I’m glad to know that you are coming to my city during the summer vacation.
However, I’m afraid there’s some bad news. I’m planning to take part in an international conference to be held in another city during the time of your visit. All the top scientists in my field will show up at the conference. More importantly, I’m lucky enough to have been selected to give a speech on behalf of my research team at the Conference. I really can’t miss it.
I understand that it’ll be your first time to this city and I’m your only friend here. I’ve asked my roommate to meet you at the airport, and you can stay in my room. He is a very nice person and he will show you around the city. Hope you two will get on well and have a nice holiday!
Yours,
Li Ming
點評:本范例題與2001年6月考查的A Letter to a Schoolmate 類似,所不同是寫作提示有所不同诚欠,2001年6月作文題是寫信對校友來度假表示歡迎并在信中提出建議和注意事項顽染,而本范例題是對朋友來訪不能接待,同時在信中說明原因及具體安排轰绵,內(nèi)容不一粉寞,但話題相仿,寫作思路相似左腔,值得關(guān)注唧垦。
范例六
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Living alone or Living with Roommates? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.
1. 有人認為大學里應(yīng)獨自生活
2. 另一些認為大學里應(yīng)與別人同住
3. 你的看法
Living alone or Living with Roommates
Nowadays, there has appeared a heated discussion among the college students as to whether they should live alone outside the campus or live together with other roommates in the students’ dormitory. Opinions are divided over the matter.
Those who are in favor of Living alone maintain that it is very convenient to live by themselves. They can enjoy absolute freedom in a room of their own. They can have their own timetable without disturbing others. They are also free to equip the room with a personal computer so that they can have easy access to the Internet.
But others argue that living with roommates has attractions of its own. With several students sharing the same room, each person’s experiences can be greatly enriched. They can learn a lot from talking to one another. By learning to tolerate the differences between individuals, they can become more mature.
As far as I’m concerned, I prefer to live with roommates because I love the feeling of belonging. Besides, it is a lot cheaper to live in a dorm than to rent an apartment outside the campus.
點評:本文與校園生活密切相關(guān),也是近年來出現(xiàn)的現(xiàn)象液样,人們對此的看法各異振亮,2003年后,四級作文考查加大了學校生活類題目的考查鞭莽,因為這類題材不存在地域的差異坊秸,不同地域的同學都有話可說。本范例題即為校園生活類話題澎怒,與剛考完的四級作文話題類似褒搔,符合命題者出題思路,值得引起重視。
范例七
Direction: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic :Cell Phones .You should write no less than 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1. 描述上圖所示的手機用戶數(shù)的變化情況
2. 出現(xiàn)這種情況的原因
3. 對此現(xiàn)象作出評價
Cell Phones
As is shown in the chart, cell phones are becoming increasingly popular within China. In 1999, the number of cell phones in use was only 2 million, but in 2002, the number reaches 5 million. And in the year 2005, the number has suddenly soared to 9 million.
There are many factors contributing to this development. Firstly, a cell phone has no wires and can be carried everywhere easily. Secondly, a cell phone is something wonderful that we can have fun with news, games, music and chat through sending short messages. Thirdly, the drop in price and the simultaneous improvement in the functions have made it possible for an average person to make use of cell phone.
The wide use of cell phones has made them more and more indispensable in people’s daily life. The functions of the cell phone have made certain people reluctant to separate themselves from their cell phone.
點評:隨著我國經(jīng)濟的快速發(fā)展站超,人民的生活水平不斷改善,通訊業(yè)的日新月異的發(fā)展乖酬,使得手機使用普及化死相,成為人們?nèi)粘I畹谋匦杵罚瑢Υ说睦兹藗兛捶ǜ鳟愐瘛1痉独}為熱點話題算撮,同樣是年輕人較熟悉和經(jīng)常討論的話題,值得關(guān)注县昂。
范例八
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic
Advertisement. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 廣告的作用
2. 廣告的形式多樣
3. 廣告的夸張性
Advertisement
Advertisements are forcing their way into people’s lives. People refer to advertisements in their daily lives because they are consumers. The advertisers are usually manufacturers, retailers and salesmen. Their merchandise needs to be advertised to bring it to the attention to the customers. Thus nearly every product is advertised in some way. To a large extent, good advertising leads to success while bad advertising can mean failure.
There are many ways to advertise and ‘a(chǎn)ds’ come in different forms. Newspapers carry advertisements. Some products are publicized on TV and radio which bring them into notice of a wide audience. Billboards also carry advertising. Advertising is a big industry now and many agencies have been set up to furnish a variety of forms..
However, advertising is not always truthful. A product is often misrepresented. The advertiser exaggerates the benefits of the merchandise he wants to sell. Thus, he misrepresents the truth. The consumer falls victim to such advertising. Millions of people have bought advertised products and have been dissatisfied with them肮柜。
點評:這是一篇說明文,用說明的表達方式來解說事物倒彰,闡明事理审洞。寫好說明文,不僅要抓住特征待讳,注意條理芒澜,而且要巧妙運用說明方法,像下定義创淡、舉例子痴晦、作比較、分類別琳彩、列數(shù)字誊酌、打比方等
范例九
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the President of the University about Improving the Sports Facilities on Campus. You should write no more than 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese:
假設(shè)你是李明,請你寫一封信給校長露乏,建議改善本校體育設(shè)施狀況碧浊,內(nèi)容應(yīng)涉及體育設(shè)施對大學生的重要性,對目前學校體育設(shè)施的狀況可以表揚瘟仿,可以提出批評建議辉词,也可以兼而有之。
A Letter to the President of the University
Dear Mr. President,
I am writing this letter to you to express my concern about the sports facilities on campus. I have noticed that our university has very limited resources in terms of opportunities to participate in sports, especially given that the number of students on campus is increasing every year.
As we both know, sports are very important for the sound growth of young people. If they have access to quality sports facilities, young people are able to choose a healthier lifestyle, to boost self-esteem and confidence, and to build a positive outlook and sense of achievement.
My proposal is to build a new sports area. It should be designed with soccer players, basketball players, and ping-pong players in mind. It should have a different section for each activity and be available to students all year round. I believe such facilities will meet our sporting needs.
Thank you for your reading this letter.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
點評:本范例題仿真度頗高猾骡,為校園生活話題瑞躺,與在校大學生日常生活密切相關(guān),是最近幾年側(cè)重考查的題材兴想。2002年1月考查了就本校食堂狀況給校長寫一封信.