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1.作文類型：留言條

假定你是李華法瑟，正在英國(guó)接受英語培訓(xùn)，住在一戶英國(guó)人家里浮庐。今天你的房東Mrs Wilson 不在家甚负，你準(zhǔn)備外出，請(qǐng)給Mrs Wilson 寫一留言條审残，內(nèi)容包括：

1.外出購(gòu)物

2.替房東還書

3.Tracy 來電話留言：

1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)見面取消

2)此事已告知Susan

3) 盡快回電

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右梭域；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫搅轿。

Mrs Wilson,

I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.

Li Hua

2.作文類型：給朋友的信

假定你是李華病涨，你的美國(guó)朋友sarah 打算暑期來北京旅游，來信詢問改建后前門大街的情況璧坟。請(qǐng)你寫封回信既穆，簡(jiǎn)單介紹以下內(nèi)容：

1.簡(jiǎn)況：長(zhǎng)800余米、600多年歷史雀鹃、300余家商鋪幻工；

2.位置：天安門廣場(chǎng)南面；

3.交通：公共汽車17黎茎、69囊颅、59等路，地鐵2號(hào)線工三；

4.特色：步行街迁酸、當(dāng)當(dāng)車先鱼、茶館俭正、劇院等。

參考詞匯：

步行街 pedestrian street

當(dāng)當(dāng)車 trolley car

地鐵 subway

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右焙畔；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)掸读，以使行文連貫。

Dear Sarah,

Thank you for your letter for asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street. Here is something about it.

Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old. Along this 800-meter street, there are more than 300 shops. As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tian’anmen Square, it’s very convenient to get there by bus. You may take Buses No. 17, 69 or 59. Subway Line 2 has a stop there too. Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to chatters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life. I’m sure you‘ll like it.

Yours sincerely宏多，

Li Hua

3.作文類型：介紹信

假設(shè)你是李華儿惫。你的外國(guó)筆友Jane打算于七月來中國(guó)，特來信了解中國(guó)人的社交習(xí)俗伸但。請(qǐng)你用英語回一封信肾请，從以下幾個(gè)方面作具體介紹。

1.見面時(shí)的問候方式更胖；

2.對(duì)贊美時(shí)回答方式铛铁；

3.接收禮物時(shí)的回應(yīng)方式隔显；

4.餐宴禮節(jié)。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右饵逐，信的開頭和結(jié)束語已為你寫好(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))括眠。

2.可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫倍权。

Dear Jane,

Glad to hear from you and you’re welcome to China in July. The following are some Chinese customs.

Firstly, we greet each other by saying “Hello” or asking such questions as “Where are you going?” or “Are you busy?” to express our care. Secondly, when praised, we reply with “Oh, no!” or “I’m over-praised” to show good manners. Next, when receiving a gift, we usually say “It’s unnecessary” besides “Thanks” to show politeness and then put it away. Finally, at dinner parties, we talk loudly and touch glasses when drinking to someone’s health or success to show that we’re warm.?

Anyhow, different cultures, different customs. If you “Do as the Romans do when in Rome”, you’ll enjoy more of your stay here.?

I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey.?

Yours sincerely掷豺，

Li Hua

4.作文類型：演講稿

假設(shè)你正在參加全省中學(xué)生英語演講比賽，請(qǐng)你針對(duì)有些父母經(jīng)常翻看孩子日記或書包這一現(xiàn)象薄声，寫一篇演講稿当船，陳述你的觀點(diǎn)。

演講稿的主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：

認(rèn)為同學(xué)們不必為此苦惱;

希望能夠體諒父母的苦衷;

建議與父母進(jìn)行交流和溝通默辨。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)生年，以使行文連貫;

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)廓奕。

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.

Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but there’s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into any trouble. They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are dong it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lying around—thy are bound to read it.

Thank you!

5.作文類型：保護(hù)環(huán)境

現(xiàn)在我們周圍的環(huán)境污染越來越嚴(yán)重抱婉。作為一個(gè)中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)節(jié)約資源桌粉，保護(hù)環(huán)境蒸绩，從我們身邊的小事做起，做一個(gè)“低碳生活”的中學(xué)生铃肯。請(qǐng)以“My Low--carbon Life”為題患亿，寫一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。

內(nèi)容包括：

1.地球的污染越來越嚴(yán)重押逼，我們能看到森林被砍伐步藕、水污染和空氣污染。

2.你是怎樣從身邊小事做起挑格，做到“低碳生活”的咙冗。如：每天步行上學(xué)、離開教室及時(shí)關(guān)燈和電扇漂彤、充分利用紙張雾消、節(jié)約用水等。

3.號(hào)召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中來挫望。

作文要求：

1.不能照抄原文立润；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。

2.語句連貫媳板，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右桑腮。作文的題目已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)蛉幸。

My Low--carbon Life

The environmental pollution is worse and worse today.

【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】

My Low-carbon Life

The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.

Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.

I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful.