34. Writing
December 5th is International Volunteers Day. Since 1985, when the United Nations announced the special day, tens of millions of people around the world have volunteered to help those in need. China now has 4.5 million registered volunteers who have provided more than 4.5 billion hours of volunteer work. What can you gain from volunteering?
Writing a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
The Benefits of Volunteering
You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, support your opinion with appropriate details.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
思路點(diǎn)撥
你知道國(guó)際志愿者日嗎?參加志愿活動(dòng)有什么好處呢愧驱?是為了自己逻炊,還是為了全人類的共同利益平绩?
題目要求考生就 “ 參加志愿活動(dòng)的好處 ” 為題討論加入志愿者行列的益處,屬于說(shuō)明類文章厌均。
分析提綱可知,文章的結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)為:
第一部分闡述現(xiàn)象并提出觀點(diǎn):1985年聯(lián)合國(guó)將每年的12月5日定為國(guó)際志愿者日,目前僅中國(guó)就有450萬(wàn)名注冊(cè)志愿者沐序,志愿活動(dòng)時(shí)間超過(guò)45億小時(shí)。參加志愿活動(dòng)可以發(fā)展人的各個(gè)方面堕绩,是其他活動(dòng)所不能比擬的策幼。
第二部分闡述參加志愿活動(dòng)的好處:首先,志愿者與眾不同的地方是幫助他人奴紧、不求回報(bào)特姐,因此充分體現(xiàn)了無(wú)私奉獻(xiàn)的精神;其次黍氮,志愿活動(dòng)可以增強(qiáng)全球化社區(qū)感唐含;再次浅浮,志愿活動(dòng)使我們成為一個(gè)真正的、區(qū)別于動(dòng)物的人類捷枯。
第三部分總結(jié)滚秩,表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn):只要有時(shí)間、有機(jī)會(huì)淮捆,我們都應(yīng)該積極參與到志愿事業(yè)當(dāng)中郁油,這是使自己更無(wú)私、更富有同情心攀痊、更高尚的最好途徑桐腌。
參考范文:
The Benefits of Volunteering
Since 1985, when the United Nations first declared December 5 “ International Volunteer Day ”,millions of people around the world have seized the chance to volunteer. China alone currently has 4.5 million volunteers registered, who have together contributed over 4.5 billion hours of their time. As far as i am concerned, volunteering develops people in ways that no other activities can.
Volunteering is unique in that people who take part in it do so to help strangers for nothing in return. Most people will gladly help strangers in return for money or other compensation, but how many will do so for free? Volunteering, therefore, develops a spirit of unselfishness and compassion in those who choose to volunteer. In addition, volunteering can build a strong sense of worldwide community; the basis for help is simply the humanity thai is common to both those in need and those giving help. Volunteering makes us more true human, setting us apart from the animals, who generally act only out of instincts for self-defense.
I believe that volunteering is, therefore, something that all of us who have the time and the opportunity should take part in. It is the best way to develop an unselfish, compassionate, noble and true human character.