續(xù)寫評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

第五檔

（21-25分）

與所給短文融合度高超全，與所提供的各段落開頭語銜接合理颊郎。

內(nèi)容豐富道川，應(yīng)用了5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵詞語斑胜。

所使用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯豐富、準(zhǔn)確憎瘸，可能有些許錯誤虫碉，但完全不影響意思表達(dá)寓免。

有效地使用了詞語間的連接成分苞俘，所續(xù)寫短文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊盹沈。

第四檔

（16-20分）

與所給短文融合度較高，與所提供的各段落開頭語銜接較為合理苗胀。

內(nèi)容比較豐富襟诸，應(yīng)用了5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵詞語瓦堵。

所使用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯較為豐富基协、準(zhǔn)確，可能有些許錯誤菇用，但不影響意思表達(dá)澜驮。

比較有效地使用了詞語間的連接成分，所續(xù)寫短文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊惋鸥。

第三檔

（11-15分）

與所給短文關(guān)系較為密切杂穷，與所提供的各段落開頭語有一定程度銜接。

寫出了若干有關(guān)內(nèi)容卦绣，應(yīng)用了4個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵詞語耐量。

應(yīng)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求，雖有一些錯誤滤港，但不影響意思表達(dá)廊蜒。

應(yīng)用簡單的句間連接成分，使全文內(nèi)容連貫溅漾。

第二檔

（6-10分）

與所給短文關(guān)系有一定關(guān)系山叮，與所提供的各段落開頭語有一定程度銜接。

寫出了一些有關(guān)內(nèi)容添履，應(yīng)用了3個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵詞語屁倔。

語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)，詞匯項(xiàng)目有限暮胧，有些語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯方面的錯誤锐借，影響了意思的表達(dá)问麸。

較少使用句間的連接成分，全文內(nèi)容缺少連貫性钞翔。

第一檔

（1-5分）

與所給短文和開頭語銜接較差口叙。

產(chǎn)出內(nèi)容太少，很少使用短文中標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵詞語嗅战。

語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)妄田，詞匯項(xiàng)目很有限，有較多語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯方面的錯誤驮捍，嚴(yán)重影響了意思的表達(dá)疟呐。

缺乏句間的連接成分，全文內(nèi)容不連貫东且。

0分 白卷启具，內(nèi)容太少無法評判或所寫內(nèi)容與所提供內(nèi)容無關(guān)。

讀后續(xù)寫題目（2017珊泳、11鲁冯、3）

第二節(jié)? 讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）

閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫色查，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事薯演。

A vacation with my mother

? I had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.

? My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.

? David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept:” You stand outside the door and play lookout while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh… I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any chances.

On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections.If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world as as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.

注意：

1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2. 應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語秧了；

3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段跨扮，每段開頭語已為你寫好；

4. 續(xù)寫完成后验毡，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語衡创。

Para1:? The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.

Para2:? We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.

absent-minded，forgetful晶通，trip璃氢，Dad，trouble