聲明
因?yàn)橛⒄Z不好而丟了臉(詳情請看我2月15日的文章《關(guān)于英文寫作刻意練習(xí)》)
所以本文是練習(xí)英語用的
故此文中含有許多錯(cuò)誤
歡迎朋友們指正内颗,不甚感謝
上一篇文章Good Body, Good Life存在的問題,感謝我的校友王熒老師指出:
原句:He have been a doctor for more than 20 years
修正:He has been a doctor for more than 20 years
原因:應(yīng)為第三人稱單數(shù)形式
原句:Mr.Smith is a kind-hearted man. He is respected.
修正:Mr.Smith is a so kind-hearted man that he is respected by many people.
原因:句式太零散
原句:Mr.Smith look over Mr.Wang's body with patient again and again. Finally, he come to a conclusion.
修正:Mr.Smith checked Mr.Wang's body with patience again and again. Finally, he came to a conclusion.
原因:檢查身體不用look over驰徊,而是用check;形容詞patient改為名詞patience砂心;應(yīng)為過去時(shí)態(tài)
原句:Mr.Wang would be careful of his diet in the future
修正:Mr.Wang should be careful of his diet in the future
原因:should:應(yīng)該
原句:Without health, we can't work well, at least, your efficiency will be much lower.
修正:Without health, we can't work well. At least, your efficiency will be much lower.
原因:前后是兩句完整的話璧亚,故well后面用句號,at首字母大寫能扒。
原句:I hope all of you have a good health and enjoying life
修正:I hope all of you have a good health and enjoy life
原因:hope sb do sth
今日練習(xí):看圖作文(請?jiān)忂@詭異的畫風(fēng),我選資料時(shí)沒有注意辫狼。)
Friendship Lasts Forever
Tom and Mary are good friends. They were neighbors so they grew up together when they were children. They have good friendships.
One day, Tom's family made a move to another city. He had to leave the place which he lived for 15 years. And also, he had to say goodbye to Mary.
Yesterday morning, Mary got a phone call. It was Tom. He invited Mary to his new house to have dinner. But Mary didn't know how to get there, so she asked Tom the way to his home. Tom told Mary how she can get to his home patiently. However, Mary was confused because she has no sense of direction.
Fortunately, Mary is a clever girl. Each time when she was lost, she asked the policeman for help.
The policeman told Mary to "go down this street until the end", then Mary go down this street until the end. The second policeman told Mary to "turn to the left at the first cross", then Mary turn to the left at the first cross.
At last, the 17th policeman told Mary to "walk along the road and when you see the second building on your left, it is the house you are looking forward, you can't miss it", then Mary get to Tom's new house.
Tom was very glad to see Mary again. They had dinner together, and they talked a lot. The whole house filled with laughter.
Nothing has changed, their friendships last forever.
中文
友誼地久天長
Tom和Mary是好朋友初斑。他們曾是鄰居,所以他倆從小一起長大膨处。他們的關(guān)系好極了见秤。
有一天,Tom舉家搬去另一座城市真椿。他不得不離開這個(gè)他生活了15年的地方鹃答。同時(shí),他也不得不向Mary告別了突硝。
昨天早上测摔,Mary接到一個(gè)電話。是Tom打來的,他邀請Mary來他的新家做客锋八。但是Mary并不知道該如何去到Tom那里浙于,所以她讓Tom告訴自己該怎么走。Tom耐心的和Mary講解該如何來他家挟纱。然而Mary還是一頭霧水羞酗,因?yàn)樗钒V。
還好紊服,Mary是一個(gè)機(jī)靈的姑娘檀轨。每當(dāng)她感覺迷路了,她就會向警察尋求幫助围苫。
警察告訴Mary“沿著這條路一直走到底”裤园,Mary就沿著這條路一直走到底。第二個(gè)警察告訴Mary“第一個(gè)十字路口向左拐”剂府,Mary就第一個(gè)十字路口向左拐。
最后剃盾,第17個(gè)警察告訴Mary“順著這條路走腺占,你在左邊看到的第二個(gè)建筑就是你要找的房子,你一定能找到的痒谴∷ゲ”然后Mary就到了Tom的新家。
再次看到Mary积蔚,Tom很高興意鲸。他們一起吃晚飯,聊了很多很多尽爆。整個(gè)屋子里充滿了歡聲笑語怎顾。
一切都還是原來的樣子,他們的友誼地久天長漱贱。