全體新概念學(xué)員們搪缨,你們久等了食拜!
體驗過Tyger想象力寫作的同學(xué)都呼精彩,卻沒能過癮副编,這是學(xué)生的遺憾负甸,更是Tyger所不能接受的。2018年暑假痹届,咱們來玩玩“想象力寫作”呻待。
為何面對面?
第一队腐,線上便捷蚕捉,但確實局限,寫作需要強(qiáng)交互柴淘。線上大班迫淹,Tyger確實做不好寫作秘通,與其做不好不如換種方式。所以Tyger決心把重量級的“想象力”寫作放在線下千绪。Tyger相信學(xué)生-家長-老師都是樂在其中充易,雖然較線上辛苦許多梗脾,但為了我們心中共同的期待荸型,這些辛苦是值得的。
第二炸茧,Tyger有一個小小的“野心”瑞妇,Tyger希望培養(yǎng)起一批英文小作家。Tyger將積極支持這批小作者投稿梭冠。為了打造這批小作家辕狰,2018年暑假集訓(xùn)只是一方面,在接下來的一年時間控漠,Tyger和Landy將通力合作蔓倍,統(tǒng)一命題,統(tǒng)一指導(dǎo)盐捷,在線直播的方式指導(dǎo)孩子們不少于五篇投稿級別習(xí)作偶翅。換句話說,孩子的文字變成鉛字碉渡,孩子們成功的站在中國各大英語演講舞臺上的演講稿出自自己之手聚谁,這是我們的目標(biāo)。
因為此次訓(xùn)練營需要學(xué)員有一定的基礎(chǔ)滞诺,所以面向Tyger線上新概念學(xué)員形导,需要通過面試,好消息是年齡年級不限习霹。
集訓(xùn)地點:深圳.龍崗中心城.大運.
集訓(xùn)時間:7月初一期朵耕,8月底一期,7天/期
培訓(xùn)內(nèi)容及安排:通過面試的同學(xué)獲得
按培訓(xùn)課時收費:200元/小時淋叶,成人100元/小時阎曹。4小時/天
ps:本次訓(xùn)練營是Tyger、Landy和Melon老師承辦爸吮,所以談不上規(guī)模芬膝,相信Tyger教學(xué)品質(zhì)的同學(xué)就放心過來,定不會讓你失望形娇。
pps:因為Tyger的教學(xué)研究涉及拼讀-閱讀-語法-寫作-口語-翻譯等諸多方面锰霜,本次訓(xùn)練營會進(jìn)行串聯(lián),這也是為什么針對Tyger新概念學(xué)員的根本原因桐早。
想象力寫作范文癣缅,以饗觀眾
Black Seed(初一)
I was a Black Seed. I? lived? under the ground. Unlike lots of brothers and sisters who were green, I was black. I always felt lonely, just like the ugly duckling in her peers. When my siblings were playing, I was always asked to be a observer but not a joiner. I determined to grow to be a great tree, a unique tree.
One day,I was dug out by a little boy, it was my first my to see the outside world above the ground. With the little boy’s help, I was able to enjoy the sunshine and drink the rain. I had grown very fast, 20 years later, I became a big tree and the little boy became a handsome young man and We were all grown up.
Everything was going really well except that the boy’s wife had suffered a car severe accident and he needed a lot of money.
To save his wife and to express my gratitude to his helps in my early time, I donated my trunk to get the money to save his wife.
Misfortunes never come singly. Another crisis occurred on him. He was forced to sell everything, even my broken body. I was sad but I could understand.
Another 20 years passed, The man overcame all those difficulties and grew to be one of the riches man in the town. We saw each other again, he found me and cred, he wanted to bought me back at all cost.
Since then, we lived happily than ever never separated. Do you know who I am. I am the black seed of friendship. Once planted, it grows.
A dream(六年級)
When l was very young, I used to make the same dream.
It was a quiet afternoon, I fell asleep on my bed. In my dream, I dropped into the sea, but I wanted to swim but my arms are so heavy. I wanted to shout but my throat is dry. I cried for help, but there wasn’t anyone listened. I was so desperate to find that my body was sinking.Suddenly,I felt something jacked me up. OMG, these were millions of cars, which were very small, quite different from the normal cars. They saved me and said: "Hey, little girl, don't worry, we hear your help and you are safe now."I waked up and looked around my bed. What a dream. I want to see the cars in my dream again. From then on, I began to learn to swim. I swims a lot and I am very good at swimming now. I always wonder if I could have a continuous stories with the cars. I believe that it may come true in my new dream. Let’s dream a dream now. Good night.
(二-四年級作品)
A pan.
A black pan.
The black pan hits gray wolf.
A black pan hits gray wolf by red fox.
The gray wolf is very sad.
The red fox is very happy.?
一個平底鍋
一個黑黑的平底鍋
這個黑黑的平底鍋重重地?fù)袅艘幌禄姨?/p>
原來是紅太狼打灰太狼
灰太狼很傷心
紅太狼很得意
A queen.
An icy queen.
Her name is Elsa.
She is sadly ditched.
She goes out on an icy day.
She is very cold.
She can see a mountain.
She builds an icy castle there.
She lives there ever since.?
一個皇后
一個冰雪皇后
她的名字叫艾爾莎
她被悲慘的拋棄了厨剪。
在非常寒冷的一天,她離家出走友存。
她很冷祷膳。
她看到了一座雪山。
她在那家里建立起冰雪城堡屡立。
從此直晨,她住在了那兒。
A football.
A black football.
The black football jumped into a zoo.
The black football jumped into a zoo and sat on a fox.
The red fox was hungry then.
The red fox wanted to eat the black football.
The black football jumped and jumped.
The black football jumped by a big blue snake.
The big snake was hungry, too.
The big snake wanted to eat the black football.
The black football jumped out of the zoo.
The black football would not go to the zoo any more.
The black football was scared.?
一個足球膨俐。
一個黑色的足球勇皇。
這個黑色的足球跳進(jìn)了動物園。
這個黑色的足球跳進(jìn)了動物園焚刺,一屁股坐在了紅色狐貍身上敛摘。
這只紅色的狐貍此時非常饑餓。
她想吃掉這只足球乳愉。
這只足球趕忙跳開兄淫。
它跳到了一條閃著藍(lán)光的大蛇旁。
大蛇此時也很餓蔓姚。
他也想一口把足球吃到肚子里捕虽。
黑足球趕緊跳出了動物園。
它再也不愿意去動物園了赂乐。
它真的被嚇到了薯鳍。
A man.
A batman.
A batman can fly.
He can see a bad man.
The batman dashes down.
The bad man is very scared.
The batman is very happy.
The batman hits bad man.
The bad man is mad.
I am your dad.
The bad man hits batman.
The batman is very sad.
蝙蝠俠
蝙蝠俠能飛
他看到了一個壞蛋
蝙蝠俠朝壞蛋俯沖過去
壞蛋非常害怕
蝙蝠俠很得意
蝙蝠俠教訓(xùn)了這個壞蛋
壞蛋勃然大怒
我是你爸爸
壞蛋教訓(xùn)了蝙蝠俠
蝙蝠俠很傷心
The mouse.
The biggest mouse.
The biggest mouse catches a cat.
The biggest mouse catches a cat for its pet.
The mouse asks the cat to jump.
The cat jumps.
The mouse asks the cat to eat.
The cat eats.
The mouse asks the cat to shout.
The cat shouts.Ha, Ha, Ha
The cat becomes the biggest cat, then he eats the mouse.?
一只老鼠
一只最大的老鼠
這只最大的老鼠抓到了一只貓
這只最大的老鼠抓到這只貓,把它當(dāng)寵物
老鼠讓貓?zhí)?/p>
貓乖乖的跳
老鼠讓貓吃
貓乖乖的吃
老鼠讓貓叫
貓叫了
突然間挨措,貓變成了最大的貓
它把這只最大的老鼠吃掉了
A computer.
A robot computer.
The robot computer and a mouse are good friends.
A man buys the mouse.
The robot computer cries.
The robot computer baidus the man's house.
The robot computer knocks at the man's door.
The man is afraid.
He returns the mouse to the robot computer.?
一臺電腦
一臺機(jī)器人電腦
這臺機(jī)器人電腦和鼠標(biāo)是好朋友
一個人買走了鼠標(biāo)
機(jī)器人電腦哭了
機(jī)器人電腦百度一下那人的住所
機(jī)器人電腦敲了那個的房門
那人很害怕
他把鼠標(biāo)還給機(jī)器人電腦
A pencil.
A color pencil.
A boy sharpens the pencil to write.
The pencil gets shorter and shorter.
The pencil cries.
The boy throws it away.
A girl finds the pencil on her way to school.
The girl draws a pencil with the pencil.
Wow挖滤!The pencil on the paper becomes real.
The girl is very happy.?
一只鉛筆
一只彩色鉛筆
一個男孩削尖鉛筆寫字
鉛筆變得越來越短
鉛筆哭了
男孩卻把鉛筆扔了
一個女孩在上學(xué)的路上撿到了這只鉛筆
這個女孩用這只短得不能再短的鉛筆畫了另外一只鉛筆
哇!
畫中的鉛筆居然變成了真正的鉛筆
這個女孩子非常開心
A door.
A magic door.
Nobody ever enters the magic door.
One day, Tom and I play Hide and Seek.
Tom is coming up.
And I have no way out.
I push the door open.
Tom comes here, look around and leaves quickly.
So weird, I was just beside him.
How could he ignore me??
Am I invisible to him?
一扇門
一扇神奇的門
沒人走進(jìn)過這扇神奇的門
一天浅役, 湯姆和我玩捉迷藏的游戲
眼看湯姆就要過來了
我卻無處可躲
我急忙推開了這扇門
湯姆過來了斩松,左瞧瞧又看看,又離開了
真奇怪觉既,我就站在他身邊啊
他怎么無視我呢惧盹?
難道我變成了隱形人人
A taxi.
A flying taxi.
A flying taxi flies.
A flying taxi flies to the sun.
A flying taxi sees a rocket.
A flying taxi knocks into the rocket.
No, taxi, no.
A flying taxi breaks up.
Bam, Bam, Bam
The Earth cries.?
一輛出租車
一輛飛行出租車
這條飛行出租車飛呀飛
它飛向了太陽
它看到了火箭
它突然撞向了火箭
不要啊,出租車
出租車分崩離析
砰瞪讼,砰钧椰,砰
地球媽媽哭了
A dog.
The dog can fly.
The dog flies into the sky.
The dog can see.
The dog can see a flock of birds.
The dog play with the birds.
Oh, no. No fires.
The dog drops, drops and drops.
The dog unfold his wings.
The dog is so cool.
一條狗
這條狗會飛
這條狗飛上了天
它看見了一群鳥
它飛舞著和鳥群玩耍
噢,不好
噴火器噴火了
這條狗開始往下掉
飛狗不慌不忙伸開了翅膀
這條飛狗真酷
A skeleton.
A bloody skeleton.
The bloody skeleton goes to school.
The bloody skeleton eats kids.
Buildings collapse.
The playground explodes.
A big bang
The skeleton is dead.
一具骷髏人
一具血淋淋的骷髏人
這個骷髏人去了學(xué)校
他吃小孩
校舍倒塌了
操場爆炸了
一聲巨響
骷髏人死了
A chair.
A jumping chair.
The jumping chair jumps in a tree.
The jumping chair is happy.
The jumping chair jumps onto a roof.
The jumping chair is happier.
The jumping chair jumps on top of a pole.
Oops!
The jumping chair loses its balance.
The jumping chair cries.
It has a broken broken leg and cannot jump any more.? 一張椅子
一張?zhí)?/p>
這張?zhí)翁狭藰?/p>
它很高興
接著符欠,它又跳到了屋頂
它更高興了
這次嫡霞,它要跳到一根電線桿頂端
糟糕
它一打滑,失去了平衡
跳跳椅哭了
原來它斷了一條腿希柿,再也不能跳了
A TV.
A robot TV.
A robot TV can see.
A robot TV sees a bird.
Hello, bird, can You see me?
Yes, I do.
Which channel do You like?
I want to watch bird TV.
It's really cool.
Thank you, robot TV.
You are welcome.?
一臺電視機(jī)
一臺機(jī)器人電視機(jī)
機(jī)器人電視機(jī)可以看東西
它看到了一只小鳥
你好诊沪,小鳥养筒,你能看見我嗎?
當(dāng)然
你想看哪個頻道端姚?
我想看小鳥節(jié)目
節(jié)目很精彩
謝謝你晕粪,機(jī)器人
不客氣
A broom.
A flying broom.
A witch's flying broom.
The witch sees a fish on a house roof.
The witch smells the fish and eats it.
The witch sees a boy in a tree.
The witch laughs at the boy but won't help him out.
The broom feels shame for the bad witch.
He want to find a hero to he his host.
一把掃帚
一把飛行掃帚
老巫婆的飛行掃帚
老巫婆看見屋頂上曬著魚
她聞到了魚香味,毫不猶豫地就吃了它
老巫婆看到一個男孩困在了樹上
她嘲笑男孩卻不幫助男孩
飛行掃帚為巫婆的行為蒙羞
他想為自己找到新的英雄成為它的主人
A bus.
A swimming bus.
The swimming bus swims in the sea.
The swimming bus meets a fierce shark.
The shark is very angry because the bus blocks in the way.
I am angry, I want to eat you.
The bus swims and swims.
Who can help me?
An octopus blinds the shark with its ink.
The bus is saved.
They become friends ever since.?
一輛汽車
一輛可以游泳的汽車
它在海里游啊游
它遇上了一頭兇猛的鯊魚
鯊魚看到了汽車很生氣渐裸,因為汽車擋住了他要去的路
鯊魚說巫湘,我要吃了你
汽車趕緊逃離
誰能幫幫我呀?
一頭大章魚噴出了濃稠的墨汁橄仆,擋住了鯊魚的視線
汽車被救了
它和章魚成為了永遠(yuǎn)的朋友
A sheep.
A pink sheep.
The pink sheep smelled.
The pink sheep smelled the flowers.
The pink sheep smelled the blue flowers and sneezed.
A…A…Ah chool
Wet sheep.
A real wet mess.
The pink sheep get checked by a vet.
"No flowers" said the vet.
The pink sheep will be more careful with flowers.?
一只羊
一只粉紅色的羊
這只粉絲的羊聞到了花香味
這只粉絲的羊聞了一種開著藍(lán)色的花剩膘,然后打了一個噴嚏
啊嚏
粉羊冒冷汗
真是糟糕透了
她找獸醫(yī)檢查檢查
“下次不要這樣亂聞野花了”獸醫(yī)說
粉羊覺得以后確實要更加小心些。
A TV.
A speaking TV.
A speaking TV speaks all day.
Good Morning. Morning News is on.
Good, good, very good.
Good afternoon. Afternoon News is on.
Good, good, very good.
The time goes to 12. o'clock, p.m.
Oh,? no
Silly TV wakes everybody.
Bad, Bad, really Bad.?
一臺電視機(jī)
一臺可以說話的電視機(jī)
這臺電視機(jī)一天到晚說個不停
早晨好盆顾,新聞早報開始了
主人覺得很好
下午好,新聞午報開始了
主人覺得非常好
午夜12點
機(jī)器人自動播出午夜新聞
吵醒了家里的所有人
主人覺得真是一臺愚蠢的電視
An Iphone.
An Iphone and an Iphone shell.
The Iphone hang on a string.
Oh, no.
The Iphone rings.
The Iphone shell flies.
The Iphone flies in the Iphone shell.
Up, up, up.
"I am flying." The Iphone shouts proudly.
A wind blows.
The Iphone flips.
Down, down, down.
The Iphone and the Iphone shell are in the water.
一臺Iphone手機(jī)
一臺Iphone手機(jī)和Iphone手機(jī)殼
A window.
A broken window.
The broken window is part of a picture.
But it is vivid as it was real.
One day, a rabbit goes by the picture and goes by the window.
The rabbit loves the window
The next time, the rabbit comes again.
It goes nearer to the window.
The third time, the rabbit steps one by one in the middle of the window of the picture.
All of sudden, the picture cracks and the window breaks.
The rabbit falls into a long and deep hole.
What is this window actually?
A 3D trap set by hunter.
一扇窗
一扇破窗
破窗是畫的局部
但它栩栩如生畏梆,像真的一樣
一天您宪, 一只兔子經(jīng)過了這幅畫,經(jīng)過了這扇窗
這只兔子這扇窗
第二次奠涌,它又來了
這次她走得離這扇窗更近些
她覺得很安全宪巨,膽子更大了
第三次,她在畫中央溜畅,窗的位置又蹦又跳捏卓。
突然,畫布裂開了慈格,窗子破了怠晴。
兔子掉進(jìn)了一個很深很長的洞。
這個窗到底是什么東西浴捆?
原來是獵人設(shè)的3D陷阱蒜田。
A tiger.
A flying tiger.
A flying tiger flies to the sky.
The tiger swallows the sun, the moon and the stars.
The sky gets very dark.
Eva knows it.
Eva collects all kinds of color stones such as red, blue, purple, white and green ones.
She mixes all these stones and use the stone to fix the broken sky.
Year after year
The sky gets bright again and nobody sees the tiger again.?
一個老虎
一只飛行老虎
飛老虎飛到了天上
飛虎一口就吃掉了太陽,吞掉了月亮和星星
頓時选泻,天空一片漆黑
女媧知道了這件事
女媧收集各種彩色的石頭冲粤,紅、藍(lán)页眯、紫梯捕、白和綠色的石頭。
她把各種彩色石混在一起去修補破損的天空窝撵。
她修了一年又一年
天空再次變亮了傀顾。
那只飛虎也永遠(yuǎn)消失了。
A gate.
A wooden gate.
A walking wooden gate.
The walking wooden gate goes to school.
The wooden gate is nice to children and likes to play games with children.
The woodcutter sees the wooden gate.
How nice is the wooden gate.
He wants to carry it home.
Oh, no. Poor wooden gate.
The students runs to the woodcutter and stops it.
The wooden gate is fixed to a classroom finally.
From now on, the wooden gate study with students happily.
一扇門
一扇木門
一扇可以走路的木門
這扇木門去上學(xué)
它對同學(xué)們很友好忿族,喜歡和同學(xué)們一起玩游戲
一個伐木人看到了這扇木門
他一眼就看上了這木門
她想把木門帶回家
可憐的木門
同學(xué)們阻止了伐木人
最后锣笨,同學(xué)們想了個辦法蝌矛,他們把木門裝在了教室,作為教室的大門
從此错英,木門和同學(xué)們一起快樂的學(xué)習(xí)入撒。
A bed.
A flying bed.
The flying bed flies to space.
The flying bed meets an ET.
The ET is wicked.
What's this?
The ET wants to keep the bed in space for himself.
Help, help.
But no use, the ET is very powerful.
The flying bed invites the ET to sleep on him.
The ET feels comfortable on bed.
The flying bed carries the ET to Earth.
一張床
一張飛行床
飛行床飛到了太空
它遇到了一個外星人
這個外星人很邪惡
這是什么
外星人想把這個新玩意留作自己使用
幫幫我,幫幫我
根本沒用椭岩,外星人很強(qiáng)大
飛床邀請外星人睡在床上
外星人覺得睡在床上舒服極了
飛床把外星人帶回了地球
Landy 老師 (耿素嵐)
英國伯明翰大學(xué)教育研究生院訪問學(xué)者茅逮,研究跨文化背景下的跨學(xué)科英語教學(xué)。
擁有英國阿爾斯特大學(xué)和瑞士酒店管理大學(xué)雙碩士
曾任深圳書城外語培訓(xùn)中心教學(xué)總監(jiān)判哥,有豐富的高端教育和服務(wù)領(lǐng)域的教學(xué)和運營經(jīng)驗献雅。
擅長設(shè)計“有意義的讀、寫塌计、說”的互動課程挺身,使學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)的同時,增加讀書的興趣锌仅,并學(xué)會主動分享和表達(dá)觀點章钾。
人稱”口語發(fā)音教練”的Landy將用實際效果告訴你,要擺脫中式口音热芹,只需要把口型舌位做到位贱傀,堅持練習(xí)一定會看到驚喜效果。