first problem
- page 5 has an error in the Chinese
- syntax errors亭枷，typos/language issues, ?
- shorten to 8 pages
- improve the English used
- list the input and the output of fig1
- Italic where necessary,m,i
- The acknowledge part should move to the first page.
- Remove the words before Fig. 2
- Add a comma or period after each equation.
second problem
- The introduction should be revised significantly, Some unrelated studies are listed. chosen literature lack critical depth.
- The basic knowledge introduced too much
third and important problem
- Abstract is a little vague: methodology used、contribution\achievement
- technical contribution Is it the application of an emerging problem? or technical solution is also novel?
- data is difficult to obtain, so how to acquire the data in this work?
- the proposed approach should have better details: the approach for evaluation and the data sources needs explicit explanation.
- The performance evaluation is weak. Some explanations can be added.
fourth problem
- compare with any state of the art evaluation, so it is hard to see how the proposed approach is superior to the state of the art approaches.
