受某人影響 開始玩簡書了碳抄。 其實我一直不喜歡寫日記巫玻,我也懶得寫篮洁,小學(xué)和初中的日記大多數(shù)也是應(yīng)付的唯卖。高二那年山橄,因為我的一個好朋友漓拾,我開始寫日記了壳影,持續(xù)了一段時間,又放棄了肥荔。隨著...

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A man in the boatWhen stars were giggling in the dark sky, the moon rose up. Round and bright, it cast a...
When stars were giggling in the dark sky, the moon rose up. Round and bright, it cast a...