上周六的新概念課程，Tyger給家長和孩子們深入講解了想象力寫作的心法“萬物泛靈”闷尿，并現(xiàn)場演示塑径，家長和孩子們都堅信：只要用心，我們創(chuàng)作的繪本甚至可以超過“故事奶奶”的杰作填具。
Tyger心中的女神：故事奶奶Joy Cowley
孩子們的創(chuàng)作熱情如火山噴發(fā)统舀，接下來Tyger展示孩子們的作品并做賞析點評匆骗。
作品：《The Racing Car》，作者：Flyer誉简，年齡：二年級碉就，方式：仿寫
《The Racing Car》
Flyer and Sophia went for a ride in the racing car.? Sophia(母) Flyer(子)
The rear wing（尾翼） came off, "We don't need the rear wing", Sophia said.
The mirror(后視鏡) came off. "We don't need the mirror." Sophia said.
The rain wiper came off. "We don't need the rain wiper," Sophia said. The door came off. "We don't need the door," Sophia said.
The wheels came off. "We need wheels." Flyer said
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Tyger點評：整個作品，文字優(yōu)美闷串，構(gòu)圖十分巧妙瓮钥，尤其是用黃色箭頭串聯(lián)起來的行車路線，將全文緊緊的連接在一起烹吵，讓人看完一頁迫不及待看下一頁碉熄。
附件：“故事奶奶”原作《The Old Truck》
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親愛的各位家長，Tyger深深感覺孩子的創(chuàng)造力是無窮無盡的肋拔，歡迎您留言锈津，給出自己的評語。
