寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題（一）：關(guān)于健康話(huà)題的求助信
課標(biāo)解讀
縱觀近幾年的高考，寫(xiě)作題都在課標(biāo)或考試說(shuō)明中列的24個(gè)話(huà)題之內(nèi)。
中學(xué)英語(yǔ)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)24個(gè)話(huà)題項(xiàng)目中的第13個(gè)話(huà)題為Health（健康）裤翩，其內(nèi)容包括以下九個(gè)方面：（1）Eating habits飲食習(xí)慣；（2）Physical fitness and exercise健身與鍛煉；（3）Personal hygiene個(gè)人衛(wèi)生位他；（4）Illnesses（stomachache, headache, flu, cold, etc.）疾病（胃痛产场、頭疼鹅髓、流感、感冒等等）京景；（5）Medication藥物窿冯；（6）Accidents意外事故；（7）Doctors, nurses & hospitals醫(yī)生确徙、護(hù)士和醫(yī)院醒串；（8）Describing problems（parts of the body, pains, etc.）描述問(wèn)題（身體部位、疼痛等等）鄙皇；（9）Medical insurance醫(yī)療保險(xiǎn)芜赌。
命題預(yù)測(cè)
有關(guān)健康方面的寫(xiě)作可能會(huì)出現(xiàn)：中西飲食對(duì)比；養(yǎng)成健康飲食習(xí)慣之前與之后的對(duì)比伴逸；心理健康的重要性缠沈；怎樣實(shí)施急救；學(xué)生對(duì)體重的看法；學(xué)生近視或肥胖的現(xiàn)狀洲愤、成因與預(yù)防颓芭；早餐的重要性；鍛煉與健康柬赐；對(duì)如何保持健康的求助亡问、建議；等等肛宋。
導(dǎo)入：
用Michael Jackson的歌詞“Heal the world,Make it a better place玛界，F(xiàn)oryou and for me and the entire human being.”導(dǎo)入單詞heal，health悼吱，healthy慎框，wealthy，以及unhealthy后添，wreath笨枯，引出有關(guān)健康重要的話(huà)題。
第一部分：有關(guān)健康的話(huà)題
I遇西、閱讀下面材料馅精，在空白處填入適當(dāng)?shù)膬?nèi)容(1個(gè)單詞)或括號(hào)內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。
Everyone wantsto stay healthy and believes that health is better than wealth. It is true 1.__________health is the first step to success. It’s almost impossible to imagine a personchasing his dream without good health. Since health is so important for us, howcan we maintain good health? Here are some useful 2.__________(suggest):
First of all, weshould lead 3.__________ healthy life. Some people love to play cell phones 4.__________read electronic-books before sleep, 5.__________ is absolutely bad for theirhealth. We should remember to turn off the phones 6.__________ sleep.
Besides, we’d beserious about what we eat. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and 7.__________(little) sugar or fat. When we want to eat chocolate or ice-cream, we can havean apple instead. We shouldn’t eat too much meat in one week. What’s more, weshould do exercise every day. There are many exercises for us to choose, suchas swimming, jogging, playing badminton and so on. 8.__________ (do) exercisecan increase the circulation of blood and improve our immune system.
Inconclusion, if we pay close attention to our health, we can avoid 9.__________ (get)sick. We’d try to sleep earlier, eat more fruit and vegetable, drink morewater, and do exercise 10.__________(regular), and then we’ll realize that it’s not that hard to stay in good health.
Keys：1. that 2. suggestions 3. a 4. or 5. which 6. before 7.less 8.Doing 9.getting 10. regularly
II粱檀、短文改錯(cuò)
假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文洲敢。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加茄蚯、刪除或修改压彭。
增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(劃掉渗常。
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線(xiàn),并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞壮不。
注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。
III皱碘、根據(jù)語(yǔ)法填空及短文改錯(cuò)內(nèi)容询一，寫(xiě)出以下短語(yǔ)：
1、保持健康______________________
2癌椿、過(guò)著健康的生活______________________
3健蕊、 對(duì)健康有害______________________
4、認(rèn)真對(duì)待吃的東西______________________
5踢俄、多吃蔬菜水果______________________
6缩功、每天鍛煉______________________
7、游泳_________________
8褪贵、慢跑___________________
9掂之、打羽毛球______________________
10、加速血液循環(huán)______________________
11脆丁、增強(qiáng)免疫系統(tǒng)______________________
12世舰、病得很?chē)?yán)重______________________
13、看病______________________
14槽卫、照顧自己______________________
15跟压、飯后百步走_(dá)_____________________
Keys:
（附： “飯后百步走”的翻譯個(gè)別學(xué)生會(huì)說(shuō)成a hundred steps,需解釋此處“百步”為虛數(shù)。漢語(yǔ)里面很多數(shù)字歼培，比如“三三兩兩”震蒋，可以翻譯成a couple of，具體的數(shù)字不一定要具體翻譯躲庄。再比如最近流行的“三生三世查剖，十里桃花”，就可翻譯成Life after life, blooms over blooms.）
IV噪窘、補(bǔ)充：寫(xiě)作必會(huì)的有關(guān)健康的單詞笋庄、短語(yǔ)、句子
超重overweight
近視倔监、遠(yuǎn)視的near/far sighted
精力旺盛/充沛befull of energy
減肥lose weight
定期鍛煉take regular exercise
對(duì)……有好處be good to
養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣form / develop a good habit
足夠的睡眠enough sleep
自我放松release / relax oneself
緩解壓力reduce pressure
對(duì)…采取積極的態(tài)度take apositive attitude to
保持均衡飲食keep a balanced diet
垃圾食品junk food
(不)健康的飲食習(xí)慣(un)healthy eating habit
be high/rich/low in ...……含量高/豐富/低
physical and mental condition生理和心理狀況
feel weak(well, terrible)感覺(jué)虛弱(健康/很糟)
build up one’sbody /strength增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)
facedifficulty with courage勇于面對(duì)困難
積極參加體育鍛煉takean active part in sports
沒(méi)有什么比保持健康更珍貴的了直砂。Nothing is more precious than to keephealthy.
與健康有關(guān)的諺語(yǔ)
An apple aday keeps the doctor away.一天一蘋(píng)果，醫(yī)生不找我浩习。
Early tobed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.睡得早静暂，起得早，聰明富裕身體好谱秽。
第二部分：
求助信寫(xiě)作必會(huì)的好句型
開(kāi)頭句
1. I am a middle school student and I am writing totell you my problem which has troubled me.
2. I am writing to you to ask whether you could dome a favor.
3. My name is Li Hua and I’m writing this letter toseek your help.
4.洽蛀、我給你寫(xiě)信的原因是我有急事要求助。
The reason why I’m writing to you is that I have something urgent forhelp.
5疟赊、我在……方面有困難辱士，這很困擾我。所以我別無(wú)選擇只能向你求助听绳。
I have difficulty in doing…,which bothers me a lot. I have no choice butto turn to you.
中句
1. I long to do …… well, but I don’t know how, whichmakes me upset.
2. I can’t ……, which worries me a lot.
3. I often feel ……, and I don’t know how it has comeabout.
4. Facing / Faced with so many difficulties, I haveto turn to you for help.
結(jié)尾句
1. I will be very grateful if you could help me…/Iwould appreciate it if you could do me a favor and…
2. I would be grateful if you really give me a hand.
3颂碘、如果你能考慮我的請(qǐng)求，我將不勝感激椅挣。
I would appreciate it if you could take my request into consideration.
寫(xiě)作實(shí)戰(zhàn)：
假定你是李華头岔，是深圳市第二實(shí)驗(yàn)學(xué)校的高二學(xué)生，你注意到學(xué)校近來(lái)出現(xiàn)了一些有損健康的現(xiàn)象：一些學(xué)生花在學(xué)習(xí)上的時(shí)間過(guò)多鼠证，缺乏鍛煉峡竣，眼睛近視；一些學(xué)生過(guò)多地吃垃圾食品量九，變成了胖子适掰；還有個(gè)別學(xué)生抽煙颂碧；等等。你從網(wǎng)上得知Mike Smith是一位健康方面的專(zhuān)家类浪，請(qǐng)給Mike Smith寫(xiě)一封email载城，描述你觀察到的現(xiàn)象，并請(qǐng)求他給你們提出一些關(guān)于如何保持健康的建議费就。
注意：1诉瓦、字?jǐn)?shù)100左右；2力细、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)睬澡，以使行文連貫。
Dear Mr. Mike Smith,
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Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
