中文原文
無(wú)論有何缺陷嫂沉，該試點(diǎn)項(xiàng)目是芬蘭人熱衷社會(huì)實(shí)驗(yàn)的好例子稽寒，參與者將被持續(xù)追蹤十年，以觀察長(zhǎng)期影響趟章。國(guó)際上對(duì)這個(gè)試點(diǎn)項(xiàng)目興趣濃厚杏糙。
自己的譯文
Despite the drawbacks, this trail project is a case showing how Finnish people are keen on social experiment. Participants are going to be tracked for 10 years for long-term effects. International community also show great interests in it.?
經(jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)人原文
Whatever its flaws, the pilot is a good example of the Finnish penchant for social experiments. Participants will be followed for ten years to identify long-term effects. International interest in the pilot programme has been intense.
原文中驚艷到自己的地方
用詞對(duì)比
??penchant
[p?n??n, pent??nt]
[N-SING: N for n/-ing] If someone has a penchant for something, they have a special liking for it or a tendency to do it.[FORMAL]
//...a stylish woman with a penchant for dark glasses...
He had a penchant for playing jokes on people.
《經(jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)人》這里用了一個(gè)penchant來(lái)表達(dá)“芬蘭人的熱衷”，比自己的后置現(xiàn)在分詞引導(dǎo)的從句簡(jiǎn)潔很多蚓土。
??這里的“追蹤”搔啊，明顯用follow更合適An event, activity, or period of time thatfollowsa particular thing happens or comes after that thing, at a later time（syn: come after)。
??identify是我自己在造句的時(shí)候沒有想到的北戏，但明顯有了identify (If you identify something, you discover or notice its existence.)這個(gè)詞负芋，句意表達(dá)得更加完整了，比簡(jiǎn)單一個(gè)介詞for意思更明確嗜愈。
自己用這個(gè)表達(dá)造的句子
Whatever its flaws, the box office for Wolf Warrior 2 is a good example of the Chinese penchant for entertaining action movies. Excelling in delivering adrenaline charged, brilliantly choreographed, and stunt filled action, WW2 has ranked the top at box office in its home territory, overtaking Stephen Chow’s The Mermaid.?
