大家好台夺!第一期“每周一段”的段落選自《新概念英語(yǔ)》第 3 冊(cè)第 12 課 Life on a desert island(《荒島生活》)薄啥》锔玻《新概念英語(yǔ)》教材很經(jīng)典,不少文章值得背誦蒲凶、精學(xué)甚至仿寫。
仿寫需要有意識(shí)地去做拆内,先理解一段話的意思旋圆,然后梳理清楚結(jié)構(gòu)(即每句話之間的關(guān)系),然后從單個(gè)句子開始臨摹麸恍,最后是寫作結(jié)構(gòu)的臨摹灵巧。
一、文本
Most of us have formed an unrealistic picture of life on a desert island. We sometimes imagine a desert island to be a sort of paradise where the sun always shines. Life there is simple and good. Ripe fruit falls from the trees and you never have to work. The other side of the picture is quite the opposite. Life on a desert island is wretched. You either starve to death or live like Robinson Crusoe, waiting for a boat which never comes. Perhaps there is an element of truth in both these pictures, but few of us have had the opportunity to find out.
譯文:
我們?cè)S多人對(duì)于荒島生活有一種不切實(shí)際的想法抹沪。我們有時(shí)想象荒島是陽(yáng)光終日普照的天堂刻肄。在那里,生活簡(jiǎn)單又美好融欧。成熟的水果從樹上掉下來(lái)敏弃,人們根本無(wú)需勞動(dòng)。另一種想法恰恰相反蹬癌,認(rèn)為荒島生活很可怕权她,要么餓死,要么像魯濱孫那樣逝薪,天天盼船來(lái)隅要,卻總沒(méi)見船影。也許董济,這兩種好像都有可信之處步清。但很少有人能有機(jī)會(huì)去弄個(gè)究竟。
二虏肾、段落解讀
這是文章的第一段廓啊。這段自成一體,表達(dá)意思完整封豪,可以作為一個(gè)整體來(lái)學(xué)習(xí)谴轮。這段語(yǔ)言比較簡(jiǎn)單,如能背下吹埠,可在口語(yǔ)和寫作中靈活使用第步。從寫作的角度看疮装,這段話簡(jiǎn)要、完整地寫了一件事情的兩面性粘都,對(duì)基礎(chǔ)議論文寫作有極大的參考價(jià)值廓推。
三、句子學(xué)習(xí)
我們主要通過(guò)“臨摹”和“背誦”的方式精學(xué)一段話翩隧。
臨姆埂:提煉句型+造句
臨摹句子 1:Most of us have formed an unrealistic picture of life on a desert island.
提煉句型:X have formed an unrealistic picture of Y.(注意:如果主語(yǔ)是單數(shù),動(dòng)詞要變?yōu)椤癶as”堆生。)
造句示范:
a) Many people have formed an unrealistic picture of life abroad.(場(chǎng)景:很多人會(huì)覺(jué)得“國(guó)外比國(guó)內(nèi)的月亮圓”专缠。)
b) Many people have formed an unrealistic picture of work at state-owned companies.
c) Many people from the countryside have formed an unrealistic picture of life in big cities/megacities/metropolises.
臨摹句子 2:We sometimes imagine a desert island to be a sort of paradise where the sun always shines.
提煉句型:X imagine Y to be Z. (注意:如果主語(yǔ)是單數(shù),動(dòng)詞要變?yōu)椤癷magines”顽频。)
造句示范:
a) People sometimes/frequently imagine life abroad to be relaxed, comfortable, and free from trouble.
b) People imagine work at state-owned companies to be easy and stress-free.
c) People from rural areas imagine urban life to be full of excitement/exuberance, comfort, and convenience.
背誦句子
a) The other side of the picture is quite the opposite.
b) There is an element of truth in both these pictures.?
四藤肢、段落仿寫
Version A:
Most of us have formed an unrealistic picture of growing up in a well-off family. We sometimes imagine a rich family to be a sort of heaven where all desires are satisfied. Life there is happy and carefree. Servants and chauffeurs are always there for you. The other side of the picture is quite the opposite. Children have to work harder than their peers to live up to their family's expectations or prove that they are competent not because they were born with silver spoons in their mouths, but because they are hard-working. For those having extremely wealthy parents, they dream of having the same amount of privacy as normal children. Perhaps there is an element of truth in both these pictures, but few of us have had the opportunity to find out.
Version B:
Many people have formed an unrealistic picture of life abroad. They often imagine life in a foreign land to be relaxed, comfortable, and free from trouble: the houses are larger, the lawns greener, streets better lit, cars cheaper, and parking lots more spacious. Yet the other side of the picture is quite the opposite. Living abroad can be challenging/daunting. To blend in the local culture, you need to speak the language well, learn how to socialize with people from different backgrounds and with diverse views, and deal with homesickness. Perhaps there is an element of truth in both these pictures, and whether to migrate to another country is purely a personal choice.
五、作業(yè)
句型1:X have formed an unrealistic picture of Y.
造句1:Most of us have formed an unrealistic picture of marriage.?
造句2:Most of us have formed an unrealistic picture of living in a big city.
造句3:Most of us have formed an unrealistic picture of being rich.
造句4:Most of us have formed an unrealistic picture of starting one's own business.
造句5:Most of us have formed an unrealistic picture of going out for a holiday.?
句型2:X imagine Y to be Z
造句1:We sometimes imagine a marriage to be a sort of fairy tale where the prince and princess always live together happily.
造句2:We sometimes imagine living in a big city to be colorful and rich.
造句3:We sometimes imagine being rich to be free and independent.
造句4:We sometimes imagine starting one's own business to be doing what you like and making a lot of money.
造句:5:We sometimes imagine going out for a holiday to be relaxed and interesting糯景。
段落仿寫:
Most of us have formed an unrealistic picture of starting one's own business.We sometimes imagine starting one's own business to be doing what you like and making a lot of money. We are in charge of our own work and have more free time. No one will force us to do anything. The other side of the picture is quite the opposite. Starting one's own business is wretched. You have a great pressure to develop your own career. You will push yourself to work harder, because if you fail, not only you will lose initial funds but also can't make ends meet. Perhaps there is an element of truth in both these pictures, but few of us have had the opportunity to find out.?