Topic:
Many People that social networking sites(like Facebook) have had a negative impact on individuals and society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement???
Introduction:贊同優(yōu)點(diǎn)的
So popular are social networking site, for instance Facebook, that almost every single individual are engaged with them on a daily basis. However, despite the potential risks they pose, they exert more beneficial effects on individuals and society.
社交網(wǎng)站是如此的流行以至于
so...that 倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)
support1:
With regard to individuals, the exposure to these social network extends opportunities to/of learning for different people regardless of geographical location ,cultural background and age.
Compared with traditional education that people are confined to specific knowledge蛾洛， learning through networking site enable them to interact with each other. This is a significant way for them to acquire knowledge and therefore to broaden their horizon. For adult, social networking sites is also a indispensable tool for workplace learning through which employees can improve their expertise &in a flexible way.
support2:
concession:
Rather than individual people taking part in local community, they instead tend to spend more time communicating online. Consequently, the relationship between people became diluted., Furthermore,……
Conclusion：
In conclusion, detrimental as social networking sites appear to be in some aspects ,they do benefit the general society educationally and …….
have a detrimental effect on
be confined to 局限于
on a daily basis==everyday
be engaged in sports 參加活動(dòng)
be engaged with 忙碌于际乘；從事
pose 造成（威脅、問(wèn)題等)
With regard to 關(guān)于至于
specific 具體的; 明確的; 特種的
specifically 特意的
acquire 學(xué)到; 獲得
indispensable 不可或缺
He would rather beg in the streets than get money in such dishonest way．他寧愿在街上乞討,也不愿以這種不正當(dāng)手段賺錢.
dilute [da??lu:t] 稀釋瞳遍，沖淡 v
furthermore 此外
