寫(xiě)作教學(xué)_逐字版

lead in

話題導(dǎo)入,so today we are going to learn about applications.

Pre-writing

Ok everyone look at the passage,I will read it for the first time and you should tell me what’s the main idea of the passage,now here we go!So everyone let’s read the passage for the second time ,then you should tell me,if you want to apply for the job to write an application,how can you write it ?here we go!引導(dǎo)學(xué)生一起分析殴穴,I totally agree with you ,you are so creative.so,總結(jié)螟凭。

Now we have known the format,shall we finish the letter?Ok ten minutes for you.After writing,I will invite some of you to come here and share your work.

While writing

Now you can start your writing,if you need any help,please let me know.I should also remind you that choose the right sentence form in writing,and pay attention to the application form.Look this is the structure of application,first is ,then,after that ,next,finally part is signature.Am I clear?Great!Now you have 15 minutes to write.Let’s go!
You can use the key words you wrote down just now.

Post-writing

Ok time is up .I noticed that all of you have wrote carefully and seriously,have you finished your letter?very good ,this time you can check the letter and edit it by your self first ,clear?begin ! Can you find your mistakes?If no you can exchange your letter in your groups and correct mistakes,your group can correct your mistakes and give you some useful suggestions or opinions to you 4students will be one group .Am I clear? 3minuts ,here we go !We will give him some comments on it ,ok ?Writing ability has improved a lot .I found your handwriting is better than before.
Ok time is up,have you finished writing?Oh I see all of you kodding your head.well done.now change your work with your deskmate,please go through your desk mates work to help him/her check the spelling and grammar ,Ok,all done?wonderful .Then who’d like to show your work for us?Nancy you are so brave ,can you read your composition for us loudly?Excellent.thank you —-復(fù)述內(nèi)容勘高,評(píng)價(jià)You can use some complex sentences and there is no mistake in grammar.You set a good example for us ,who want to challenge her ?your composition is clear and logical very good and your pronunciation is beautiful,thank you .The last opportunity,who wants to share?Yes so brilliant.

Summary and Homework

Yes,today we learned how to write an application.The homework is to learn an application.
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