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如何寫好讀后續(xù)寫的開頭
1. 使用adv.（副詞/短語）
1)Carefully, he stepped over all the broken glass.
2)Joyfully he skipped up the street.
3)But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest.
2. 使用adj.(形容詞/短語)
4)Curious to know what was inside, he tiptoed into the dark cave.
5)Unable to say a word, he was rooted to the spot.
6)But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Desperate and hopeless, Jane knelt down, tears streaming down her face.
7)It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance. （as的倒裝）
8)Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.
3.非謂語尤其是分詞形式 (-ing/–ed )
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Feeling disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for another night.
4.連詞 （時間線索明顯的時候常用）
5.介詞短語 （時間線索照筑、地點線索）
6.對話 “Hold on tight!” My father yelled.
7.動作/神態(tài)/心理活動等
8.聲音 BOOM, CRASH! The wind was howling outside of my house.
9.提問 eg: Have you ever been on a self-driving trip? Let me tell you an exciting trip my family took this summer.
如何推動故事情節(jié)發(fā)展
方法1. 使用環(huán)境描寫增加不確定性
充分利用環(huán)境描寫可以起到烘托故事高潮的作用吹截。當人物在碰到困難時候瘦陈，我們往往要加大筆墨來描寫故事環(huán)境的險惡，恐怖和不安波俄，襯托角色的內心晨逝，從而推動故事情節(jié)到高潮。
例1：Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest(黑暗). Even worse, the temperature suddenly dropped dramatically. (寒冷）
例2：It didn’t take long for the forest to be enveloped in darkness（黑暗）. Her rasping breath steamed（寒冷） in the moonlight and her throat was parched from thirst.
方法2. 放大內心沖突
放大內心沖突（角色的內心斗爭）有助于建立緊張和不確定的時刻懦铺。
2016年10月浙江高考： All the fantastic memory crowded in and she couldn't help crying, "Hadn't I quarrelled with Tom, walked away and climbed to the high place, I wouldn't be trapped in this awful place, confronted with the danger of dying.” She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes.
夫婦爭吵---獨自行走---荒野走散---夜色漸黑---獨處森林---陰森恐怖---后悔莫及（內心沖突的刻畫）內心獨白
